VN - Ren'Py - Completed - 23 Sisters [v1.0 Final] [Abere Lucifer]

The game was written by someone who needs to touch grass. The animations are also horribly stiff and lifeless. The framework for something vaguely decent is there. I mean a game were your insane father is making you seduce and knock up siblings sounds fun, but after almost 3 hours of my time reading through it and looking at the animations, I felt pretty much as brain dead as the characters.

23 Sisters [v0.08b] [Doc5252]

1. Good quality of image/rendering is certainly a plus point
2. No value for nudity.
3. Poor emotions by the characters
4. 23 number of sisters (girls of same age group) are very abnormal and very fictional

I generally try to judge games for what they're TRYING to accomplish. Don't judge a fish by its tree climbing abilities, right? In the same sense, you don't judge a game like this against something like What a Legend. But even taking that into account, this game is pretty bad at what it's trying to be. The renders are all over the place, the "story" comes in and out of existence on a whim, and the sex scenes are short and terribly animated. For a game that's essentially meant to be a nukige (lots of sex, very little story) it's pretty bad at it.

Warning english is not my native language.
1) This game made me laugh countless time. Plot is little crazy but fun and simple.
2)Dev really working on this game. I remember times when girls were downright scary. Now models much better.
3) Lots incest and pregnancy content. Well for someone its plus. For someone its minus. Everyone has own fetishes.
4) This game has original idea. Really many games with just cloned story.
Like "Landlady" and such. This is not one of them.

P.S Its first game for which i wrote review. So i think game is good enough.

It's... It's not great. It's an absurd story that makes no sense, and the characters are really boring as well in my opinion.
I don't want to be mean to the developer, there is not that many developers that make games like this, so good work for him and thanks for creating it.

This game started off great, but quickly went off the rails into meaningless nude renders. No character depth, and the logic of the game world is just a complete mess. The developer's writing amounts to reminding you that you're playing a sex game, and here's some titties. Sometimes showing is better than telling, but in this case, I'd advise the opposite.

This is my 12-13 yr old dream come to life. When I was that age, I dreamt of having a "family harem" of "free use" females.
My dreams never met what this game delivers, though. 23+ and counting?!?!
And to have a dying dad that is funding it all?!?!? Holy Crap!
Admittedly this storyline is clearly a parody as it contains medical drugs not within reach of current technology.
But DAMN!!!! And to have nearly all of these girls not only willing, but EAGER?
If there is a heaven, PLEASE make it a version of '23 Sisters!!!'

I think of porn games as satire. They are all mockeries or reductions of whatever genres they contain. And that's fine! That's their purpose, to take a genre or theme and make it revolve around sex.

This game is a satire of a porn game. It takes all the tropes of porn, dials them up to 100, and then puts them all in the same game. It's ridiculous, and I don't think it works well here. There's a distinction between games that have comedy, and games that are pretty much nothing but comedy, with this one falling into the latter category.

You can have too much of a good thing. Without other balancing elements, hyper-fixating on one theme can dull it. That's what happens with the humor here. There's no emotional depth, no sincerity, no tension to counterbalance the funny bits, which really saps them of their effectiveness. Likewise with the sex scenes, I'm aware that this isn't supposed to be a slow burn or anything like that, but that doesn't mean you have to go "WAM BAM they fuck, now onto the next girl."

I'm not sure if the "story" here could be told in a better way. Even as far as porn games go, "you have 23 sisters that you need to impregnate to get your inheritance of BILLIONS of dollars" is pretty out there. My first instinct would be to suggest adding some mystery or build-up, but I'm not a writer, and I'm specifically not the writer of this game. I don't know what the dev has planned in their head, and maybe the finished product will be something rather different than what we have now.

I am a little bit torn with this one being 2 or 3 stars. There are a lot of the fetishes that I like in this game. I do like impregnation fetish. I am also a fan of the incest. Also, the models are generally good to very good.

That being said, this game rolls rapidly off the deep end into immersion breaking garbage.

You have sisters who are angels, demons, aliens. Pregnancy lasts hours and the babies are almost immediately teens. Androids, and other junk.

I know that it is intended to be a game that doesn't take itself seriously, but it has devolved into a nonsensical mess.

For version 0.5

I guess I found where my border is with incest content, I'm generally someone who prefers the step-sister genre, but if I can't avoid it, then I still play a game with sisters since it's way better than the totally unrealistic concept of "roommates".

But the Alabama character and MC's dad just make me feel so uncomfortable that I can't continue playing it. I did give it 2 stars out of respect since the game works well, some of the models are nice and the game gets regular updates.

I am a fan of the fetish of incestual breeding. Finding anything that focuses on generational breeding too (daughter's daughter etc) is pretty rare.

That said, this one can be summed up with three words.

What the fuck.

Pick a story. Went from just perverted quest to find and impregnate sisters to aliens, demons, angels, and newborns being tweens in an hour.

