VN Ren'Py Eternum [v0.7.5 Public] [Caribdis]

[Drafox]

Another great update. And Luna definitely foresaw something when she touched mc.

I don't why but the Nancy the milf route felt kind of superficial.
Day x: she sees mc naked after barging in
Day y: she sees his dik for the second time, gets overwhelmed
Day z: one of her friend at yoga class informs you that she's gonna ask that hippie for a date at the end of class.
You'll get two options
1) stay away from her personal life: closes her path.
2) intervene: continue the path.
I got no problem with 2nd option but why does it feels like you are deciding her love life rather she herself.
She showed no emotional interest other than "oh God how thick his dik is!" in mc before that, and all of sudden you'll get the choice of highway or noway.

I chose the first option to be honest, since it felt to rushed to she'll come around since she's isn't figured out herself yet but bummer is that option outright closed her route.

I agree with you there I already posted a lenghty post about the way choices either close or open up some paths and how unfair or inaccurate they can be sometimes but I deleted it shortly afterwards because I'm not in the mood to reply to a huge number of angry replies from people who don't differenciate between constructive crticism coming from a huge fan and a baseless one; and I'm referring to forum fanatics here not the devs.

 

[Lindien]

All the girls are stunning! First time i'm having a hard time picking a favorite!

 

[wurg]

How are you going to tell the developer, creator, and writer of the game that he’s wrong? The words came straight from the man himself, incest is not canon in this game. You can try to over analyze things and look for things that aren’t there, as with anything really, but at the end of the day it’s not an incest game.

You, or anyone else, are always more than welcome to mod the game yourself and alter the dialogue to fit your needs, but that was never the intent when the game was envisioned. Just because people say they see them “like family”, doesn’t always automatically mean they’re meant to be family.

I’m a big fan of that theme too, don’t get me wrong. All I’m saying is that it’s not in this one.

Sincerely,
Eternum Editor/Co-Writer

I never said you or he was wrong, I also don't believe you or him is going to scream from the rooftops he is creating an cest game while being on Patreon, that would just not be smart at all, and would be a detriment to your proliferation.

Cest may not be cannon in the game, but it's sure written like one, with the guilt and insecurities that come with it, to me. Nancy's web search really didn't help the case either, it could just be a kink, but "MILFs" would've been a better search term to corroborate your assertion.

I'm not knocking it either way, it's a good story, I like it the way it is, or if someone mods it, fine.

Either way, I should've known better to have an opinion about something, to each their own.

"Some people can read War and Peace and come away thinking it’s a simple adventure story. Others can read the ingredients on a chewing gum wrapper and unlock the secrets of the universe."

 

[1tomadeira]

Please no spoilers. There are people who have work

 

[xenovon]

Finished the new update! I'm now interested to nova and alex . Both are awesome in their own unique way especially nova (although it's scary if someone stalked/hacked you irl, but her quirkiness made me like her the most and also her bad ass OP scene). The dude on yoga class in a way was blue balled lmao, i can feel his excitement on his replies while listening to nancy, although the facial expression could've been improved more to make it funnier. It took me at least 2-3 hrs to finish 0.2, i got scared af on the mansion scene though i did it way too fast thanks to the mod, i don't like horror.

 

[Tkoyama]

Yes!

 

[Jehuty206]

Once in for all : Incest will never add to te game and for me the story did not have cest vibes on this two chaptrs.

I like cest content but for this game it will be not included and i'm very fine with it.

 

[Drafox]

Gotta say the second release was more story heavy than the first, the hot content wasn't deep unlike what we've seen before but a slow burn with main characters isn't that bad as long as it doesn't turn into a cock tease which wasn't the case to be fair..It saddened me to see Dalia getting the short end of the stick in this update with how little content she had she didn't even participate in Eternum events but oh well you can't have it all.

Overall a necessary update with some great characterization moments especially for the newly introduced people or the ones we didn't know much about before now; fappability wasn't that high if I'm being honest because nudity alone isn't enough to get the player fired up or maybe that's just me; there was a lot of eye candy but little action I guess it' s mainly due to the fact that the main characters were the ones being involved this time and in order to get a raunchy scene you'll need a secondary character like in the first release

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The nagatives for me were: Certain paths get closed off for absurd reasons; and the milf is too jumpy and horny, I'm not into holding characters hands to appease them, if she can easily be seduced by that sleazy gym trainer if you don't interefere then she isn't worth fighting for.

