Ren'Py Abandoned MOTDH: The new beginning [v0.1] [ManneredGentleman]

Jonah Arkon

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this black woman with big tits:love: looks nice, aham aham i liked...... but its a v0.1, i will pass for now keep going.
ya but some major reconstruction work on the makeup and face would help. just a humble suggestions.:)
 

Jonah Arkon

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The girl in the orange looks like Rod Stewart, and the dude at the end looks like Craig Robinson.
hmm really don't see it, however the black chick might look like Tyson to others, but in my humbble opinoin looks like JJ from Good time just heavier. OMG nightmares start tonight. roflao
 
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Fear375

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Emma Watson, African American woman, John Lennon, and even a Chinese woman. Wonderful company! Now the main thing is to avoid accidents. And in General - memorable models, a good list of tags, interesting scenes. Thanks to the author!
 

Wicked Garden

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I'm a total beginner, so I'm learning with every step I make in art or programming, even after 0.1 I've learned a lot about how renders can be better... Sadly I'm working on a laptop, with a basic GPU, so I'm quite limited...

hopefully, everything gets better over time...
Okay in that case then keep making strives to improve and best of luck to you.
 

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From the pic above, from left to right, we have a weird dude, with a scrunched face, a cute transgirl, a cute and tall transgirl, an Asian transgirl and finally a woman straight of of National Geographic 1975ish.

I'll give it a go. Especially for the 2 cute transgirls. :p
 

FreshRevenge

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Few things I would change. Models look good beside the black woman. Just google beautiful black women and you will see women do not look like this. I want to turn it off and get back to playing Balder's Gate 3. I would look at changing her a bit in the face. Desktop Screenshot 2020.10.16 - 10.20.36.55.png

Second change the Landlady name to something else. If you live with someone, you don't call them landlady even if she is the owner of the apartment or house that you live in. I get the whole Patreon rules about incest, but as long you don't have her called mother, you should be fine. For some reason she looks like a Patricia.

Good models. I will see where this goes.
 

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What use is an adult game (i.e., a game for fapping) if the characters aren't even remotely attractive?
Well, sometimes there's a story. Most times, there's not and not all of us are here to 'fap'. But, this... game(?), I doubt there's a story and as you have so eloquently put it, I don't see this as 'fap material'. Ahahaha
 

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The sequel for the game called Malformation of the desired heaven
I'm sorry, but I can't let this go, Malformation of the desired heaven was released first, but was the "prequel for the upcoming game" (as per it's changelog), and MOTDH: The new beginning, the sequel (as per the description), is that game? :unsure:

That isn't how it works.

1) A prequel is not released first, a prequel proceeds an existing story. This is just Part 1 & 2 no need for all this farting about.
2) What the fuck does "Malformation of the desired heaven" even mean?
3) And abbreviating the main game, no idea what that is about.

I'm sorry, but this is so abstruse. It's a pass from me.

Best of luck with the game.
 
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What use is an adult game (i.e., a game for fapping) if the characters aren't even remotely attractive?
It depends, for everyone attractiveness means something else... For example i am getting sick and tired of "bombshells", they were ok for a while, until they were a few, but if every game nowadays shows milf which you would "never" meet in real life, that gives me an idea to make something different...

And that doesn't mean, the story progress will not have an impact on the girls, how they're willing to change their looks/habits...

I think it's just a point of view, what makes one horny... Some like fake bodies, monsters, bestiality, NTR etc.

Let's see where this goes...
 
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Second change the Landlady name to something else. If you live with someone, you don't call them landlady even if she is the owner of the apartment or house that you live in. I get the whole Patreon rules about incest, but as long you don't have her called mother, you should be fine. For some reason she looks like a Patricia.
Yeah I was thinking about it... It really sounds awful. I will figure out something...