VN Ren'Py Onhold False Promises [Ch. 1 fixed] [Red Armor]

[RedArmor]

RedArmor you still sticking to your guns about no incest? If so, I wish you all the best.

Well my friend, until next time.
But thanks for at least checking out the game!

 

[MrD812]

Well my friend, until next time.
But thanks for at least checking out the game!

Do whatever YOU choose because, there will always be those of us whom will apreciate.
Take heart and Thank You~

 

[Jstforme]

If this is the dev's first game, you sure picked the worst possible way to pick up fans...slow burns are great, but about everyone knows you'll need to wait a couple of years before the story is worth picking up (slow burns work for dev's that have established fan bases). Another big setback is no incest...yikes, I wish you luck man.

 

[kuine]

Is it just me, or do the pics in the OP actually not work? I can neither see nor open them.

 

["CJ"]

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[Hahn1900]

Well start is ok i guess... nothing more than a demo so far (10-15 minutes playtime). But so far so good...

the "complains" about incest shouldnt bother you... in fact, the most succesful games around here doesnt have incest, and the first games of those DEVs (if they do have others games) dont have incest either. So no its not a gurantee for succes... and the other way around to not implement incest doesnt mean you cant have success.

But yeah incest is kinda a "cheap" way to get initial attention, but if its not a fit for your story, it makes no sense. And my first impression is that a incest story between the brother and sister would not make any sense with this kind of build up.

So, some mentioned that slow burn games dont get enough attention either... i admit, theres some truth to it on this platform, cause lets face it, its a porn-game pirate platform. Yeah i play most of the time for the story, and romance and stuff (so this seems to be right up my alley)... but most people around here are mainly interested in porn. If a game cant deliver that, its more likely that you will not get many patrons from f95 i think. So you need a long breath i could imagine until this can pay off... but it could pay off in the long run if you have a good plan for your game.

Well that said... i like your work so far, good renders, nice start up for a possible interesting story and characters. Iam curious where this is going... and hope that it will be going somewhere.

 

[Hahn1900]

Is it just me, or do the pics in the OP actually not work? I can neither see nor open them.

Seems to be a problem with f95... not the only thread where i cant see any pictures... maybe the traffic problems are back again like about 2-3 months ago.

 

[House Of Black]

I’m good on having a incest free game, just as long as I don’t have to see the sister getting dicked down I don’t care, just make suitable ladies for me to chase and I’m fine.

 

[RedArmor]

I’m good on having a incest free game, just as long as I don’t have to see the sister getting dicked down I don’t care, just make suitable ladies for me to chase and I’m fine.

Don't worry it won't happen in the game.

 

[Eric_Draven]

I’m good on having a incest free game, just as long as I don’t have to see the sister getting dicked down I don’t care, just make suitable ladies for me to chase and I’m fine.

Same buddy I'm okay with an incest free game.

 

[Deleted member 15555]

You can find planned tags for the game in my

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All of those tags below are tags that are currently planned for future updates!

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• and more to come!

Yes but - Saying more to come can mean a green flag or a red flag, for what I know you could add "ntr" , "rape" or any of those tags I don't like in the future and I will be pissed off because there was no mention of it yet since there was a "more to come" you can cover yourself by saying "But I did say I will add more..."
What I mean is all tags you have planned, meaning what content you also won't make in the game , we have seen to many devs that adds later content they never mentioned like the one I'm talking about and it totally come off as a surprise to the players and that's kind of misleading people in a way because I¡m pretty sure you know what kind of content you want in your game and what type of content you won't make.

saying more to come can mean anything and is not a clear answer.

As long as he's upfront that's all I care about versus waiting 15 measly chapters to spring foolishness on players...

But that is a problem and is not very upfront to people that may be interested in supporting you, when you say something like "I may add this or I may not" we will see.... this type of thing is used by devs to mislead their fanbase, I'm not going to mention a game that did this but infact there was a game that teased incest for example and after earning a lot of fanbase by teasing that in the game, surprise .... did a rework, deleted any "incest" teasing and still keeps saying that there may be a patch for it in the future yet is clear by now that won't happen.

Sngo not yet, until the tags content on this game are clear I prefer to wait.

 

[Eric_Draven]

All of those tags below are tags that are currently planned for future updates!

• and more to come!