 

[kuriAUS]

Once in for all : Incest will never add to te game and for me the story did not have cest vibes on this two chaptrs.

I like cest content but for this game it will be not included and i'm very fine with it.

Games/stories involving actual incest (biological family) always have a very different, "creepy" vibe to them that I personally dislike. But this story doesn't have incest and it has none of the vibe. This story is just like a MILF and girl-next-door story, only difference being that you live in the same house with the MILF and girls-next-door.

 

[Antonie van Leeuwenhoek]

The nagatives for me were: Certain paths get closed off for absurd reasons; and the milf is too jumpy and horny, I'm not into holding characters hands to appease them, if she can easily be seduced by that sleazy gym trainer if you don't interefere then she isn't worth fighting for.

In a nutshell.

 

[sortakinda]

Holy shit it's Ruby Rhod from The Fifth Element. The absolute mad-lad.

 

[michalgarbowski]

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[SirAlexander111]

That scene was scary af.


And Luna is the best girl here by (0.1%). Dammit most girls are likeable and gorgeous.

Gotta say the second release was more story heavy than the first, the hot content wasn't deep unlike what we've seen before but a slow burn with main characters isn't that bad as long as it doesn't turn into a cock tease which wasn't the case to be fair..It saddened me to see Dalia getting the short end of the stick in this update with how little content she had she didn't even participate in Eternum events but oh well you can't have it all.

Overall a necessary update with some great characterization moments especially for the newly introduced people or the ones we didn't know much about before now; fappability wasn't that high if I'm being honest because nudity alone isn't enough to get the player fired up or maybe that's just me; there was a lot of eye candy but little action I guess it' s mainly due to the fact that the main characters were the ones being involved this time and in order to get a raunchy scene you'll need a secondary character like in the first release

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The nagatives for me were: Certain paths get closed off for absurd reasons; and the milf is too jumpy and horny, I'm not into holding characters hands to appease them, if she can easily be seduced by that sleazy gym trainer if you don't interefere then she isn't worth fighting for.

Yep milf is sending some weird signals.

 

[BunnymanGray]

Ahem. LET'S FUCKING GO! Your updates are some of the ones I look forward too the most. Can't wait to check it out tomorrow.

 

[oystei]

had to restart the game as none of my saves would load propperly, and only now realized the Preatorian from the benji scene is wielding a Sunshot from Destiny 2

 

[crustlord12]

I said I wanted to wait til the 20th, but I caved ... It's so friggin' good. OiaL was already amazing and I feel like this sets a new standard in story writing. Cannot wait til 0.3!

 

[preglovr12]

Loved the update but it feels fast a fuck to me. Things are happening at mach 3 and I feel like we went from the start of a normal game to the half way point in one update.

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[BionicMan [FR]]

Been supporting Caribdis for a while now, I have never been disappointed. Development times are reasonable. Always great storytelling, girl models are amazing. Always a little humor in there (Luna's prank was the best).

I would put Eternum really high in my favourites list, close to Once in a Lifetime and Being a DIK.

I don't know about you, but I can't help thinking that the MC will be related to the creator of Eternum in some way...

Guess it is time to replay OiaL while waiting for 0.3

 

[Alandir]

I am even more impressed after this new update.

The production value really seems to have taken a massive step up from OiaL. Just look at those action scenes, man.

I am glad to see that the humor from OiaL has come over in the writing. My favourite scene was MC being susbicious in the beginning. It's a bit weird to say about a game that's not real time but controlled by your click speed, but the timing of the jokes feels really good just like in OiaL.

I was also really impressed with the girls poses and outfits. They really do look stunning in almost every scene even with the clothes on. Sure for an adult game there's not many adult scenes yet, but I feel like the rest is plenty sexy too and the slow buildup will only make it more rewarding.

It's also cool to see how much variety there is to the male character models as well. From what I hear honey select and co are a lot more difficult to work with male characters as opposed to female characters, so you get used to just seeing the same 3 - 4 male models repeated over and over again in many different games.

Going to pledge now, can't wait for more.

 

[Pinsel]

i fucking love this Pretorians incomming. It is like a female Arnie get on the place. It would be even better when all three come in separatly. Like the first a bit on the right, then the second a bit bevor on the left, and then, the last one in the centre, upfront. It would be epic