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It reminded me of a scene from Mr.Bean, that's why i laughed.. No idea what's the reason for other people who laughed at your post.
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It reminded me of a scene from Mr.Bean, that's why i laughed.. No idea what's the reason for other people who laughed at your post.
Jack just finished the next instalment of Scene 57. Jack's next four scenes all fall under the title, "When We Search For Our Answer Through Fire and Rain" set near noon on Tuesday, Day 60. Scene 57:
For new readers: The synopsis of the story so far is on page 898 (April 24, 2022), and the beginning of the story is on page 469 (March 17, 2021).
(Sam) It's powerful magic that creates 'situations' and stimulates libido in Sophia and those involved.
(Jacques) I can't deny the compulsion I felt, but who are you and who is behind this?
(Sam) I'm Sam, and Carl's organization is behind this magic. Now, Carl has stepped it up.
(Sophia) What do you mean, 'stepped it up'?
(Sam) Before, the corruption had to reach thresholds to affect your reaction. But, from what I just saw...
(Sam) Carl found a way around the thresholds. Now, compulsion is full-on when the situation happens.
Some recent event has given Carl the power to overcome the need for corruption thresholds. Sophia can now be influenced if she chooses to engage in an event in this world, and in that event the magic might create a situation that induces a romantic episode. Now, to make it worse, Sophia will react to the situation as if the necessary first steps had already occurred. This, of course, will lead to a healthy level of amorous interaction. As Sam said, Carl has really stepped up his game. We all know that too much of this will corrupt Sophia right into Carl's arms! My Sophia, you really have troubles now. All this leads to my original intent for this story, although Jack can't believe that it has taken this much effort to develop the groundwork in developing the crossover sufficiently for his intent:
Sophia is now a capable agent who can sleuth and fight (with limitations vs. elite foes like Bruno.) She has a strong motivation to save her children, and a clear direction to do so. With this new handicap, "the compulsion" we can now explore the more adult aspects as this story unfolds. Jack is offering the audience the opportunity to make their request for a male character that exists in AWAM or in a crossover game to have an erotic scene with Sophia as she moves through her story. The caveat is that Jack has to have the assets for the male character requested. Jack will collect the requests over the next seven days. Those that are eligible candidates will then be placed in a poll. The candidates with the top votes will appear in the story and have their 'happy' scene with Sophia. Jack hopes that he will be the one most members want.
To his valuable audience, Jack.
For new readers: The synopsis of the story so far is on page 898 (April 24, 2022), and the beginning of the story is on page 469 (March 17, 2021).
(Sam) It's powerful magic that creates 'situations' and stimulates libido in Sophia and those involved.
(Jacques) I can't deny the compulsion I felt, but who are you and who is behind this?
(Sam) I'm Sam, and Carl's organization is behind this magic. Now, Carl has stepped it up.
(Sophia) What do you mean, 'stepped it up'?
(Sam) Before, the corruption had to reach thresholds to affect your reaction. But, from what I just saw...
(Sam) Carl found a way around the thresholds. Now, compulsion is full-on when the situation happens.
Some recent event has given Carl the power to overcome the need for corruption thresholds. Sophia can now be influenced if she chooses to engage in an event in this world, and in that event the magic might create a situation that induces a romantic episode. Now, to make it worse, Sophia will react to the situation as if the necessary first steps had already occurred. This, of course, will lead to a healthy level of amorous interaction. As Sam said, Carl has really stepped up his game. We all know that too much of this will corrupt Sophia right into Carl's arms! My Sophia, you really have troubles now. All this leads to my original intent for this story, although Jack can't believe that it has taken this much effort to develop the groundwork in developing the crossover sufficiently for his intent:
Sophia is now a capable agent who can sleuth and fight (with limitations vs. elite foes like Bruno.) She has a strong motivation to save her children, and a clear direction to do so. With this new handicap, "the compulsion" we can now explore the more adult aspects as this story unfolds. Jack is offering the audience the opportunity to make their request for a male character that exists in AWAM or in a crossover game to have an erotic scene with Sophia as she moves through her story. The caveat is that Jack has to have the assets for the male character requested. Jack will collect the requests over the next seven days. Those that are eligible candidates will then be placed in a poll. The candidates with the top votes will appear in the story and have their 'happy' scene with Sophia. Jack hopes that he will be the one most members want.
