Ren'Py Abandoned Twin Hills' Tale [v0.23 P1 Hotfix] [Fokken Productions]

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What do you like best?

  • Sandbox

    Votes: 1,120 19.4%
  • Narrative (VN)

    Votes: 3,355 58.0%
  • I like both

    Votes: 1,310 22.6%

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tallmanonearth

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Nov 25, 2018
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Hey guys!

So, what do you guys think?

Green for completed ones, white for actives and grey for inactive.

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Hi!

First of all - thanks for a great game. I'm especially fan of the Alyson content. My only complaint is as others have mentioned that it is quite unclear which quests can even be completed. I do like that you can see upcoming quests, but it kind of defeats the purpose if some of those quests are not available in the current version. I saw in some other post that this version is incomplete and was not supposed to be released, so that might be the cause.

My suggestion is to have completed, current, and upcoming quests in separate tabs (or similar) to make it less cluttered. If you still wish to go with colors, I suggest having something else to distinguish them for those that are colorblind. Perhaps a checkmark or strike-through for completed quests. And/or go with colors with different brightness (which you already suggest). Also keep in mind that the most important quests for the user are those that are currently active, so those should probably be more prominent than the completed ones. So if you choose green for those - make it a green that isn't so "popping".

Perhaps you should also have another state for quest that are started, but cannot be finished in the current version. Some sort of To be continued. Perhaps the little "under construction" icon that's used in-game.


Oh, I also found a bug when handing in an assignment that would put your writing stats over 10. It seemed to try to use an image that didn't exist to display the stars. I don't have the stacktrace now, but I can probably retrigger it if you would like.


Thanks again, and keep up the good work!
 
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zikegamer

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May 19, 2018
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i cant speak with sabina or lena, there is no teachers lounge and i cant proceed with finding alyson. Any help
 
Dec 15, 2019
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Hi,
I m playg this game but i don't know if i did ALL is present in this versione or if i can do more.

I have completed all the quests except:
Chap1
"The Kinky Maid" ( i m at Find out more about 'owning' Nelly)
"Fifth Shades of Sabrina" (i m at point one and I can't do nothing to pubblisher office)

Optional:
Alyson's Backdoor i m stopped to point 3
Amanda's Top Prize i did a book of 2 star, how i can write new better book 3 star?
The Kinky Influencer i m stopped to point 1 (wait for Lena...)
The Greateful Friend stopped to point 2 (wait untill.)

Chap2
Say Cheese i m stopped to point 3 (Find her a professional...)
Finding a Home i m stopped to point 2 (help her find..)
Grandpa's Little Girl i m stopped to point 3 (help here pratice but never can see her, cafe no more available)
Teasing the teaser I m stopped to pioint 1 (Find a way to tease....)
The Great Outdors stopped to point 2 (set up a 'wathcing date"..)

The Best Seller, The Boss New Toy never started

Can I do more?
 
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caxhub

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Download android v0.2b APK
 

KenneX

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Apr 21, 2019
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Cool game (except the questlog), I hope the next version won't ruin my save. After finishing the 3rd part of my book "my stats" button stopped working ("I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred."), good thing I maxed everything out beforehand and my book got 3 stars. I had to manually check the image folder to see what I've missed and it seems I only can't get 2 scenes - weekend with Julia & Samantha and night scene with Samantha (game doesn't let me go there at night). I hope the questlog will help me in the future version. Also, too many leg fetish scenes compared to other fetishes, balance it out.
 
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rockyfokken

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Jun 26, 2020
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Hey guys!

Version 0.21 is out with some changes regarding the Quest system and a bug fix for the writing skill. Also, Narrative Mode is back on track! (Old saves should work).

About the VN; It's not as good as I would like but I will keep improving it! Reminding you guys that the game is, by default, a sandbox. With that in mind it can get a little repetitive (renders and wardrobe) for the VN mode and I'm also not happy with that but I'm developing the next chapter with that in mind so it should look a lot better.

There's a lot to do yet (like making the quest system more clear to follow and a walkthrough) and I will be addressing everything it may just take a little time.

Patch 0.25 is on the works here and should be the last one for this first chapter. Can't promise a precise date yet but I will do that as soon as I can.

Hope you guys have a great week :)
 

Deleted member 1571716

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Aug 7, 2019
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Hey guys!

Version 0.21 is out with some changes regarding the Quest system and a bug fix for the writing skill. Also, Narrative Mode is back on track! (Old saves should work).

About the VN; It's not as good as I would like but I will keep improving it! Reminding you guys that the game is, by default, a sandbox. With that in mind it can get a little repetitive (renders and wardrobe) for the VN mode and I'm also not happy with that but I'm developing the next chapter with that in mind so it should look a lot better.

There's a lot to do yet (like making the quest system more clear to follow and a walkthrough) and I will be addressing everything it may just take a little time.

Patch 0.25 is on the works here and should be the last one for this first chapter. Can't promise a precise date yet but I will do that as soon as I can.

Hope you guys have a great week :)
Thanks. I'll just hold off till the VN portion is actually on track.
 
