Gibberish666

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I was excited to see an update but from the last pages of this thread, I'm kinda nervous. Is it that bad ?
IMO, it's not really that bad at all.
Don't get as emotionally invested in it as some of the other guys and you'll be fine. It's just a porn game after all.
 
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Okay daem it was good... cliffhanger ending till next update to fill it in...Laura saying "come on in" for the last dialogue for this update(who she was inviting while hypnotising 3 ppls including mc) what's going to happen now isn't hypnotising a permanent mark for the sizes and as well as personality too maybe if so then the only solution to fix all of this is to smash the pocket watch to the ground which maybe reset everything back to zero and when I say everything I mean everything other than the memories which is not affected by pocket watch of course I guess a good way to end all of this and the series itself because nothing lasts forever or if they all want continuation then mc have to have much much higher will to go against the order of Laura's hypnosis what I meant to say is really high aversion to never submit to anyone and yeah well take control of It once again and maybe overwrite the hypnosis by re-hypnotising Laura that she ia not going to be able to defy mc ever again and is going to be the good little house slut for the mc for the rest of her life's...she atleast deserve this much after creating all of that tension once again I say that's just the least punishment she deserve...haha.
 
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When is the poll for best girl? Also why said best girl is just a 3 (more like 2x1 vs 1) horses race between Leah, Ashley and Claire?
 

juan palote

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I am in the Laura/Grace ending and i dont like how the MC is being such an idiot.

Even Brittany realized who has the Watch and the MC still runs around without a fucking clue.

Its really anticlimatic and really badly designed to make the MC such a stupid guy that cant even see a mountain in front of his face.

Not to mention turning the MC into a sex toy for a bitch isnt very nice for the players
 
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Spfjolietjake

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Is there any way to avoid the ending of this version. In my humble opinion Laura is the least interesting character so I'd like to avoid the cruise ending if possible.
I believe the only way to avoid the cruise ending is to stop playing until the other endings are released or play a pre cruise update version of the VN. I, of course, could be mistaken
 
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Patreon update on the 7th.

Hey guys!

Thought I'd keep you updated while Jenn pole dances for you (assuming the video is still there and YouTube hasn't taken it down yet for showing that partial nip).

I've just about finished writing Episode 11 and will start animating it tonight.

I'm trying to balance making the episode as great as I can with not spending too much time on it so I don't keep you guys waiting any longer.

Animations usually take about a week, but I'm afraid I also have in-laws over, so... I'll do my best.

I'm going to take a break off the character renders after tomorrow so I can focus on finishing the episode. I'll start up with Ashley renders when it's finished.

I don't want to spend too much time talking about the episode itself because I'll start throwing spoilers around, but the main reason it's taken longer to write is in keeping up with the four different endings in Episode 10, along with adding a new ending where you can avoid getting hypnotized.

The one spoiler I will give is... no cliffhanger.
 

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Its blatantly stupid that the first 4 fucking endings end up with you being hypnotized and being nothing more than a fucktoy.

I loved the game untill i started reaching the endings, i cant grasp why Laura needed 4 endings, when she isnt the main character in the game, not even the main LI.

Its even too much for the main LI to get 4 endings before anyone else gets a single one...

Its amazing how the Dev being biased on one character can screw up a game so much.
 

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Its blatantly stupid that the first 4 fucking endings end up with you being hypnotized and being nothing more than a fucktoy.

I loved the game untill i started reaching the endings, i cant grasp why Laura needed 4 endings, when she isnt the main character in the game, not even the main LI.

Its even too much for the main LI to get 4 endings before anyone else gets a single one...

Its amazing how the Dev being biased on one character can screw up a game so much.
What I found to be out of this world stupid, is the it NEVER dawned on the MC to use the watch to its full capacity, like Laura did...He never thought to himself, gee, I better give some instructions to never betray me. A 10 year old child would realize more potential with the watch than the MC EVER did.
And yea, why the Dev decided on the Laura route for FOUR endings is also, out of this world stupid. Shame, I kept checking this out in hopes the MC would be a bit more devious, or take more control...but no...shame, a real shame.
 

Funky-Munky

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Its blatantly stupid that the first 4 fucking endings end up with you being hypnotized and being nothing more than a fucktoy.

I loved the game untill i started reaching the endings, i cant grasp why Laura needed 4 endings, when she isnt the main character in the game, not even the main LI.

Its even too much for the main LI to get 4 endings before anyone else gets a single one...

Its amazing how the Dev being biased on one character can screw up a game so much.

How do you know how many endings are planned for the other characters? Crystal ball? This could be all of Laura's ends for all you know, and the rest will focus on others. Or there may be 8 endings each. No one but the dev knows what's planned...

Just rein it in a little - when the game is actually all complete, you can make wild criticisms and judge it accordingly like this all you want. It's not even half finished....
 

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Laura doesn't have four endings. She has two. The four endings he was referring to in his update were the four possible chapter breaks between chapters 10 and 11. We've seen three of those, but he's adding a fourth where protag-kun doesn't get hypnotized like an idiot.

