- May 18, 2020
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As I said above, I don't like the character, but admit she has more road to walk so that could change. However, asking someone to remove their biases is a bit unrealistic, especially when you're writing primarily a story about (fantasy) racial prejudice and subjugation in a (fantasy) modern world. "Well-meaning narcissist" is an archetype that shows up often in these sorts of stories, and in real life, and it can be very difficult for me to see them in any light beyond contempt. Is this perfectly logical? Not at all, but it is how I feel.Again, I don't know how many times I have to say this, leave your biases at the door please. Whatever this impression of an SJW tumblr troll grifter you think I'm making is incorrect. She's not here to cancel your hot sauce, she's here to fight against slavery and corporations like Nero Inc who profit off of it.
Her character is one that's kind hearted but rough around the edges. You start off on the wrong foot, but realize you have a common goal.
This is my vision of the character of course, players haven't seen all I have planned for her.
To end this, it is your game; my intent was never to tell you how to write or what your characters are (just how I see them), and I hope I've worded these posts to indicate that. It is simply a matter of me personally disliking a character.