VN Ren'Py 30 Days [v0.5] [AllNatural]

[AllNatural939]

After reading the last few comments, I realized I had only read half of this VN. I didn't realize there was a completely other part! Not just some flavour text differences, but actually totally different scenes.
I do have to say that they are different in tone as well.
The first path (with Ronald) was 'unfriendly' and disturbing. It also explained a lot about the world.
The second path (with Linda) was much more emotional and fun.
I think the second path was much more fun to read than the first path, but I assume the paths stay together (because the same things probably happen, but from a different perspective).

AllNatural939
Have you asked you Patreons which path they prefer? I'd be interested in a poll on that.

Yeah, that's something I'm gonna fix in the next update. The story splits in two right at the first choice you have to make, but some people still don’t know that. That was my mistake, and I only realized it not too long ago... My error was adding a small warning after one of the options was picked, without thinking that some people just won’t ever choose that path because they’re used to just clicking and not going back to check what they might’ve missed... So next time, the text will be changed to make that part super clear, and it'll show before the choice.

No, I haven’t asked anyone. The thing is, I tend to be way more active on Patreon compared to most devs. I never miss my Weekly Report, and I usually post something extra on another day too… So basically, twice a week. And I can’t really push it too much, 'cause people might feel overwhelmed and leave just because of that. So I can’t make polls just for the sake of it, and this one would be pointless anyway since no matter the result, it wouldn’t change a thing… The story’s already written. I mean, sure, there are small details I tweak from time to time, but nothing major.

 

[GamesR4fun]

The game is enjoyable mostly I just wish the MC wasn't written like a little bitch. and he could be shown as more off a man in a situation like that its very annoying.

 

[AllNatural939]

Hi again


Starting today, July 4th, and running until July 25th, there’s a big sale on Itch... and I managed to sneak in. It’s my first time taking part in something like this, so we’ll see how it goes.
The Bundle is so big it had to be split in two. First up are the completely free games. You don’t have to pay anything for them, though tips are always appreciated. I’m in that section with the latest version 0.5.

It’s a collection of 34 games from 29 different developers. Here’s the page for this part of the Bundle:

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The second part’s made up of both paid and free games. You get 46 games for $15. The full value is over $160, so that’s one hell of a discount.

You can find that second part of the bundle here:

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Thanks!

 

[Lucifer Morningstar 99]

Updated to 0.5... but the uploader missed something really important: this version is the continuation of the alternate path where the MC finds out that Linda is going to die anyway.

So Linda is on the side path only, right? Because in the main path she died in the cage. Or am I wrong?

 

[Canto Forte]

There is no foremost and foregone path: there is a fork in the game. MC either lets the girls have their way or he protests immediately: this means he is getting other companions altogether and the whole game is changed: MC never meets the mutant psycho, he never goes to the meeting and never has the challenge to volunteer for anything, if he chooses to protest whatever the girls wanna do to him, in that fork in the game scene - which means two girls get disqualified and MC never goes to the cages and never sees who is in there, because two other people from his group are the ones to go and only males could participate, so we do not know who was in the cages there or if there was a different event alltogether..

So Linda is on the side path only, right? Because in the main path she died in the cage. Or am I wrong?

 

[AllNatural939]

There is no foremost and foregone path: there is a fork in the game. MC either lets the girls have their way or he protests immediately: this means he is getting other companions altogether and the whole game is changed: MC never meets the mutant psycho, he never goes to the meeting and never has the challenge to volunteer for anything, if he chooses to protest whatever the girls wanna do to him, in that fork in the game scene - which means two girls get disqualified and MC never goes to the cages and never sees who is in there, because two other people from his group are the ones to go and only males could participate, so we do not know who was in the cages there or if there was a different event alltogether..

Couldn't have said it better, thanks... and I’d better stop talking so I don’t spoil anything for folks like the guy above who have no idea what’s coming