VN Ren'Py Onhold False Promises [Ch. 1 fixed] [Red Armor]

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Overview:
You are a young man living with his sister, after your criminal past you decide to move on with your life in an effort to give your sister the future she deserves. Will you do what's right? Will you stay true to yourself and to those around you? a VN with the focus on storytelling, romance, humor, drama and more.​

Thread Updated: 2022-03-04
Release Date: 2022-03-04
Developer: Red Armor
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Version: Ch. 1 fixed
OS: Windows, Linux
Language: English
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Extras: Signatures - Italian Translation

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Kakato said:
The title of this game should be associated to most of the Devs here. LMAO.

Jokes aside, it looks nice. I'll give it a shot ;)
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To be fair you do have a point, there are so many of these games out and about ATM, i get real picky at times.

Good luck with this game Dev
 
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Some questions. Will this be a straightforward story about a good guy, or will it have different routes where maybe the MC falls back to his criminal past. Will it be mostly romance, or will there be more hardcore interactions like male dom? Will there be incest?
 
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desmosome said:
Some questions. Will this be a straightforward story about a good guy, or will it have different routes where maybe the MC falls back to his criminal past. Will it be mostly romance, or will there be more hardcore interactions like male dom? Will there be incest?
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I plan to have different routes in the game like (criminal past) and some more... howevery the game as romance elements dama
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Will there be incest?
No, i dont plan on doing incest.
 
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Why on earth have you separated all of the choices from the main script file?
(just put the dialog and choice menus in the same file)
 
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RIC0H said:
Why on earth have you separated all of the choices from the main script file?
(just put the dialog and choice menus in the same file)
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its help me to organize my workplace, because i often get lost in a script where i put every thing in one place.
 
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Looks good, but lighting needs a lot of work. Definitely need to add planned genre/tags separately. Some more previews wouldn't hurt.

Also, by having a sister character and not having incest in your VN you'd be alienating a lot of players, a lot. Please consider adding at least an optional Incest Patch if the sister is romanceable. And if she's not romanceable, your Overview is hella misleading, you need to change it. The way it is written sounds like players have some agency, but what if I want the option to romance the step/sibling? Best of luck RedArmor.
 
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Praxxxus said:
Looks good, but lighting needs a lot of work. Definitely need to add planned genre/tags separately. Some more previews wouldn't hurt.

Also, by having a sister character and not having incest in your VN you'd be alienating a lot of players, a lot. Please consider adding at least an optional Incest Patch if the sister is romanceable. And if she's not romanceable, your Overview is hella misleading, you need to change it. The way it is written sounds like players have some agency, but what if I want the option to romance the step/sibling? Best of luck RedArmor.
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Sorry for the inconvenience, i'll try to write my script better for the next release. and thanks for pointing out the things that need some more work, ill try to improve the lighting as best as i can.
About the romancing option it is some thing that i will need to really consider but the chances are not high.
 
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