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Houselover

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Hey Everyone,

I figured I should pop in and say hey.

First of all, thanks to BaasB for posting this game here. I really do appreciate it and I really appreciate all of you who have taken the time to play it and leave feedback, good and bad. It helps me to figure out what I'm doing right and what I need to work on.

For what it's worth, I get the whole eye thing. I thought they were a little big at first, but the more I looked at them, the more I liked them, so I just went with it.

I am also very aware of the similarities between this story and Lockheart's "A Petal Among Thorns". Check out my devlog from 11/22/22 over on itch.io where I go into it a little more.

Other than that, I'm having a great time writing this story and I hope for all its flaws and triumphs, that you all enjoy playing/reading it.

Chapter 4 will be out soon. Hopefully around 2/14/23.

I hope to hear from you then.

Thanks!

-Jonesy
I'm happy that you acknowledge Lockhearts VN and pay tribute to it. Note in one of his remarks Lockheart mentions that the reason for the big eyes in his story was a issue with the software used to create the images, he has since corrected the problem. However, like you, I kind of like the looks of the girls faces.
 

incest lover m/s

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Dunno why it is even necessary to put "step" in it to ruin it in the first place. Step shit is already a dime a dozen, particularly in regular porn. If they're just doing it to kiss Patreon's ass, knock it off already and just go to Subscribestar. 3rd parties having to make patches to uncensor the self-censorship shouldn't be necessary.
There are rumors that mention that in the future Patreon will no longer provide support for pornography in general, so I want to know what these developers will do without your Patreon lol
 

incest lover m/s

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I wouldn't doubt it. A few weeks ago Paypal decided to stop processing all payments for porno of any sort and banned all users up to that point that did so in the previous year (me included, but I completely quit using them last year along with Patreon anyway due to their incest hate/censorship so my feelings are not hurt and I was one of the smarter ones and didn't use them as I would a regular bank so no savings account to legally rip off in my case). I'm sure Patreon will have 0 problem to continue kissing Paypal's asses to keep those almighty $'s coming in so will ban all pornography as well to keep PP happy (dunno why Patreon doesn't just make their own EFT payment system that does the same function PP does and tell PP to go fvck themselves, still 6M users so they are big enough to do so). In fact I hope they do, maybe dev's will then be forced to either go to Subscribestar or go back to McDonald's or Walmart. At least on SS they can make whatever they want, no limits other than their own demented imaginations. Simply not catering to incest lovers anymore is one thing (just maybe 10-15% less possible subs). AVN with no porn at all probably ain't gonna fly, as it's then just a silly VN. A few of those exist here (no sexual content tag), but tend to not do anywhere nearly as well (I don't even bother downloading those, let alone subbing to them, as at my age I don't watch cartoons/renders that are not naked and fucking, unless it's Family Guy, Beavis and Butt-Head, or a similar select few).
either they change to another platform or they will have to start developing games for children only kkkk
 
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PederSilver5

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Christmas Eve [v0.3.1] [Jonesy] crunched
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PederSilver5

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either they change to another platform or they will have to start developing games for children only kkkk
I have been hoping a banking application that gives privacy when processing transactions would appear to replace corrupted and greedy platforms like paypal, who I dumped as soon as I heard they wanted to steal $2500 per their opinion infractions on social statements if they so felt like it. I place my funding behind good causes and honest hard work. Including some of the developers and content creators that contribute to F95zone.to Tyrants need to fall!
 

th3_fr4gil3

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The VN isn't bad, there were a few typos and punctuation issues (which I've fixed), but the story itself isn't bad. Shame that it's similar to APAT in just about every aspect, albeit sped-up.
i was wondering how similar it would be to A Petal Among Thorns.
 
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crugh2112

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Hey Everyone,

I figured I should pop in and say hey.

First of all, thanks to BaasB for posting this game here. I really do appreciate it and I really appreciate all of you who have taken the time to play it and leave feedback, good and bad. It helps me to figure out what I'm doing right and what I need to work on.

For what it's worth, I get the whole eye thing. I thought they were a little big at first, but the more I looked at them, the more I liked them, so I just went with it.

I am also very aware of the similarities between this story and Lockheart's "A Petal Among Thorns". Check out my devlog from 11/22/22 over on itch.io where I go into it a little more.

Other than that, I'm having a great time writing this story and I hope for all its flaws and triumphs, that you all enjoy playing/reading it.

Chapter 4 will be out soon. Hopefully around 2/14/23.

I hope to hear from you then.

Thanks!

-Jonesy
Love the big eyes and the main model. Fun story you have here. Good luck with the rest of your production.
 

PederSilver5

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Honest injun (chickasaw), question: Why do graphic novels and such used cracked walls and filthy house, and room graphics when a cleaner and in better states of repair images are available? Further, many use rusty no logo images of muscle cars or other cars that look like they were found in some barn after 30 years, had some tires put on them and walla its the MC's vehicle...

On image quality: ad some glistening and dripping along parts for realism, because things look so dry I would expect some fake moanings for the John during copulation. Fools think they cannot tell the difference, well there is a huge difference if you are skilled enough to give your lady oogles. What they used to call it whispered nothings and enthusiasm is the ticket.:cool:
 
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Yngling

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Review v0.3.1

The setting is a young daughter getting stuck inside a cabin with her (step) dad.

