VN - Ren'Py - Completed - 23 Sisters [v1.0 Final] [Abere Lucifer]

At first glance this game (or rather VN) seemed to me to be just another project in the wincest genre. But the further the plot developed, the more strange it seemed to me and gradually (on the episode with the twins) I stopped. So,
Pros: 1. cute models, although nothing particularly stand out against the background of other heroines from other games.
2. fast plot development.
3. Mediocre, but relatively tolerable graphics (2.5 points)
4. Music - as a background is good, but soon had to turn it off, began to annoy.
5. Content - a lot of it.
Cons:
1. And that's the main thing. Incredibly stupid plot. When it turned out that the full cycle of pregnancy thanks to some "god from the machine" instead of 9 months is 7 days, I was left with nothing but spreading my hands. Yes fantasy and SF are inherent in the tags, OK, but that doesn't negate the stupidity of the plot. Fantasy (since it's not SF) can be bad, mediocre, good. But it doesn't have to be dumb. I'm certainly not talking about all the female characters literally throwing themselves at the MC in packs, god with it, it's genre specific.
2. Graphics. We're currently in the end of 2023, yet I see 2017-18 level graphics in the game.
3. Humor tag. I found absolutely nothing funny in the stretch of the game that I played through. Perhaps the developer was making something funny, but what exactly - remains a mystery.
To summarize, I can say one thing. I would recommend it to porn lovers who don't care about the story.
For those who want to get at least minimally good story I recommend not to waste your time on this game.
I give it 2 points out of 5 (one point add for the cute faces of models).

that s game do not have free choice most of choice and most of whem go to game over if you try to follow you own path of choice an do not follow the forced choice you are put trough if you want a game with meaningful or real choice forget this one one of the worst game i have played

The animations, graphics and sex scenes aren't very good. What really drags this V/N down though is the writing.

You have to be cautious with V/Ns that have the humor tag as too many Devs mistake weird for humor and this is a prime example. There are some Devs out there who have mastered humorous writing but not here. Playing this is like watching a Tom Green movie, so unfunny it's painful.

Sometimes you can look past mediocre scenes with good writing but this just doesn't have it. If the Dev had played it a little more straight and didn't try so hard to overcompensate with what is presumably meant to be humor it might have had a chance.

Not one I would recommend.

The most humorous game/novel I've ever played/read...I laughed out loud numerous times . The dev has a witty/clever sense of humour (that at times can be subtle) so you need to use your brain or a few of the jokes can fly over your head. It can get a bit brutal at times as there are few lines the dev won't cross. I thought it was all in good fun but not everyone would feel that way in today's PC/snowflake/woke society. Speaking of, the game could do with making fun of wokesters more often...if you can't laugh at the stupidity/hypocrisy of woke people who can you laugh at?

I generally love the writing although I'm not sure why there are so many BJs when MC (not Mary Cate lol) still has sisters (not to mention daughters/mother) literally lying around his residence that haven't been 'serviced' yet as per his contract. It seems like there are too many available females because he doesn't seem to be in any hurry to get around to them. I guess dev dug himself a bit of a hole with how ridiculously short gestation and maturity are...things can get out of control exponentially fast.

Fortunately the writing is great because the sex scenes are a train wreck IMO. Everyone is jerking around in the animations and look unnatural/ganky. It isn't just the physics that are robotic...it doesn't seem like any of the characters would pass the Turing test. Dialogues are wooden and emotionally stunted. Unless they are improved dramatically I'd prefer the animations be dropped entirely as the current sex scenes aren't at all arousing to me. I'd also like to see some sexy women added to the game and not just lolis.

Even though I'm not a fan of the visuals the writing is just too awesome for me to give anything less than 5 stars. Epic!

Story's a total mess . Weirdly enough, nothing interesting happens and yet it moves forward at million miles per hour. It would take a herculean effort to read through the entire thing. All jokes have the same schtick. Characters are threadbare and even with their different backgrounds, there's nothing to differentiate the girls.
Renders are outdated though I liked the black girl. Not recommended.

Started out interesting with the whole impregnation/wincest/harem/polygamy stuff, but it was already going to be hard to keep interest with the whole the amount of sisters in the title. Of course then the creator changed to those 23 are only the official sisters and it ended up making it clear there was no limit at all making it both hard to keep track of characters, and uninteresting to keep track of them.

The writing in this game is so abysmal that it is just beyond being cringey. I understand that the Dev is trying to make a comedy but the jokes are as retarded as all the characters in this game. The girls look like pre-teens but they speak and behave like well worn hookers. The characters are bland and uninspiring. Also there are too many of them to care. The graphics are nothing to write home about. The animations are just bad.
If your sense of humor is a bit better developed than that of an average 13-years old, do not waste your time on this game.