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rockyfokken

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can u add group foot scene rockyfokken
It will be optional but it's going to be there :p
(A little preview of something on that line)
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Cool game (except the questlog), I hope the next version won't ruin my save. After finishing the 3rd part of my book "my stats" button stopped working ("I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred."), good thing I maxed everything out beforehand and my book got 3 stars. I had to manually check the image folder to see what I've missed and it seems I only can't get 2 scenes - weekend with Julia & Samantha and night scene with Samantha (game doesn't let me go there at night). I hope the questlog will help me in the future version. Also, too many leg fetish scenes compared to other fetishes, balance it out.
I'm working on a actual walkthrough and trying to improve the quest system! For Sam and Julia's weekend event just make sure you keep visiting Sam with wine ;) (The night scene is tied to this event).

I'm not going to lie; foot fetish is getting a little love but there's a lot more cooking! I will be posting some previews in the future, don't worry and thank you so much for the feedback! (The writing skill is fixed! My Stats should work fine now. And if you still keep getting that error try going inside the Amanda's Comapny.)


Thanks. I'll just hold off till the VN portion is actually on track.
Alright! All the content is in there now but I'm not happy yet. I will keep working on making the VN for chapter one better.
 

JokerLeader

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Twin Hills' Tale [v0.21] [Compressed]

Original Size Win/Linux: 1.09 GB
Original Size Mac: 1.07 GB

Compressed Size Win/Linux: 207 MB: -
Compressed Size Mac: 189 MB: -

This compression is unofficial. Compressing process reduces image/audio/video quality and can break the game, be aware of that.

You can find all of my Walkthrough Mods content here:

Or you can:
 

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This android port is unofficial and may break the game.

This Game is developed by rockyfokken
Version of the game:Twin Hills' Tale [v0.21]

If you like the game please consider to support the .
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For this android port the compressed version from JokerLeader is used.
 
Dec 15, 2019
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Hey guys!

Version 0.21 is out with some changes regarding the Quest system and a bug fix for the writing skill. Also, Narrative Mode is back on track! (Old saves should work).

About the VN; It's not as good as I would like but I will keep improving it! Reminding you guys that the game is, by default, a sandbox. With that in mind it can get a little repetitive (renders and wardrobe) for the VN mode and I'm also not happy with that but I'm developing the next chapter with that in mind so it should look a lot better.

There's a lot to do yet (like making the quest system more clear to follow and a walkthrough) and I will be addressing everything it may just take a little time.

Patch 0.25 is on the works here and should be the last one for this first chapter. Can't promise a precise date yet but I will do that as soon as I can.

Hope you guys have a great week :)
Hi,
but from the end of 0.20 beta tho this, there is some new content to play?
Also "Fifth Shades of Sabrina" don'h have "Under Contruction" Logo, but i can't do nothing with Sabrina.
 
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EZ8lt

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Even with the remade log, I'm still halted at several quests.

- Can't do anything more with Sabrina just chat, while the game says I should come up with something new, and her room is under construction.

- I have no idea where to meet Lena again, I tried the university everyday, both my and Anna's office, but nothing. That's the two option I have by the way.

- I found the dress for Samantha, but I'm unable to buy it, as I can't click on the icon, or maybe I bought it but I still can't talk with her. Whenever I go to her house she's out, and I can only night visit her.

- The only interaction I have with Julia is video chat, I started the whole game from the beginning last time and I don't remember her announcing that she's going to move into the city, or maybe it happened, but I don't know if there's something else I can do now.
 

timepants

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It will be optional but it's going to be there :p
(A little preview of something on that line)
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I'm working on a actual walkthrough and trying to improve the quest system! For Sam and Julia's weekend event just make sure you keep visiting Sam with wine ;) (The night scene is tied to this event).

I'm not going to lie; foot fetish is getting a little love but there's a lot more cooking! I will be posting some previews in the future, don't worry and thank you so much for the feedback! (The writing skill is fixed! My Stats should work fine now. And if you still keep getting that error try going inside the Amanda's Comapny.)




Alright! All the content is in there now but I'm not happy yet. I will keep working on making the VN for chapter one better.
You had me at foot fetish.
 
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katarne04

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Jun 9, 2017
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first: loving the game. the grind seems worth the effort for the scenes. i think the scenes are done well & look forward to more content.
i'm playing the compressed version 0.21 & i got questions about the game mechanics

Inspiration caps at 25?
i wanted to max inspiration for the publishing book parts. at Part 1 with 25+ inspiration I met Amanda for movie night for the usual inspiration grind. the scene ends. I check stats and inspiration is at 10. I didnt do any other events to boost inspiration. I know that writing the book resets inspiration to 0. i KNow i didnt do 10 inspiration scenes or have sex for the inspiration boost.​

are the parts of the publishing book maxed at 25?
four parts of 25 inspired is 100 IF the total book rating is a sum of all 4 parts. Intro and ending arent rated??​

I havent figured out how to make writing better so i wonder if these questions are solved with doing projects for amanda's company...
Last save point was when I was at 20 inspiration. figured I'd ask these before re-grinding inspiration to 25.
 
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