Yes but - Saying more to come can mean a green flag or a red flag, for what I know you could add "ntr" , "rape" or any of those tags I don't like in the future and I will be pissed off because there was no mention of it yet since there was a "more to come" you can cover yourself by saying "But I did say I will add more..."
What I mean is all tags you have planned, meaning what content you also won't make in the game , we have seen to many devs adds later content they never mentioned like the one I'm talking about and it totally come off as a surprise to the players and that's kind of misleading people in a way because I¡m pretty sure you know what kind of content you want in your game and what type of content you won't make.

saying more to come can mean anything and is not a clear answer.

As long as he's upfront that's all I care about versus waiting 15 measly chapters to spring foolishness on players...

 

[RedArmor]

All of those tags below are tags that are currently planned for future updates!

• 
  
• and more to come!

Yes but - Saying more to come can mean a green flag or a red flag, for what I know you could add "ntr" , "rape" or any of those tags I don't like in the future and I will be pissed off because there was no mention of it yet since there was a "more to come" you can cover yourself by saying "But I did say I will add more..."
What I mean is all tags you have planned, meaning what content you also won't make in the game , we have seen to many devs that adds later content they never mentioned like the one I'm talking about and it totally come off as a surprise to the players and that's kind of misleading people in a way because I¡m pretty sure you know what kind of content you want in your game and what type of content you won't make.

saying more to come can mean anything and is not a clear answer.

Ok I'll be more clear, the tags that won't be in the game are:
Rape
Sharing
NTR
BDSM
Sissyfication
Swinging
Humiliation
Female domination
Scat
Urination
Gore
incest
Gay


Thanks for letting me know what needs to be pointed out.

 

[Deleted member 15555]

Ok I'll be more clear, the tags that won't be in the game are:
Rape
Sharing
NTR
BDSM
Sissyfication
Swinging
Humiliation
Female domination
Scat
Urination
Gore


Thanks for letting me know what needs to be pointed out.

Sorry to push you a bit but many of us have supported devs that later ended up burning us for trusting them, it may seem unfair but is always better for both devs and users make a clear statement of where the game is going when it concerns content that people may like or dislike.

Thanks (maybe add this in your devs note, it will help people make their minds about the game and it will certainly help you get the right fanbase).
Guess this is fine to add to my list then... considering the content you won't add, good luck.

PS: you missed incest

 

[RedArmor]

Sorry to push you a bit but many of us have supported devs that later ended up burning us for trusting them, it may seem unfair but is always better for both devs and users make a clear statement of where the game is going when it concerns content that people may like or dislike.

Thanks (maybe add this in your devs note, it will help people make their minds about the game and it will certainly help you get the right fanbase).
Guess this is fine to add to my list then... considering the content you won't add, good luck.

PS: you missed incest

Hahah, true I'll add incest now.
Yes I'll add it to my dev notes at my patreon page soon.

 

[RedArmor]

Sorry to push you a bit but many of us have supported devs that later ended up burning us for trusting them, it may seem unfair but is always better for both devs and users make a clear statement of where the game is going when it concerns content that people may like or dislike.

Thanks (maybe add this in your devs note, it will help people make their minds about the game and it will certainly help you get the right fanbase).
Guess this is fine to add to my list then... considering the content you won't add, good luck.

PS: you missed incest

And no worries I understand, If there's any other questions let me know.

 

[Mister_M]

It's much better than the demo was. While I think the chapter could be longer and could end maybe when they arrive at home, cause it seemed to me like it just stops mid-scene, in general I like the approach. I'm not an incest fan, so the lack of it doesn't bother me. I'm more interested in seeing how the plot will develop, cause atm it's difficult to say if it'll be really interesting or riddled with cliches, but the slowburn and the way some of the characters are treated/introduced suggest there's more thought behind the game than in many others so I have hope it's gonna be good. As far as the LIs are concerned I want - as I already wrote after the demo was released - to pursue Michelle so there's already smth good for me on that front too.

 

[skater555]

Really promising start to the game, enjoyed it. It really dont need incest, what is really important is that he cares and will do anything to make his sisters life better thus the feels is what matters, looking forward to chapter 2 and will support this soon

 

[redraw]

I don't mind incest content in the least, but there's a score of games with it as the central premise, and even more where the dev has shoehorned it in at the sotto threats of financial failure, and the vast majority play out in increasingly tedious formula.

Trying to get a dev to include something in which they aren't earnestly invested will just get mediocre content for fans and compromised vision for the dev.

There's certainly nothing wrong with raising themes you'd like to see, but is it really satisfying to retread the same scripts which have already been so relentlessly depleted?

 

[delacroix2]

I liked the first chapter, I hope the MC can defend his sister and punish (Lola/ Bella) with the power of his dick ...also Frank's wife