Fan Art A Wife And Mother Fan Art

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Jack Adams

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NobodyNut said:
Your story is so weird bro. I don't know why you decided to go with this weird alternative timeline direction. It doesn't have anything to do with the original story at all. If you just made alternative timeline branching off from the original story while keeping the characters the same you would have more interest.
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I always welcome a candid review of my work as it lends perspective from the audience. I do prefer being referred to as Jack instead of bro, however.
It is true that this story is ahead of its time for this genre. One might say avant-garde. I'm sure that you noted that the first two scenes were set rigidly in the AWAM world with the introduction of the first crossover characters. However, as the story progressed the crossover element creates a creature of its own anchored in a form of originality that probably could not be realized any other way. The story is also presented more like the movie "Sin City" telling multiple sub-plots at once rather than "Beverly Hills Cop" where Eddie Murphy appears in every scene. The distinction between the two movies speaks well to your point. If one enters the theatre expecting a fast-talking Murphy in "Sin City" many would find themselves culture shocked. Those with the Murphy expectation would not return for "Sin City II". I respect the varieties of tastes and expectations found in the audience. However, I am confident that you have not read my work in its entirety, and your opinion is based on a snippet of my presentation. I challenge you to read it all (not a hard thing, really), and return with your revised review. I would be more willing to receive your opines then.
In either case, I thank you for taking the time to speak to me. Oh! and by the way...which male character would you like to see with Sophia? Jack.
 
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Jack Adams

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NobodyNut said:
Your story is so weird bro. I don't know why you decided to go with this weird alternative timeline direction. It doesn't have anything to do with the original story at all. If you just made alternative timeline branching off from the original story while keeping the characters the same you would have more interest.
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Old Dog's artwork is superior to my own. I highly recommend taking the time to enjoy it.
Jack.
 
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Old Dog said:
Who says that any Fan Art on here has to have anything to do with the original story,besides characters?
I have had Sophia with a Tiger/weasel/Gorilla and even dressed up as Laura Croft never mind burning Dylan alive and making him ride the Sybian.
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Yeah do whatever you like bro. I'm only giving my opinion. Make whatever your heart desires. I think more people will like it if you stick closely to the story though
 
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Jack Adams said:
I always welcome a candid review of my work as it lends perspective from the audience. I do prefer being referred to as Jack instead of bro, however.
It is true that this story is ahead of its time for this genre. One might say avant-garde. I'm sure that you noted that the first two scenes were set rigidly in the AWAM world with the introduction of the first crossover characters. However, as the story progressed the crossover element creates a creature of its own anchored in a form of originality that probably could not be realized any other way. The story is also presented more like the movie "Sin City" telling multiple sub-plots at once rather than "Beverly Hills Cop" where Eddie Murphy appears in every scene. The distinction between the two movies speaks well to your point. If one enters the theatre expecting a fast-talking Murphy in "Sin City" many would find themselves culture shocked. Those with the Murphy expectation would not return for "Sin City II". I respect the varieties of tastes and expectations found in the audience. However, I am confident that you have not read my work in its entirety, and your opinion is based on a snippet of my presentation. I challenge you to read it all (not a hard thing, really), and return with your revised review. I would be more willing to receive your opines then.
In either case, I thank you for taking the time to speak to me. Oh! and by the way...which male character would you like to see with Sophia? Jack.
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You are right Jack I didn't read the entire story but I can already tell I won't like it because it strays too far away from the original story which I am a fan of. I like a good story, so seeing Sophia get dicked but if the story don't make sense or is not in line with her character then it just doesn't do it for me. For your last question: maybe those old farts at the hospital or hobos on the street, as long as the plot makes sense of course;)
 
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NobodyNut said:
Your story is so weird bro. I don't know why you decided to go with this weird alternative timeline direction. It doesn't have anything to do with the original story at all. If you just made alternative timeline branching off from the original story while keeping the characters the same you would have more interest.
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And he would be original HOW? He would be accused of ripping of the Dev. And why would you want just more of the same. I don't get that. It would be just like all the others just branching off. If it is not your cup of tea fine. That is your choice. Others seem to like it. I guess we are Weird. Maybe because I like Sci Fi and to me I Feel the Need, the Need for Speed, Reheat (for the blokes here) now!
 
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Jack Adams said:
Old Dog's artwork is superior to my own. I highly recommend taking the time to enjoy it.
Jack.
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Thankyou for the compliment Jack Adams but we both know that hardware can and does make a big difference in rendering and we do have very different styles.
Your rendering is great and I have seen an improvement in them over the past couple of months
 
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Incredibly sexy, beautifully rendered and interesting point of view changes. Nicely done.
 
