jish55

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Nov 23, 2017
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Update was worth it solely for all the lovely Gabby content... Also fuck Gabby's racist ex, hope we can screw that douche canoe over hard.
 
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Meridian

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Jan 24, 2018
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Interesting update.

I never had high hopes for Nickis story but even then it was very meh to me. Putting her in all those situations with rich florida guy and loan shark porn stuff only to have her avoid any real harm feels like a lame fairytale. No point in getting her into that stuff only for her to dodge all of it as if she is a character from tom and jerry type of cartoon. In addition to cringe stuff like "dead bedroom" with Brent it feels like her story was supposed to be darker but after a lot of people expressed dislike towards her(and stuff she might have done during timeskip) this update went into damage control mode. Stuff like some guy paying her 100k for some creepy photoshoots without ever touching her just crush my suspension of disbelief and takes me out of the story. Why even add it? Her turning her look into instahoe in attempts to get onlyfans cash and then getting near rape experience with the loan shark wouldve worked just as well without putting in florida fairytale shit. And her telling mc how she always loved him? Jebus, just why? "I always loved you but I dated this caricature level halfwit for convenience and because you didnt take the initiative" oh dog man this feels like a plot line of some netorare hentai. Would be much better if she never loved mc until events of the game.

That being said I am more interested in her than before. Romance with her always felt meh to me but new sexual content with her is much better than what we had in first update. Both the bathroom scene and her giving mc a blowjob while he looks at other girl on the phone are amazing. Can't wait for more stuff like this.

Gabby stuff was nice I guess. Real shame theres no darker version of the changing room scene since the setup was really cool but vanilla version was fine.

Brittani appearence wasnt as boring as I feared. Shame she is not a "mean girl" but eh theres some potential. I liked how she didnt want to break up with Brent because "damage already done" and her being an "aspiring model" is a great setup for future.

Madison and her husband situation develops slowly but surely into something very nice. Can't wait for her content.

Didn't like Viola stuff at all. Just last update we already had "met girl - talked to her for 10 minutes - raped her" routine, repeating it again feels lame. Gotta have more different and interesting context. All this blood and virgin stuff is not really my thing either. And her being russian just adds to unpleasantness due to current events and prevalent attitudes on social media.


Overall though it was very enjoyable. Looking forward to next update. :giggle:
 

NeonGhosts

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Mar 20, 2019
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Interesting update.

I never had high hopes for Nickis story but even then it was very meh to me. Putting her in all those situations with rich florida guy and loan shark porn stuff only to have her avoid any real harm feels like a lame fairytale. No point in getting her into that stuff only for her to dodge all of it as if she is a character from tom and jerry type of cartoon. In addition to cringe stuff like "dead bedroom" with Brent it feels like her story was supposed to be darker but after a lot of people expressed dislike towards her(and stuff she might have done during timeskip) this update went into damage control mode. Stuff like some guy paying her 100k for some creepy photoshoots without ever touching her just crush my suspension of disbelief and takes me out of the story. Why even add it? Her turning her look into instahoe in attempts to get onlyfans cash and then getting near rape experience with the loan shark wouldve worked just as well without putting in florida fairytale shit. And her telling mc how she always loved him? Jebus, just why? "I always loved you but I dated this caricature level halfwit for convenience and because you didnt take the initiative" oh dog man this feels like a plot line of some netorare hentai. Would be much better if she never loved mc until events of the game.

That being said I am more interested in her than before. Romance with her always felt meh to me but new sexual content with her is much better than what we had in first update. Both the bathroom scene and her giving mc a blowjob while he looks at other girl on the phone are amazing. Can't wait for more stuff like this.

Gabby stuff was nice I guess. Real shame theres no darker version of the changing room scene since the setup was really cool but vanilla version was fine.

Brittani appearence wasnt as boring as I feared. Shame she is not a "mean girl" but eh theres some potential. I liked how she didnt want to break up with Brent because "damage already done" and her being an "aspiring model" is a great setup for future.

Madison and her husband situation develops slowly but surely into something very nice. Can't wait for her content.

Didn't like Viola stuff at all. Just last update we already had "met girl - talked to her for 10 minutes - raped her" routine, repeating it again feels lame. Gotta have more different and interesting context. All this blood and virgin stuff is not really my thing either. And her being russian just adds to unpleasantness due to current events and prevalent attitudes on social media.


Overall though it was very enjoyable. Looking forward to next update. :giggle:
Glad you liked it overall! I don't want to get into spoiler-chat too much, but I will touch on two things you mentioned..

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