rewritten in English by OpenAI :
"A Touching Game with Room for Improvement
I recently had the opportunity to play this game that left a good impression on me. It's a game that stands out in several ways, offering a unique and tender experience. I love seeing the experiences of each of the protagonists. However, there are certain aspects that could use some improvement. Let's dive into the details.
Firstly, what I appreciate about this game is its ability to avoid common pitfalls. There are no unnecessarily long sequences, no gratuitous explicit content, and it manages to convey a sense of tenderness that's quite rare in gaming. In a world where excessive drama often takes center stage, it's refreshing to find a game where the characters aren't drowning in self-pity just because they're in love.
However, there is a notable drawback that can't be ignored. The game seems to keep the player at arm's length from the characters, especially during intimate scenes. Instead of immersing players in the emotions and perspectives of the characters, it often feels like we're observing from a detached third-person point of view. This creates a sense of emotional distance, which hinders the player from fully connecting with the characters' experiences.
Aesthetic-wise, there are also a few areas that could benefit from improvement. The design of the male character, in particular, could use some refinement. While beauty is subjective, it's essential for players to be able to relate to and invest in the characters. A more appealing character design can enhance the overall experience.
Furthermore, the game's overall visual design leans towards darkness, which can make it challenging to appreciate the details. The choice of fonts and the black-outlined white text boxes can also be hard on the eyes. Offering customizable options for these elements would be a welcome addition, as it would allow players to tailor the visual experience to their preferences.
In conclusion, this game brings a refreshing and tender approach to storytelling, avoiding common pitfalls that plague many similar titles. However, there is room for improvement, particularly in creating a stronger emotional connection between players and characters and enhancing the game's visual appeal. With some refinements and attention to detail, this game has the potential to become a truly outstanding experience."
Bonjour !
J'apprécie le jeu : pas de longueurs, de pornographie exagérée, mais beaucoup de tendresse. J'aime qu'il n'y ait pas trop de drame, que les personnages ne soient pas dans l'auto-apitoiement juste parce qu'ils s'aiment. J'adore voir le vécu de chacun des protagonistes.
Je trouve cependant qu'on est un peu loin des personnages, surtout lors des scènes d'amour. On a deux personnages qui racontent leur vécu et on aimerait voir un peu ce qu'eux voient, être dans leur peau, mais on est très à l'écart presque tout le temps, on ne perçoit qu'un regard à la troisième personne, un peu détaché.
Enfin, esthétiquement, le garçon est un peu laid et gagnerait à être un peu retravaillé. Je sais que la beauté est dans le regard de celui qui aime, mais il faudrait quand même un peu y croire. En général, il y aurait un peu de travail à faire niveau dessin. C'est un peu trop sombre aussi. Les polices de caractères utilisées sont difficiles à lire et le blanc cerclé de noir n'aide pas. Ce serait bien d'avoir des options.
Merci tout de même pour ton beau travail. J'apprécie vraiment.