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Does it cost any money to start making fanart for this game? I know Daz3D is free but the rest of assets seem to be a lot money to use. I have no experience at all btw. And what about hardware, can I render with a rx580?
 
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NobodyNut said:
Does it cost any money to start making fanart for this game? I know Daz3D is free but the rest of assets seem to be a lot money to use. I have no experience at all btw. And what about hardware, can I render with a rx580?
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Daz is designed to work with Nvidia cards only. You can try rendering with the card but it will probably turn out horrible. Download daz for free there are already free assets built into it so give it a try and see how your renders turn out. But i would recommend getting an Nvidia card as Iray only works with Nvidia, as far as i am aware.
 
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Dylan: "Come on chill, it was probably nothing"
Sophia: "Oh I don't know Dylan"
Dylan: "The door is locked"
Sophia: "Yeah but what if someone saw us?"
Dylan: "Wurst case it was some pervert so what"
Sophia: "ieww don't say that.."
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Dylan: "Here does this help.. muahhh"
Sophia: "Oh honey"
Dylan: "Mmmm I just love these big juicy tits of yours"
Sophia: "I like how you make me feel.."
Dylan: "Come let's get back to what we were doing"
Sophia: "I..."
Dylan: "Get down on your knees"
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Dylan: "I need you to make it nice and wet again"
Sophia: "you want me to take care of you?"
Dylan: "Yes suck me of you dirty girl"
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Sophia: "Muahh a little kiss for the big meter"
Dylan: "yeahh keep going"
Sophia: "the poor meter is all dried out huh"
Dylan: "super dry..."
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Sophia: "glugggggg"
Dylan: "ahhhhh mmmmmm"
Sophia: "glgughhh glughhhhh"
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Sophia: "You know what is even wetter than my mouth?"
Dylan: "haha yeah"
Sophia: "I want you inside me.."
Dylan: "Hop back on the bed then"
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Sophia: "Ahh take it slow again"
Dylan: "Your in control"
Sophia: "Oh god my insides are screaming for your cock"
Dylan: "..."
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Sophia: "YESSSSS AHHHHH"
Dylan: "mmmmmmm"
Sophia: "FUCK ME DYLAN"
Dylan: "TAKE IT.. FUCK"
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Sophia: "YESSSSS YESSSSS YESSSSS "
Dylan: "ah ahhh ahh"
Sophia: "I'm COMING!!"
Dylan: "fuck fuck fuck ahhhhhhhhh"
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Sophia: "Oh my god Dylan...."
Dylan: "AHHHHHHHH AHHHH AHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHhhhh...."
Sophia: "yes... it's ok honey.. let it all out"
Dylan: ".......I... I.. I love you..."
Sophia: "I love you too honey"
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Sophia: "we came together.."
Dylan: "yes.. this feels so amazing"
Sophia: "ahhh you really filled me up"
Dylan: "I never came this hard in my life"
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Sophia: "oehh I need to take this to the bathroom before I squirt it all over the room"
Dylan: "I feel so relaxed"
Sophia: "Yeah I bet we can have a good night's rest now huh"
Dylan: "*Yawn* yeah yeah..."
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Sophia: "We must remember our promise Dylan"
Dylan: "But.."
Sophia: "What happened in this room stays in this room"
Dylan: "But can't we.."
Sophia: "No! It would destroy everything Dylan"
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Sophia: "I need to unload your load now hihi"
Dylan: "I'll never forget this night!"
Sophia: "...."
Dylan: Fuck did this really happen wow
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Unknown Person: "wow what a show, such a wonderful couple hehe..."
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Unknown Person: "I wonder if she is full of regret... Or lusting for more.."
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Unknown Person: "Ahh how cute, no regret and no lust.. Just love.. Must be nice.."
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Zed: "But for now.. sleep.. A deep sleep after that much of my special beer.. Enough time for us to have some fun"
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I would like to see some continuation of biology lessons with Sofia as a tutor for young boys (jacob, tobias ...). Kthulu, wouldn't you make a series of it - or anyone else? :love:
 
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Mikk88 said:
I would like to see some continuation of biology lessons with Sofia as a tutor for young boys (jacob, tobias ...). Kthulu, wouldn't you make a series of it - or anyone else? :love:
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Sorry but no i won't go that far. I am still disturbed that is in the game, yes i know with some of the things i have made, but that is one of the few things i hate about this VN.
 
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