VN Ren'Py Onhold False Promises [Ch. 1 fixed] [Red Armor]

[Gleemer]

Here is the Italian translation

of False Promises [Ch. 1]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.



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Ecco la traduzione italiana

di un fan False Promises [Ch. 1]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.



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Here is the Italian translation

of False Promises [Demo]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.



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Ecco la traduzione italiana

di un fan False Promises [Demo]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.

New Update Italian translation

2022-02-08
Version: Ch. 1

 

[lordfridge9]

- Has sister in a game
- No incest tag planned.


WHAT KIND OF BACKWARDS BLASPHEMY IS THIS SHIT!?!?!?

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

Well my friend, until next time.
But thanks for at least checking out the game!

I had to try it to check out the girls. lol But, as I always say, write the game that you want.

Do whatever YOU choose because, there will always be those of us whom will apreciate.
Take heart and Thank You~

I agree. Wasn't saying he needed to add it in.

I’m good on having a incest free game, just as long as I don’t have to see the sister getting dicked down I don’t care, just make suitable ladies for me to chase and I’m fine.

Same here, bro. But, when the ONLY girl I like is the sister, I may as well move on.

 

[Raife]

Sorry for the inconvenience, i'll try to write my script better for the next release. and thanks for pointing out the things that need some more work, ill try to improve the lighting as best as i can.
About the romancing option it is some thing that i will need to really consider but the chances are not high.

I found your initial stab to be pretty encouraging, Red, at least in terms of your narrative: there's no porn logic, no insta-sex pander in the demo, and a caring, platonic relationship with the sister character is a plus. There are some rather sophisticated plot branches in response to small changes in the MCs choices and path; that's great, although be careful that your branching does not get out of hand and create too much work for you in later episodes.

Good luck.

 

[mentore]

It seems a very nice and promising game!! Can't wait for chap. 2!!

 

[BeingADikDik]

- Has sister in a game
- No incest tag planned.


WHAT KIND OF BACKWARDS BLASPHEMY IS THIS SHIT!?!?!?

Did the father die? I feel this is also a requisite for getting balls-deep in VN sisters.

 

[JollyGeorgieM]

Guys, guys, guys... My fellow incest connoisseurs. The dev has promised here that there will be no incest.

Check the name of the game.

 

[Alteni]

looks promising , i will try it !

 

[Alteni]

Sister = INCEST , so where's the bloody patch ?!

 

[Blackeye.]

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My android port has an alternative save location, the save will remain intact when you uninstall the game so don't worry about starting over. And my port has a textbox opacity slider and text size slider and added change name to the main menu.

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[Deleted member 15555]

Same here, bro. But, when the ONLY girl I like is the sister, I may as well move on.

I feel you but at least he is honest since the 1st release, for me that is enough to respect this guy big time, wish "other" devs were more honest about this, some of them did go backward on promises... better to have it known from the start.

 

[MrD812]

I had to try it to check out the girls. lol But, as I always say, write the game that you want.


I agree. Wasn't saying he needed to add it in.


Same here, bro. But, when the ONLY girl I like is the sister, I may as well move on.

No worries, wish to encorage artists expression.
And Thank You~

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

I feel you but at least he is honest since the 1st release, for me that is enough to respect this guy big time, wish "other" devs were more honest about this, some of them did go backward on promises... better to have it known from the start.

Agreed. I give him props for sticking to his guns. Maybe at a later date, he can make another game where we can play a different MC and romance the sister.

No worries, wish to encorage artists expression.
And Thank You~

No worries. I'm glad he's not changing his story to make everyone happy. That leads to a dev taking a shit on their game and abandoning it.

 

[Lady Aspen]

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[RedArmor]

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That looks so good!

 

[lordfridge9]

I’m good on having a incest free game, just as long as I don’t have to see the sister getting dicked down I don’t care, just make suitable ladies for me to chase and I’m fine.

I ain't sayin' this bad or anything, just weird ya know? A nice little sis and no family friendly fun time?? Just feels weird man. Next thing you know, you're telling me that the Dad is alive as well!

 

[Yuri L]

On the short side but the branching paths are quite interesting and show promise.

 

[Vechernyaya]

Normally I would say that incest isn't mandatory and that I'm fine with all female character not being LI for the MC.

But unfortunately, in this case the sister is by far the most attractive girl for me and the situation the sibling are in (alone with no relatives) particularly trigger me by making me want to only focus on her and take care off her even more.

I can't see myself going after the other girls presented in this chapter when there is this hot petite girl present in the game but not available as a LI.

 

[MrFriendly]

Alright, may have promise but it's too early to tell. I am skeptical of this having such a high score when the first chapter didn't tell us much.
Pros: Seems like a slow burn romance which I like, the women are attractive.
Cons: Renders are too dark, the dialogue feels stilted, the MC has a shitty life. A lot of the same assets we've seen other places.

I don't post a rating after the first chapter anymore, now I wait until I've seen 2-3 before posting anything. At the moment this is a 3, has potential but not sure it is going to live up to it.

 

[Deleted member 15555]

That looks so good!

There is something I will like to feedback you after playing all "routes".
It seems you are starting in way that say "it doens't have harem" and for that I applaud you because no one will be misleaded into thinking they can romance all the girls.

The problem is, if you keep having a route for each girl from the start of the game it will make you work much more and the players will also have to play every route, that will both make the players and you working a lot to finish the game.
It will also make the updates shorter unless you make route updates from now on.
Maybe consider merging all into one at the start until late in the game we choose who we want to be with.