I didn't see the patch in time, so I played without it and it was a bit off-putting. But a patch exists, so it's my fault I guess, but the dev could also have the player define the relationship in the beginning, like a lot of other games do. In the version I played, the non-blood-related thing was emphasized a number of times in the dialogue so I don't know how the patch handles that.

This has been done before, most notably in the game/VN "A Petal Among Thorns (APAT)." It has so much similarity that it's hard not to compare the two. The similarity even extends to the art style (big eyes!) in some ways.

Compared to APAT, the pacing is a bit faster here and the power is more balanced. In APAT, the daughter was the main instigator, seducing her rather reluctant dad. Here, the daughter is still the initial instigator but her father is a lot less reluctant. Objectively, it's fine. It feels a bit rushed but APAT was perhaps a bit too slow/reluctant/indecisive. In my personal opinion, the pay-off in APAT was a bit stronger though. On the other hand, this game does not contain any sci-fi elements or unneccesary side characters, which is a bonus. The game does contain some strong hints about the other family members who are left at home eagerly awaiting their return, and, apparently, the MC's cock, hinting to a sequel, like, again, APAT.

The art style: the body of Eve is really nice. I'm not sure such girls exist in real life, but if they don't somebody needs to invent them ;). It's really great, petite but not creepy. Curvy but not too much so. The eyes are unnaturally big, which is a stylistic decision by the dev. It's unnatural but it still looks attractive to me, so my verdict is rather neutral. I didn't overly like the amount of make-up that Eve wears (also during shower scenes...) but that's my opinion. The problems start with the way the light is reflected in those eyes, which is not done well. Also facial expressions could use some work. They are there and they are appropriate, which is more than some other devs achieve, but they are not fully natural in several cases. The biggest problem I have is with Eve's pussy and ass, which look pretty undetailed and unnatural. This kind of ruins the close up scenes. Daz can do much better nowadays.

The renders of the cabin are OK. At least the scenery used in the game is not overused like in so many other games. However it is not the most beautiful or detailed scenery. The MC is hardly seen, so there is not much to comment on, but at least he doesn't detract from the experience, which is I think a good thing. However the game does not go out of it's way to avoid showing the MC when it's necessary. I personally think that the game pretty much hits the sweet spot here in that respect, although others may have different opinions.

Verdict: 4/5.

Despite the game's art issues, I did thoroughly enjoy playing it. So I am detracting one point for the art. I am not detracting any points to the similarity to APAT, because, again, I did enjoy playing this game and I realise that there are only that many ways to write a slice-of-life F/D game and most games need to use one trope or another.
 
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Yngling

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Why do graphic novels and such used cracked walls and filthy house, and room graphics when a cleaner and in better states of repair images are available?
Because it's a kind of holiday cottage that is rented out to couples.
I think that part fits the setting. But the asset used is not the most detailed ones, definitely.
 

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Honest injun (chickasaw), question: Why do graphic novels and such used cracked walls and filthy house, and room graphics when a cleaner and in better states of repair images are available? Further, many use rusty no logo images of muscle cars or other cars that look like they were found in some barn after 30 years, had some tires put on them and walla its the MC's vehicle...
Maybe it's a cost thing. I know I've picked up a few junker car assets for free from the DAZ store, but never got any nice ones. I also have a few run down buildings/interiors that were also free, but only a couple "nice" ones.
 

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Christmas Eve [v0.4.0] Unofficial Android Port + Patch

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- 285mb


My Android Ports have a 2nd Persistent save location. So, even if you uninstall the game, the saves will remain Intact.

Saves location: Storage/0011/Game-name


You can also join my discord server for more and support me.



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Yngling

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The patch simply rewrites the dialog/story to omit all references to the step-cest and replaces it with real incest dialog when necessary. It's not simply a 10kb name changer like some (that can sometimes lead to still-awkward dialog/situations in practice). I found the patch after 15 mins or so and started over, because as sooon as I reallized it was yet another fake-cest AVN I was just going to delete it but went looking and found that patch.
Indeed.

BaasB could you perhaps change the wording in the OP:

Patches:
to Patches:

?

I guess it would make it clearer for new players.
 

Alanray64

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Just played the game to completion and really enjoyed how it was delivered. I looked on your discord and saw mention of a sequel once chapter 4 is complete? I am guessing from what I have seen here it will involve the other step-daughter and the friend in some manner?

Anyways, the renders are awesome and story good.. Keep at it (y)
 
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Overview:
Christmas Eve is the story of a single father (MC) and his stepdaughter,
Evelynne who are on a road trip just before Christmas.
They end up making an unscheduled stop during a snowstorm and stay in a cabin for a few days.
Romance blooms as the dad not only struggles with the changes in the relationship between him and his stepdaughter,
but also finally starts to come to terms with his late wife's passing.​

Thread Updated: 2023-01-29
Release Date: 2023-01-15
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Censored: No
Version: 0.3.1
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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