Ok, The story and premise is what it is. if it isn't your thing obviously you won't like it...I like it's fast paced but the reason why I only gave it 3 stars is the animation is terrible AND short. 5 seconds of 2 frames repeating is terrible and not arousing at all. If the animation was better and LONGER? I might give it 4 stars

Ok. First to be clear this game made me laugh. Not haahaa but to tears. It is a combination of weird crazy shit happening(aliens,Angels,shit that is so far off the wall it is insane)...and then all of it all of the insanity being considered normal by most characters and the MC. It made for some great laughs as you fuck yourself into what will arguably be the largest harem ever. Worth playing if you are in need of a laugh for sure.

yes yes... i do believe DOC5252 has created something amazing. Why? Because it takes the harem romance genre and flips it on its head. Take WVM or maybe some other Harem Romance story and put this side by side. The difference is bigger than the age gap inbetween the MC and the heroines.
There is plenty of humor and choice in the game to keep you entertained.Well done.
I say Godspeed and best of luck for your endeavors.

Oke first of all my english is not the best so dont judge to hard.

But damm finally found a game that is much crazy as me, and so far i like where its going.
Its complete diverent then many other games and thats why its good for just great old fun.

But in all that crazy there is also a story weird but it make it complete then the jokes and just so over the top shit.
what kind of mind is behind this because its like my mind is just the same.

keep up the good work, there are some bad stuff but it looks more like thats because u are still learning along the way of creating and that make it also instant a + because u can see progress with each update.

Keep up the good work.

Also agree pineapple on pizza sucks.

This is hot AF. Despite what some say the girls are not ugly, they are hot. The story is mostly for humor but still is super fap material. And the thing in the story is true - pineapple on pizza is an abomination. If you order it in Italy things will not go well for you, LOL.

First off this is an incest/pregnancy game if that's not your thing then this game is not for you, its actually great to find a game where the creator dosent try to please everyone or water the content down to get around censorship instead focusing on making the game the way they want and it really shows here.

The main story is quite basic with every problem simply being solved with money no matter how ridiculous but given the type of game it is it actually suits it, if you play this game then you want to see lots and lots of inbreeding and not waste loads of time with boring explanations(although it does give some its not a boring amount) and this game really delivers on that.

If you come and play this game wanting anything but incest and pregnancy you will be disappointed but for those that love it this game is heaven.

The characters are all different in looks and while having different personalities they are all in the same mind about the MC mission, the MC is a better written character than most MCs as he's not a white knight and not a devil either, he goes with the flow but still knows what he wants.

Art is not perfect but still better than standard with good but a little too short sex scenes although there are plenty of them, there are quite a few fetishes but apart from the big ones the rest are only just touched on and don't go any further.

Story 4/5 (basic but its not the primary goal here)
Sex 3.5/5 (lots of but could be longer)
Characters 4/5 (they know what they want)
Art 3/5 (good)
Choices 2/5 (some but only surface ones)
Kinks 5/5 (loads and loads)

One final note, pineapple on pizza is great.

Rated against v0.05b

It's so absurd......... it's actually good? It's like the cold pizza of games. It probably shouldn't work but it kinda does. There's a lot which should count against this. The plot is absurd, the graphics are a bit... cooky and the pace is lightening fast.

But....... it works. the plot is so absurd it's actually funny. Like the game knows what it is and there's strength in that. It's under no illusions or pretense of grandeur, it's "here it is, deal with it and if you don't like it then why are you here?"

The graphics are a bit rough in places but it again seems to add to the charm of it. That sounds so pretentious but there's a bit of uncanny valley in places with facial expressions which are almost parody but again it kind of feeds into the feel it appears the game is going with. This is meant to be bombastic, it's absurd and so are the graphics.

Make no illusions, I think it even mentions as much on the original post, this isn't a long winded "find yourself" game. it's smut and fast smut at that. But there's nothing wrong with that. if you're looking for an Oscar fodder tear jerker this ain't it, this is Carry On Incest. So just go with it.

23 Sisters is to adult-gaming what Postal is to the film industry: an infamous and twisted creation, which will make you shiver and check twice if the door and curtains are really closed.

Seriously though, if you’re a sick fuck, this game is great: cute girls, very lewd scenes, good writing, completely inappropriate humor…To put it simply, it’s a lot of fun! Refill your glass of Southern Comfort and enjoy this game while the FBI is tracing your IP.

My only critique is that the sex scenes are pretty short, with few animation loops.

Well. the game is "fast paced" which is a way of calling it rushed, tasteless and boring.

The best part of the game is until you meet Tiffany, cause there are a couple of funny dialogues, but sex scenes dont make for a quick fap cause they are mostly horrendous. Animations are 2 frame stiff as hell loops. Girls have serious deformation issues, and for some reason i ended up fucking some grandma (when i previously said IM NOT INTO GRANDMA FUCKING)
There are also a couple of game overs if you pick wrong choices, so at some point dev decided to make choices matter, i guess that one didnt.

Screwing me with game overs and with a grandma fucking when the game was barely at the poor mark, is not good for the rating. Sorry but this game will only work if you are underage, and by extension, not legally allowed to play it.
The level is so bad that me, that i know the most basic shit of DAZ, could make it to that quality.

If the sex scenes where actually good, but they just aren't. I have played "fast paced" games but some of those at least make good sex scenes.