I went in with low expectations, but the tags and family tree illustration made me want to give it a shot. I was entirely unprepared for the dialogue and world building. I didn't know I wanted this but I'm glad I got it. The setting feels like some fever dream between Shadowrun and Doctor Who and I am absolutely for it. I'd actually call this game a masterclass in not taking itself seriously, it is just so funny, and crazy and it works well with the insane premise. Truly the best piece of absurdist porn I've seen.

The biggest strength out of the way, I was also not expecting so much content. It's perfectly linear with little to no importance of player choice from the 3 hours or so I played so far—which I don't even think is half the game—but I don't consider that a real flaw. The game isn't presenting itself as a role-playing experience and is unapologeticy asserting itself over any misconception that the player is in control of anything, no, you are along for the ride.

The characters are entertaining and many bring a unique energy about them. So far none of them have felt like a recycled npc to pad out the game, but again I haven't finished it yet, and given the available playtime I don't think any sane person could in a day, though the game might help bend that sanity a bit. There are times where some dialogue from the characters has felt flat or generic, but these are sex scenes and are a minority I think, but still, there be porn dialogue in these waters. So far I've found just about every character I've encountered to have some charm to them that never felt overused. Often though on a characters introduction they all seem too willing, the game explains it but if you like a bit of cat and mouse there is absolutely none here. There isn't even any reservation from any of the women about fucking your daughters. It could have done with a bit more persuasion to give the girls some more backbone, but that is me taking an absurdist piece seriously.

The pace is at a really good balance for what it is. For all its length, it isn't any kind of slow burn. The time in between you're last fuck and the next is occupied by either narrative on your next, or some usually naked banter/absurd setting exposition, and the exposition is entirely unimportant, you miss nothing other than some hilarity for skipping past what little filler there is. The filler that is there feels warranted though, it breaks up what would otherwise be a PowerPoint presentation on the praxis of inbreeding.

Speaking of power point we move on to the weakest aspect of the game. It is at heart, a slide show. The sex scenes have animations, but the looping is terrible. It has felt like every animation was simply played, and then rewound to make a loop. The motions themselves also feel stiff with little variance or dynamics in a single scene. I can at least compliment that the models themselves are of good quality, and posed nicely during normal slides. There is no audio to speak of whatsoever, and given the animation quality this is probably for the best and a good decision, plenty of pieces like this are only spoiled by sub-par audio, and it feels more like a comic than anything else. It gives me the impression someone with writing experience tried their hand at 3d animation. If ever there was the funds for it, I'd love to see a remaster done by a commissioned 3d animator, the rest of the game stands on its own and carries what would otherwise be a mediocre porn slideshow. If each sex scene was more dynamic and had smoother animation with proper loops I could comfortably give it five stars.

Overall if you are looking to make a family web instead of tree, this is one of the few games that really accomplishes it without resorting to autogeneration or boiling descendants down to numbers instead of characters. The family tree is a confusing clusterfuck and you are there to make sure it doesn't get any simpler. The relation to a given character can get confusing and have you scratching your head over cousins and nieces and who is related to who, as any proper mass inbreeding should, its convoluted, messy, and very hot. It really is a treat to have some inbreeding that you can actually lose track of, not some streamlined system that is easy to understand.

If you want to fuck your granddaunieces and rail some potentially preteens you have finally found a decent execution of it that won't have you incarcerated ya sick fuck. 4/5 would inbreed again.

This game could be a very entertaining, average pormn game but it sadly becomes very bad.

All the characters look very average none really ugly or hot but I don´t mind.

The sex scenes are okay not really good but still okay.

The story is the issue here. It should be very simple find and fuck your 23 sisters. In the beginning of he game everything was good but the longer the game game the stupider it gets so many side plots and none are interesting or well thought out, the main story just stops after a while, if the story wasn´t this bad it would be 3 stars but it ruins everything for me.

I genuinely think I have lost brain cells playing this game.
Or if you want to be correct - accelerated the loss of the brain cells.

The reason why it's not 1 star is simply that I respect the developer ingesting and injecting some serious drugs to make a story like this. Truly, a sacrifice.

Story:
0/5
Complete nonsense that tries to justify itself with more nonsense. It doesn't give you in slightest a breathing room. It doesn't make you care for a single character or get involved in a story.
One of the flaws is the fact that there's 23+ characters MC has to fuck. Too many characters is always bad.
Entire plotline could've actually been made into a well thought out story. Without the aid of a billionaire father, drugs, demons and shit.

Visuals
1/5:
Not really something outstanding. Characters look like your usual low tier DAZ goblins. With a bit of crackhead essence infused into them. Made really to satisfy general or niche demands.

Characters:
1/5
They sure are flavorful but at the same time, they feel like being splurted out of a factory. Very little backstory, very little development.
They exist to be basically walking vaginas that you fuck and nothing else.
Genuinely didn't give a shit about a single one.

