VN Ren'Py Corporate Culture [v0.6] [sqwl]

[Canto Forte]

MC is a pet project for the rich and famous - in MC minds, where he hears voices all the time,
both girls are superstars and he is drooling over them. While real males ask Elsa out and
make jokes at her back handed retort for not going, while MC is day dreaming of saving her,
MC is just a boy worried about some surreal princess in distress from the frozen movie.

Welcome to the fight club, MC! While you squirm at all the NTR you see for your Elsa in all males, brad pit is already drilling her in his dungeon like the depraved gaping slut she is.

 

[Canto Forte]

You are so right .. MC used to go to bars and talk to girls there.
Too bad he is the puny edward norton while his hulk persona that is bullying him
in his head, every day, ever so ludly, just hides in his heart and turns it into stone.

Actually that bar scene was very very good. Megusta.

 

[DrDerpington]

MC is a pet project for the rich and famous - in MC minds, where he hears voices all the time,
both girls are superstars and he is drooling over them. While real males ask Elsa out and
make jokes at her back handed retort for not going, while MC is day dreaming of saving her,
MC is just a boy worried about some surreal princess in distress from the frozen movie.

Welcome to the fight club, MC! While you squirm at all the NTR you see for your Elsa in all males, brad pit is already drilling her in his dungeon like the depraved gaping slut she is.

You have very wild (and disturbing) imagination.

I dont think Elsa is sleeping around a lot. Corporate world is cutthroat. If she was sleeping around too much, then her reputation would be ruined. I think guys hit on her but she rejects them. It is normal for males to hit on girls (especially higher-ups).
When MC overheard those 2 guys talking about Elsa, it doesnt prove anything. It is completely normal for 2 males talking about how they would plow some girl (when in fact chances are against them and they wont get to plow her).

 

[noctarima]

I think this update is the worst update this game has ever gotten. Let me explain, It is not because of the minimal romance scenes. As someone said earlier, even if sqwl said "you know what, fuck lucy. This game won't have anymore sex scenes in it." I would still fcking love this game. The reason I love this game is its side characters. Elsa is a mysterious, total reailistic and dangeoursly intelligent character with a lot of potential. Alice seems like the ultimate girl nextdoor. Cute, loveable and just a little bit stupid.
The reason I didn't like this update is: it is extremely short(storywise). Don't get me wrong I'm sure those bar scenes took a lot of time to render, but were those really necessary to understand Edward is a obsessed individual with a fuckboy friend. Didn't we already know that? We have 1 short scene with Alice and this scenes dialogue is the worst dialogue in this game(oh girls only use me, what are you 12?) but it builds up to something in the next update. We have few really short scenes with Elsa and almost all of them is meaningless at this point, all of them builds up to something but in our current standing, all of them are empty. I don't have anything to say about Lucy bc I cannot care less about her. I think the only reason that lucy exists is that the game needs an easy-to-fuck girl to count as a romantic VN. I am very much aware this is a build up update, we will see the running race with Alice, we will see whatever the text is about with elsa probably in the next update. I hope when I play v0.5 I will say "well yep, the build up update was necessary". I don't know why but after nearly 1 year of developing, I expected more from sqwl in this update.

P.S. If the story is actually bigger and I somehow fucked it up because of my choices in the game, I'm sorry.

 

[Canto Forte]

These girls are using him .. he likes to be abused and bitch about it afterwords,
just because he has no other means of getting near girls.

Elsa goes to prison for drugs and MC saves her ... only to find out she was ready to suck and fuck anyone else who would be not the idiot MC is - she is a skank in the eyes of anyone but MC - such a surprise then she pet projects making him her minion.

Self serving asshole that he is, MC thinks he can absorb all that demeaning and
still put up a good show - wrong, because now all the other corporate assholes will
hump him just like Elsa, he has no defense mechanism against girls,
they shht all over him every time.

Elsa gets him presents to further her agenda, provide for Alice, the other skank
getting shitfaced in clubs while MC is depressing at home or living it up with the neighbor.

I think this update is the worst update this game has ever gotten. Let me explain, It is not because of the minimal romance scenes. As someone said earlier, even if sqwl said "you know what, fuck lucy. This game won't have anymore sex scenes in it." I would still fcking love this game. The reason I love this game is its side characters. Elsa is a mysterious, total reailistic and dangeoursly intelligent character with a lot of potential. Alice seems like the ultimate girl nextdoor. Cute, loveable and just a little bit stupid.
The reason I didn't like this update is: it is extremely short(storywise). Don't get me wrong I'm sure those bar scenes took a lot of time to render, but were those really necessary to understand Edward is a obsessed individual with a fuckboy friend. Didn't we already know that? We have 1 short scene with Alice and this scenes dialogue is the worst dialogue in this game(oh girls only use me, what are you 12?) but it builds up to something in the next update. We have few really short scenes with Elsa and almost all of them is meaningless at this point, all of them builds up to something but in our current standing, all of them are empty. I don't have anything to say about Lucy bc I cannot care less about her. I think the only reason that lucy exists is that the game needs an easy-to-fuck girl to count as a romantic VN. I am very much aware this is a build up update, we will see the running race with Alice, we will see whatever the text is about with elsa probably in the next update. I hope when I play v0.5 I will say "well yep, the build up update was necessary". I don't know why but after nearly 1 year of developing, I expected more from sqwl in this update.