To his valuable audience, Jack.
Your story is so weird bro. I don't know why you decided to go with this weird alternative timeline direction. It doesn't have anything to do with the original story at all. If you just made alternative timeline branching off from the original story while keeping the characters the same you would have more interest.
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Who says that any Fan Art on here has to have anything to do with the original story,besides characters?
I have had Sophia with a Tiger/weasel/Gorilla and even dressed up as Laura Croft never mind burning Dylan alive and making him ride the Sybian.
I have had Sophia with a Tiger/weasel/Gorilla and even dressed up as Laura Croft never mind burning Dylan alive and making him ride the Sybian.
I always welcome a candid review of my work as it lends perspective from the audience. I do prefer being referred to as Jack instead of bro, however.
It is true that this story is ahead of its time for this genre. One might say avant-garde. I'm sure that you noted that the first two scenes were set rigidly in the AWAM world with the introduction of the first crossover characters. However, as the story progressed the crossover element creates a creature of its own anchored in a form of originality that probably could not be realized any other way. The story is also presented more like the movie "Sin City" telling multiple sub-plots at once rather than "Beverly Hills Cop" where Eddie Murphy appears in every scene. The distinction between the two movies speaks well to your point. If one enters the theatre expecting a fast-talking Murphy in "Sin City" many would find themselves culture shocked. Those with the Murphy expectation would not return for "Sin City II". I respect the varieties of tastes and expectations found in the audience. However, I am confident that you have not read my work in its entirety, and your opinion is based on a snippet of my presentation. I challenge you to read it all (not a hard thing, really), and return with your revised review. I would be more willing to receive your opines then.
In either case, I thank you for taking the time to speak to me. Oh! and by the way...which male character would you like to see with Sophia? Jack.
Old Dog's artwork is superior to my own. I highly recommend taking the time to enjoy it.
Jack.
Yeah do whatever you like bro. I'm only giving my opinion. Make whatever your heart desires. I think more people will like it if you stick closely to the story though
You are right Jack I didn't read the entire story but I can already tell I won't like it because it strays too far away from the original story which I am a fan of. I like a good story, so seeing Sophia get dicked but if the story don't make sense or is not in line with her character then it just doesn't do it for me. For your last question: maybe those old farts at the hospital or hobos on the street, as long as the plot makes sense of course
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And he would be original HOW? He would be accused of ripping of the Dev. And why would you want just more of the same. I don't get that. It would be just like all the others just branching off. If it is not your cup of tea fine. That is your choice. Others seem to like it. I guess we are Weird. Maybe because I like Sci Fi and to me I Feel the Need, the Need for Speed, Reheat (for the blokes here) now!
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On this I disagree. I think it is the story that will generate the like. If it fails it fails on its own. Just a dupe of AWAm is... redundant IMO.
Sophia is so sexy in this series, beautifully rendered.
This series is so sexy, Sophia is beautifully rendered.
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Thankyou for the compliment Jack Adams but we both know that hardware can and does make a big difference in rendering and we do have very different styles.
Your rendering is great and I have seen an improvement in them over the past couple of months
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Incredibly sexy, beautifully rendered and interesting point of view changes. Nicely done.
Does it cost any money to start making fanart for this game? I know Daz3D is free but the rest of assets seem to be a lot money to use. I have no experience at all btw. And what about hardware, can I render with a rx580?
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Daz is designed to work with Nvidia cards only. You can try rendering with the card but it will probably turn out horrible. Download daz for free there are already free assets built into it so give it a try and see how your renders turn out. But i would recommend getting an Nvidia card as Iray only works with Nvidia, as far as i am aware.
Unknown Person: "wow what a show, such a wonderful couple hehe..."
Unknown Person: "I wonder if she is full of regret... Or lusting for more.."
Unknown Person: "Ahh how cute, no regret and no lust.. Just love.. Must be nice.."
Zed: "But for now.. sleep.. A deep sleep after that much of my special beer.. Enough time for us to have some fun"