If you like the games for coherent story and characters, I deeply advise to skip this one.

I think I lost IQ points from playing this. Stupid doesn't even cover it.

It is a little funny, and the girls are cute, but the scenes are crap(short, no detail), story is crap, so why play it? Better content in 5 min clip from free porn sites, with equivalent storytelling

When I first started playing this. I thought it was pretty damn good since I liked the story line. But some things have really started to bother me. From grant becoming to much of a focal point or the bad attempts at animations, the story being watered down with just random story tossed in. Plus all the over used jokes the keep repeating. The story is also a cross over with the game Extra Credit and leaves me questioning why these games are not one game or why Extra credit was even started as its a much worse game, making even less cense the this one.
This game was kinda fun at the beginning now its just annoying and seems to be written by a 12 year old. I liked where it could have gone but the focus is on weird shit and just has gone down hill. I looked forward to this game but not so much anymore.

Well, for some reason lately I'm playing A LOT of AVN's from that side of Alabama, if you know what I'm meaning. Not that I have a preference on this kind of content, to me, if a game is good enough to worth playing, I'll play. There's lines that I don't cross in relation to my porn (usually rape, blackmail, humiliation, netorare, revenge content, guro and vore). Taboos like incest are ok, if in a fictional context.

And well, since I played some of the top tier (on this forum) incest related games, I'm gonna have to try some of the others. And 23 sisters, for those who TL;DR this review: It's equally funny and annoying,

To all those others who want a explanation why...

*taps various parts of my own body*

THAT'S WHY!

Story/Plot excuse: You're an average Joe on a normal job, until some totally not suspicious guy arrives on your job and says that your father wants to talk with you. The old man is dying and gives you a job for 12 Billion Dollars: Impregnate all of your sisters. The guy have a incest fetish and have as much children as Mitsumasa Kido (only the people who READ Knighs of Zodiac will know that reference) and is rich as fuck. And then you, like a 10 year old kid who got his first pokémon, travels around the world on your mission to fuck'em all.

Points for the inane premise and certain creativity. Yep, lot of the plot points and later twists are for sake of convenience. The game doesn't take it self too much seriously, but some times... Can get a little annoying.

Writing: Writing is the two edged-sword of the novel, it's the strongest point, because of all of the absurdity on dialogues, but sometimes can get annoying as fuck, sounding juvenile. Yep, the jokes about canadians saying "sorry" are kinda funny, but it get's annoying when the joke is repeated almost 83 times in a space of five minutes. Same goes for some of the situations, that are more annoying than funny.

Sex/Graphics: The sex scenes leaves a little to be desired in terms of poses, duration. I know that is hard to make animations, not gonna be harsh on that, but leaves a little to be desired. At least he have some variety in girls, for everyone.

Sounds: I think the music part cames from Koga3's mod, so I'm not gonna put anything here. Not a fan of VN's without music, since in my opinion, music and sounds are very important to establish an atmosphere on your game.

Overall: 3/5, it's acceptable.

I won't write a full review yet as this is a work in development, but man, I hadn't laughed this hard in an adult game for a while

The visuals are not outstanding and the quality of animations are not the best you've seen, but daym, the story and the theme and the jokes carry this game far.

The premise and story are absolutely over the top stupid and ridiculous, but it is also fully self-aware and that makes it a rare visual novel. The dev knows exactly what they're doing and that's why the stereotypical jokes work here.

Good luck to the dev on finishing this game.

Great game. Fun story and plot. I do wish it had more interaction and choices instead of just telling the whole story. Also, some repeatable in game scenes would be nice instead of just replaying scenes from the gallery.

Ok so as you can see my rating for this is pretty low. So when I first played this game I enjoyed it immensely when it first came out along with the first few updates. I could deal with fast pregnancies and fast growth of the kids for the story sake. But then the later updates came. Aliens, angels, demons, half animal/half human, clones, grant being brought back to life in different bodies. It’s starting to get to be a little too much. Like the dev is trying to cater to almost every fetish out there in a single game. Which is not good. It becomes too convoluted along with too many different storylines taking place at the same time. There is simply way too much going on now. It simply focused on the sisters and the Mc then it would be good but too much is not always a good thing. I honestly think that this game needs to be renamed because it is no longer about the 23 sisters.

If famed movie director Uwe Boll ever made an adult VN 23 Sisters would probably be it.

The "story" is completely demented. It's about some guy whose father is a super genius billionaire who basically controls the entire world and even rules over some galactic federation. Said father is seemingly dying and on his death bed he meets his son and tells him he will inherit 12 billion dollars if the son (the MC) impregnates all 23 of his sisters. As it is the father has a huge incest and breeding fetish, but you probably already guessed that. And of course the MC agrees to the deal.

