VN Ren'Py Single Again [v1.23] [Clever name games]

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Ayhsel

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While that depends's on the novel legal structure, I don't see in a regular setting how he would be able to get a piece. Abigail is 18+ and the property was inherited from her mother and husband, so the father should have not claimed on it.

Again, not a lawyer and in a novel you can make any inheritance law to get anything, but as a reason to include Abigail's father sounds weak plot to me.

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I'm loving this game, the game is very captivating, and the sexual content is not too appealing. I like appealing sexual content, but I love a story of incest that develops slowly. (Please Dev-San, make it possible for Frank to fuck Lilith)
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First, kudos for your awesome taste in women as shown in Liara's image. She remains one of my most beloved characters. I could write several paragraphs of how much I love her. But let us not digress.
Second, of course MC will be able to fuck her. But given the pace of the novel, which I love, it will not happen soon. She is just slowly starting to open up to him. Moreover, MC himself has to accept he wants to do his daughters.

I really think this novel has a lot to teach to a lot of other devs that are "banging their family" as if every female is a hungry cum vampire that would not survive without MC's seed. I like how MC is not the overall super Alpha which makes any female faint at the simple touch of his god gifted fingers. Instead, he is a nice guy trying to be a good father to all his daughters, which are dealing with their own problems. When did the rule become the exception, where unless MC can cock-hypnotize any woman he is considered "beta"? Or worse, as one comment said, that he is the biggest beta just because his daughters are not blood related.
 
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Seems the dev has at least done some surface level research on the law (or has been divorced) to get the divorce scene right so i'm guessing they would know at 18+ with no lifetime contact and parental rights belonging to the man that was married to her mother, the biological dad has no legal claim on anything.

I have no idea what the story reason is for bringing him in but it just seems to be drama for the sake of adding drama at the moment.

He can't do anything, he has no rights to anything nor do her mothers family so I have no idea what the dev could be planning.

Could be he wants money but it remains to be seen. I still have my money on just for the sake of drama.
 
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Yep, drama.
Could be that Abby wants to meet him after knowing the truth who the biological father is.
But her other sisters will be looking out for her so that she doesn't make dumb things... maybe.
 
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Avaron1974 said:
I have no idea what the story reason is for bringing him in but it just seems to be drama for the sake of adding drama at the moment.
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HorizonD said:
Yep, drama.
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For Abigail, her unknown father and sexual awakening.
For Lilith, her boyfriend and her daddy issues.

What is Rebecca's drama then? She has already accepted her daddy issues and is actively working in seducing MC. So what is her subplot about? Did I miss anything?
 
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Ayhsel said:
For Abigail, her unknown father and sexual awakening.
For Lilith, her boyfriend and her daddy issues.

What is Rebecca's drama then? She has already accepted her daddy issues and is actively working in seducing MC. So what is her subplot about? Did I miss anything?
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I think Rebecca's role in the story is not to have the drama, and if it comes I probably would be something to do with the fact that her father was around to fuck her mom but not to be in her life, but my guess is that she already knows and was the one that called the MC to catch Shannon on the act otherwise I really don't know, she doesn't have a source for drama as of now.
 
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Hm, maybe she fell in love/lust with the MC but held herself back and now after the divorce, she has no reason to hold back.
You could say this also a daddy issue.

Honestly, I have no idea what her drama is but her full-on attack on MC is a bit irritating.
I'm sure the Dev will tell us at some point. ^^
 
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HorizonD said:
Hm, maybe she fell in love/lust with the MC but held herself back and now after the divorce, she has no reason to hold back.
You could say this also a daddy issue.

Honestly, I have no idea what her drama is but her full-on attack on MC is a bit irritating.
I'm sure the Dev will tell us at some point. ^^
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I'll respectfully disagree with the statement in bold, but yeah, we have to wait and see,
 
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I love that girl.
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Oh no, not annoying, irritating (is that the same? lol language barrier).
It's funny how she is yanking his chain all the time but MC has real trouble atm to accept her intentions.
 
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HorizonD said:
Oh no, not annoying, irritating (is that the same? lol language barrier).
It's funny how she is yanking his chain all the time but MC has real trouble atm to accept her intentions.
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Hahah for me they were the same thing but according so some google results:

is that annoy is a feeling of discomfort or vexation caused by what one dislikes while irritation is the act of irritating, or exciting, or the state of being irritated; excitement; stimulation, usually of an undue and uncomfortable kind; especially, excitement of anger or passion; provocation; annoyance; anger.

I still don't see the difference, though.
 
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Not a bad game storywise, but boy all that playtime and and build up with characters and the only one you get some action with is a bi girl and a dream pornstar? Kinda dissapointing really :( But yeah coming back in a few updates because Becca is a real good kind of crazy girl ^^
 
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Maybe 'Abby's biological father' it's not a simple drama and there is still a good story to tell.

My theory about Abby's biological father:
Maybe this guy was Shannon's tool all those years ago. Maybe Shannon made an "arrangement" with him to be Jessica's 'fake' boyfriend. Why did she do that? Well, maybe Shannon just wanted Jessica out of the picture because she was interested in MC at that time. Or maybe she just wanted to screw Jessica over...

But when Jessica became pregnant, this guy obviously freaked out and ran away because he didn't want a child out of this 'fake' relationship.

Why does he try to contact his biological daughter NOW tho...
Who knows... maybe he regrets what he did all those years ago and tries to contact his biological daughter to make it right. Or... maybe he is still Shannon's tool to bring chaos to MC's life (maybe it's Shannon who gave him MC's phone number). Why would Shannon do that tho?

Well, both her own biological daughters don't like her much, don't listen to her, fight with her... and maybe Shannon blames MC for that. She can't abmit her own fault so she blames MC for everything, so she punished MC... by cheating on him. But after MC broke up with her, she has such a big Ego that she can't accept that MC could find happiness again in his life. So she continues to screw him over, and Abby's biological father is the latest trick she found.
 
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In playing this the second time and trying out some of the creepier options, I caught a story glitch. When the MC sneaks up the stairs to check on his daughter (who is in the shower), when he sees her in the shower he "bumped into the railing" which causes the daughter to hear him and freak out. The only problem with that is ... the stairs have no railing.
 
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Hmm, is there something wrong with game paths? After talking to Lilith in her workplace I was supposed to go to date with Becca but only thing I got was black screen with text 'five hours later' and then I'm at home. i tried alternating my previous choices but that didn't help.
Also my saves were gone so I had to play this again from the start.

Edit: Ah I see now. I played further and saw that date was at the next day.
Line "...I guess I could go see if Rebecca wants to go out for lunch with me..."
made me think that was the date they were planning, but that was just usual lunch, too insignificant to be shown.
 
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