P.S. If the story is actually bigger and I somehow fucked it up because of my choices in the game, I'm sorry.

 

[aon11]

The overview doesn't really explain anything, anyone could tell me what this game is about? Also is there a lot of content?
Thanks in advance!

 

[gregers]

The overview doesn't really explain anything, anyone could tell me what this game is about? Also is there a lot of content?
Thanks in advance!

Sad incel MC hears voices in his head, is deservedly bullied by cuntish coworkers.

 

[Canto Forte]

You are edward norton in fight club .. without the brad pit bits of the story ...
this is all drama in MC head, with shitty friends, shitty girls and all the
bullying you can eat up from pretty much everyone in the game.

The overview doesn't really explain anything, anyone could tell me what this game is about? Also is there a lot of content?
Thanks in advance!

 

[Sngo]

It would have been nice if the dev put a certain tag to warn people of the content... best to put this one on my ignore list.

Didn't play this update so can you tell me what happened ?

Don't want to download get disappointed and delete it afterwards.

With the amount of time the update took i need to replay to remember more about the game and I don't want to waste time if the tag you mean is what im thinking.

Ty in advance

 

[aon11]

You are edward norton in fight club .. without the brad pit bits of the story ...
this is all drama in MC head, with shitty friends, shitty girls and all the
bullying you can eat up from pretty much everyone in the game.

Sad incel MC hears voices in his head, is deservedly bullied by cuntish coworkers.

Ngl, I didn't understand what you're talking about, but I'm going to pass.
Thanks, I guess

 

[redraw]

You are edward norton in fight club .. without the brad pit bits of the story ...
this is all drama in MC head, with shitty friends, shitty girls and all the
bullying you can eat up from pretty much everyone in the game.

It's all kinds of something that you're opting to cite a mental illness as an ideal.

 

[MoarDakka123]

Didn't play this update so can you tell me what happened ?

Don't want to download get disappointed and delete it afterwards.

With the amount of time the update took i need to replay to remember more about the game and I don't want to waste time if the tag you mean is what im thinking.

Ty in advance

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So I think they're talking about the NTR tag, but I feel like that's stretching it. I mean, we don't even know if anything happens.

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[bottomfeeder]

I dunno if I misread or if it's bugged but I didn't have sex with Lucy but she keeps talking about the night we spent together like we had sex. I find it odd

 

[Trasher2018]

Is it just me or is this update very short? ... and then you get "The End" ... is that a bad ending or just the end of the update?

 

[pixado7875]

I really loved episode 2 but these 6-7 month waiting periods for an update have almost completely killed any interest I have left for this game :-/

 

[Skybreaker1337]

Huh, this update didn't feel like an update. Perhaps it's down to choices made, but it literally lasted 20 minutes (with no skipping and being drunk) for me, had 0 scenes and almost no interaction with anyone important, just rando NPCs which have no impact on anything and barely any content within the company itself.
Funny, cause at the end of the last update I was debating if this was a 9 or 10 for me, and this update is a 3 at most if I'm being generous.

Since there isn't even anything to discuss about the story see ya again in 6 months.

 

[drisarter]

What's with the CapeTown in the download link? Any linkage to Cape Town?

Just the dev's versioning shorthand for the chapters; it goes Auckland, Brisbane, Cape Town.

Ooooh. So he labels each new section with a letter, which he indicates through a city. Interesting.
You have my thanks, gregers.

I thought its some sort of code name for a product as well. Similar like Intel named their architecture. Haswell, Kaby Lake, Coffee Lake...etc

I hope the next update (Doha, Denver, etc) isn't as long away.

Just to add to this a little for anyone who might be interested: so far at least all of the cities used are from countries that are part of the commonwealth (a sort of loose association of former british colonies / territories). Auckland (new zealand), brisbane (australia), cape town (south africa).

I noticed a while ago but prior to this update thought maybe it was a coincidence (still might be I guess). I expect you might only notice if you're from a commonwealth country or just know what it is for some reason.

 

[gregers]

Just to add to this a little for anyone who cares: so far at least all of the cities used are from countries that are part of the commonwealth (a sort of loose association of former british colonies / territories). Auckland (new zealand), brisbane (australia), cape town (south africa).

Just something I noticed and found interesting. I expect you might only notice if you were from one of those countries / knew what the commonwealth is.

Yeah, I thought of them as English-speaking (current or former) capital cities of the Southern Hemisphere, but of course that also fits a lot of the Commonwealth. Delhi could be next, if they intend to stick to that category.

 

[drisarter]

Yeah, I thought of them as English-speaking (current or former) capital cities of the Southern Hemisphere, but of course that also fits a lot of the Commonwealth. Delhi could be next, if they intend to stick to that category.

Yes! Although I'm hoping Delhi will be used for N - as New Delhi - guaranteeing we get to 14 chapters at least!

 

[bananabrown]

was the update short? Yes
was the story content itself bad? not in my opinion, but this is for the individual to decide.
is sqwl receiving adequate support for the level of content people demand? NO
will large parts of the community feel entitled anyway? You know it baby!