What follows is over the top wacky nonsense about impregnating all the sisters, plus unofficial sisters and a few other females along the way. The MC gathers all the sisters he encounters in a huge apartment building owned by his father who, after he dies, uploads his mind into some kind of android.

The girls in the story are not just humans, there are also angels, demons, (half) aliens, goat girls, cat girls, moth girls... and most of them look very underage....

Oh, since the MC's father is a genius he developed several drugs that make the MC irresistable to women who have a commonality with him (like a sister, for example), another drug makes sure the MC will impregnate any woman at basically the first try, and almost all the potential sisters were put on special fertility drugs (without their knowledge), these drugs also accelerate the pregnancy so it only lasts about two weeks, with each subsequent pregnancy developing even faster. And the drugs also make sure that all the children will always be girls so the MC can then go on and impregnate them as well.

The demon character gives birth two hours after impregnation btw. and her child is more or less grown up shortly after. Yup!
So of course the newborn daughters all have accelerated growth and are mature after a week or so (the demon girl is special) and yes, all of them want to be bred by the MC right out of the gate.
And yes, all of them live in one gigantic harem and all of them always walk around in the nude while at home, because the MCs "alpha" sister Tiffany wants it like that. And yes, Tiffany also has a huge incest fetish. But basically everyone in the harem has one. But Tiffany takes the cake. And yes, she's from Alabama. Ha ha...

The sheer madness is actually kind of impressive. Some of the over the top writing is even outright funny. There are a few laugh out loud moments in the game.

However, ultimately 23 Sisters suffers from mediocre renders, various not very attractive female characters and making so many of them look very underage (not my cup of tea at all).
Also, for the fact that 23 Sisters wants to be an over the top porn parody the sex scenes are just horrendous. The animations are short, very, very slowly paced (the movement is ultra slow) and there is zero variation in a scene.

Also, since there are so many sisters plus offspring you quickly forget who is supposed to be who, not that it matters, since almost all female characters only serve one purpose anyway and it really doesn't matter what girl is featured in any of the horrendous animations.

To be honest, I cannot recommend 23 Sisters to anyone who wants a VN to be at least somewhat plausible or expects decent production values.

If you like over the top wacky comedy and if you are ok with characters that are paper thin, and always wanted to have a game that goes to town with pregnancy and incest content then 23 Sisters is certainly enjoyable. However, the lousy adult scenes in this game are a major shortcoming. There is also surpringly little interaction between the various sisters / daughters / whatevers with or without the MC, there is some, but not nearly as much as someone may expect, given the ridiculous setting.

But if you like crass and silly humor and don't care about lousy animations, lousy characters, female DAZ models that look disturbingly young, and if your tolerance threshold for sheer madness is rather high then 23 Sisters can certainly be fun.
The jokes can be pretty good at times, but the interactions with the female characters are usually super boring, you will care for almost no one in this VN and there simply are too many characters that you completely lose track of after a short while because the game keeps throwing new characters at you like candy. And the MC has only met about 1/2 or so of his sisters so far with release 0.10.

Love the comedy, it's great, the story has enough subplots to keep the VN going for a long time, the characters are all bananas, like you can't take anything that happens seriously and that's why I like it, there's no deep emotional or dramatic storyline it's just fun, grant is one of my favourites, like the brain fart moments, hey I forgot to tell you this one thing or he comes along oh yeah there's also this thing I meant to mention to you, like dude! Get to the fucking point and put it all on the table!, Also no ntr or other guys but there is lesbian content in the harem

Anyway good luck doc, hope this continues for a while

(Just wanted to add, I've been meaning to sub you on subscriber but I've had a lot of patreon subs, so I've downgraded a lot of them and I'll sub next week, won't be much but I do like to support Devs that bring me in and make me have a good time)

the visuals could be better.. the animations could be a lot better, the story is absolutely bonkers and makes no sense at all... except it kinda does, but really not...it is not a good game by many possible standards...

but I don't care, because this is and remains hella entertaining.

Its a masterpiece, hilarious social commentary. Incredible dialogue and sexy babes. Not to mention loads and loads of family fun. There are supernatural elements and some of the things may be confusing but this is still one of the greatest visual novels yet devised.

Now the plot is reminiscent of the phenomenal vince vaughn movie where vince vaughn gives his semen to the semen bank and ends up having 500 kids. Except vince vaughn didnt have sex with them (he should have) well here you can do what vince should have done a long time ago.

I can only see this getting better with time for sure a game to watch out for, one for the ages one might say

update:
Sadly dev has decided to start making a new game instead of finishing this one. I had given this 5 stars but as it will likely be abandoned in near future i have to drop it to 3, its a funny game as it is but nothing ground breaking and never will be. SADLY