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AJLee7385

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can anyone play the casey into arc for some reason twine is being wired even though ive copied and pasted like 15 time something wired going on with the hyper links
 

AJLee7385

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but i should be seing this

[[Casey Kisses Trans Door On Left Dad Bad End]]

[[Casey Kisses Trans Door On Right Mom]] Coming soon

[[Casey Kisses Trans Door In Middle Dakota]]

[[Casey Kisses Trans None of the Above Save Your Own Ass]]

[[Cassey Kisses Trans Hidden Door Perfect Path]]
 

Warsteel

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Ty guys I am trying like I said I am using a spelling program but hey as I go along if anyone doesn't mind trying to help with my spelling I would appreciate it.
Spelling programs are ok, but useless for many of the common errors non-native English people make. Loose instead of lose, your instead of you're, to instead of too, there in place of their and many more simply aren't picked up by spell checkers because both are real words in English. There is no substitute for having a native speaker go over your work to point out the mistakes and other wonky sentence structure.
 

FloridaNed

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Does anyone have a larger picture of the blonde woman in the toga in the 9th game preview picture? And/or the raven-haired woman in the burgundy dress in the 10th picture?
 

AJLee7385

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ok guys the request to update hasn't posted to Op yet and if doesn't buy tomorrow ill post new link here. but right now im tired and need some sleep. I just update the update link with new one to add new stuff I wrote since update request was made but there's something there that to me seems important enough to mention.

I do not know the policy of Personal opinions in games is but the new link contains something I just wanted give people a heads up on.

There Are two what I think are really long pages on new content on Taylor Sands Door Try to Save your Entire Family Perfect Path I didn't finish it yet but Im exhausted need some sleep.

That Particular Path is the one I intended to Entirely Focus on The parents being Spies and All the Characters At Least Starting ones Are CIA Agents. Anyone as I was writing Something Happened and It played out a certain way that may not be what other people feel. Tracey and Dakota Make A jab about Gun control. Now I want everyone to know I'm not trying to force my opinions on anyone and I don't know the policy but like I said as I was writing just played out that way and was not intended. I think it works for the story but As soon as I wrote It I felt I needed to explain what I did So peps don't get mad. Forgive me I really Try to avoid doing things like that but this felt important enough to mention. to me anyway.
 
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AJLee7385

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ok guys finished the rest of story I started last night heres version 0.7



I will not be posting update 0.8 until I finish intro sex scenes for every single one of those Taylor sand choices. but that might mean there will be a delay because may take so time to write.
 

AJLee7385

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lol i know I shouldn't let it bother me but I just got a bad review and the only review I have after A moth should I be worried.
 

AJLee7385

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I'm not mad I'm really not i'ts just really hard for me to focus on one thing at a time. My imagination isn't unlimited yeah I write stuff but I can't give you guys options for every single piece of text I write I just can't. I'm Trying to finish all intro character arch first which is why I ad stuff every few days. I'm sorry just that review has me bummed.
 

Trasher2018

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Maybe add the Kinetic novel tag?

I am currently testing twine myself ... its quite a bit of work ^^
I finished my first day (ok 4/5 of it) and I am drowned in variables and <<if>> because there are ~2,5 different routes to take... that ramps up stuff fast and gets dirty :p - I crave for choices, so this is not my cup of tea, but I wish you luck :)
 

AJLee7385

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OK i know 65 of you like this but I really need people to start talking. After yesterday, I had A really hard time focusing still am. It's not just the bad review that's bothering me. it's the facet that I'm trying really hard to get you guys stuff. I'm not like a lot of you I'm trying to give you choices but I fell like all i hear is not good enough not enough choices. I tried my hand at the codeing and the what if's I just can't do it. It's kinds of bothering me I put out 5-10 pages of stuff every few days. Yet people are like there not enough. Making a game like this isn't easy especially when you can't code and do the if statements so right now kinda feeling unappreciated. I try to update you guys on where i am at but still feels like its not enough. I haven't even been able to play the games I like cause I'm trying to make this game for you guys and I can't even get a thank you for trying.

so im sorry i have to put it this way but if you guys really want me to keep going then i need people to start giving me a reason to otherwise i'm goonna make one last upload the twine stuff and backups and let someone else who thinks they do a better job handle it. I really dont wanna see this game die.
 
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AJLee7385

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i currenting rewatching twine intro videos to see if i can lean something new. I'm not ready to give up just put too much work into this to chicken out again
 
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Hey whats up my man.
I read that you kinda have a dilemma with the opinions and stuff on your game so I thought fuck it i'll give this guy mine as well.
I love the idea! Like seriously the idea of conflict between technology and magic doesnt only work well in movies but apparently also in porngames haha.
I really enjoy your writing and the style that you use. If you ask me I'd be really happy if you would keep up the great work. It's games like yours that even make me scroll through this platform.
If theres anything I could do to help you hmu anytime :)

Quick sidenote tho, the mega link dont work for the version 0.07, says the file is not available anymore
 
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