Is there any way to avoid the ending of this version. In my humble opinion Laura is the least interesting character so I'd like to avoid the cruise ending if possible.
Just don't agree to be Laura's boyfriend and you won't trigger the cruise ending. You might consider waiting for the next update since that will include a less frustrating chapter break. Either way, the cruise ending is purely optional.
 
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Just don't agree to be Laura's boyfriend and you won't trigger the cruise ending. You might consider waiting for the next update since that will include a less frustrating chapter break. Either way, the cruise ending is purely optional.
I did that, MC still wound up under Laura's control...it happened in a different way, but end result was MC being a slave for Laura. As far as I know, all available endings are MC turning into a slave.
 

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How do you know how many endings are planned for the other characters? Crystal ball? This could be all of Laura's ends for all you know, and the rest will focus on others. Or there may be 8 endings each. No one but the dev knows what's planned...

Just rein it in a little - when the game is actually all complete, you can make wild criticisms and judge it accordingly like this all you want. It's not even half finished....
It doesnt matter how many are planned, i said its stupid that the FIRST 4 endings are for the same character.

I dont need to wait untill the game is completed to know which the FIRST 4 ENDINGS were for.
 

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Laura doesn't have four endings. She has two. The four endings he was referring to in his update were the four possible chapter breaks between chapters 10 and 11. We've seen three of those, but he's adding a fourth where protag-kun doesn't get hypnotized like an idiot.



Just don't agree to be Laura's boyfriend and you won't trigger the cruise ending. You might consider waiting for the next update since that will include a less frustrating chapter break. Either way, the cruise ending is purely optional.
She has 4 paths that lead to 3 endings, if you want to be more precise.

The three endings would be:
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Still stupid to make 4 paths leading to 3 endings, all for the same character
 
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Funky-Munky

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It doesnt matter how many are planned, i said its stupid that the FIRST 4 endings are for the same character.

I dont need to wait untill the game is completed to know which the FIRST 4 ENDINGS were for.
Who cares if they're first? Leah had the very first ending by the way; didn't hear anyone whine about playing favourites there...

He's finishing off a bunch of early endings, so what? You said:

Its amazing how the Dev being biased on one character can screw up a game so much.
How exactly does tying off some early ends screw up the game? FFS, they get roasted if they leave unfinished content, and they get roasted if they complete early paths. How about letting them write the damn game before condemning it half-finished?

This place is unbelievable. A game doesn't go exactly the way they'd like and people start throwing furniture...
 

juan palote

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Who cares if they're first? Leah had the very first ending by the way; didn't hear anyone whine about playing favourites there...

He's finishing off a bunch of early endings, so what? You said:



How exactly does tying off some early ends screw up the game? FFS, they get roasted if they leave unfinished content, and they get roasted if they complete early paths. How about letting them write the damn game before condemning it half-finished?

This place is unbelievable. A game doesn't go exactly the way they'd like and people start throwing furniture...
Thats the issue, he is finishing a bunch of endings and instead of doing varied one, they all go to the same character.

And yes, i forgot about the early Leah ending, my bad there.

ABout how some early ends can screw the game, simple, you force everyone into those endings, even if they dont want to go there, you dont have any path that stays open, every path you take ends with you being Laura's slave. And that of course screws a game.

This isnt about a game going exatly the way anyone likes, i am not telling the Dev how those endings should be, but forcing the same character ending down your throat is a bad design choice.

Do you want to have one ending where you end up as Laura's slave, fine, great, but then start making other endings, for other characters, where you end up in different positions, because forcing your players into that is bad.
 

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Thats the issue, he is finishing a bunch of endings and instead of doing varied one, they all go to the same character.

And yes, i forgot about the early Leah ending, my bad there.

ABout how some early ends can screw the game, simple, you force everyone into those endings, even if they dont want to go there, you dont have any path that stays open, every path you take ends with you being Laura's slave. And that of course screws a game.

This isnt about a game going exatly the way anyone likes, i am not telling the Dev how those endings should be, but forcing the same character ending down your throat is a bad design choice.

Do you want to have one ending where you end up as Laura's slave, fine, great, but then start making other endings, for other characters, where you end up in different positions, because forcing your players into that is bad.

The game's not even HALF FINISHED. Of COURSE there will be other endings for other characters. They can only put out so much content per month. No one is forcing you to play the Laura ends for crying out loud...
 

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We are spoiled a lot on this forum. So many visual novels have great choices and tick off fetishes and likes. Even though it has choices for us its still a novel. The dev chose to get these endings out of the way.

That led to so much griping. I, for one, have faith that the next endings I will enjoy. I just wish the griping wouldn't be so long winded and frequent.

Us following this thread know that a lot of us are not happy with the cruise/laura endings. So let's just see what the future holds and keep the Jerry springer behavior in Florida where it belongs :p
 
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