- Apr 2, 2019
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A lot to like about this game, but misleading tags aren't one of them. All is setup to appear the MC and Sarah & the girls are blood-related only to strip those relationships away in short order. Would actually prefer the hated Landlord & Tenants trope (at least the L&T BS is honest). I'm sure three or four updates down the road, they will throw in a token incest scene or two featuring a couple of characters not related to the MC just to justify the Tag, but I'm out. Too bad.
At the very least, delay using the tag until an update were the content actually represents it.
At the very least, delay using the tag until an update were the content actually represents it.
At some point but none in the current version v004.
Today Nvidia is releasing information on their new video cards. I hope to be updating my system if not with new maybe a used card that is better than the one I have now.
Mmm... okay, so v0.04 update was basically a 2 mins content. Try harder mate.
Well, Day 10 (update v004) was 35+ completed renders with Daz3d setups and Photoshop work along with correcting a few dozen grammar and spelling issues all in just 13 days from the last update, I thought I was working hard.
Here is my view on updates.
I like it when Devs make updates on regular basis. One example is Treasure of Nadia, it gets updated every 2 weeks. To me it shows the Dev or Dev team is working. It is much better than a Dev putting out an update and sitting around waiting until a certain dollar amount has collected in their support account before they start to work on the next one. You have no idea when the next update will happen.
I get some people may be disappointed by the size of content in my updates but that does tell me the work is good enough for people to want more. (I don’t have an ego about this I know it is not great but good enough, lol.)
This project is not my fulltime job and I certainly don’t spend every minute of my free time on it, but I do want to commit to delivering content in a 2-3 week window. So that means the new content will be 1-2 days of story time (unless I add video then less).
I recommend skipping an update every once in a while, to let the content build up for you. I am new to this and I could be handling this completely wrong but to me life is about always learning.
Thank you for your comment.
- Apr 2, 2019
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The RTX 3ks are some really juicy cards. I went ahead an made a price chart of sorts: the prices for any card with less cores than the 3070 are in relation to the per core price of the former. Should you opt for a used card it should cost (way) less than the tabulated price:
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Ah is your crystal ball foggy? Eye color, of Dad, Mom, and both sisters and even the MC are same. Hair color of both daughters same, freckles and complexion similar for daughters. Because of marketing and certain financing support needed by creators, the platforms that they appear on must walk a tight rope between the desires of their fans and the requirements of the platform funding. I will let you use your little grey cells to figure out why, their is "plausible denial." Have you gone to the movies and watched a fantasy or a science fiction and criticized it for not being reality? Or do you suspend some disbelief in order to enjoy the movie, film, feature as long as it fits in an expected framework without moving too far against its own established parameters? If you want to insist or require a graphic novel developer to feature certain activities and titles, I believe some will provide downloads under that title that you can merge once its on your equipment.
Henry Ford quote: No task is too hard once it is divided into smaller tasks.Well, Day 10 (update v004) was 35+ completed renders with Daz3d setups and Photoshop work along with correcting a few dozen grammar and spelling issues all in just 13 days from the last update, I thought I was working hard.
Here is my view on updates.
I like it when Devs make updates on regular basis. One example is Treasure of Nadia, it gets updated every 2 weeks. To me it shows the Dev or Dev team is working. It is much better than a Dev putting out an update and sitting around waiting until a certain dollar amount has collected in their support account before they start to work on the next one. You have no idea when the next update will happen.
I get some people may be disappointed by the size of content in my updates but that does tell me the work is good enough for people to want more. (I don’t have an ego about this I know it is not great but good enough, lol.)
This project is not my fulltime job and I certainly don’t spend every minute of my free time on it, but I do want to commit to delivering content in a 2-3 week window. So that means the new content will be 1-2 days of story time (unless I add video then less).
I recommend skipping an update every once in a while, to let the content build up for you. I am new to this and I could be handling this completely wrong but to me life is about always learning.
Thank you for your comment.
- Oct 23, 2016
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I'm sorry, but after playing through this game, I don't understand the exceptionally high ratings.
Is nobody bothered, by all the unbelievable stuff that happens, is no one bored, when all the women in the game fall for the MC at first sight?
And the spelling errors and the wrong words used, nobody is bothered by that?
I'm not saying this game is terrible, but there's clearly a lot of room for improvement. A LOT.
IMO, this game desperately needs a proofreader and the dev/writer needs to give things more time to develop, it all happens way too fast and through that it becomes almost surreal.
Also, a bit more finesse, a bit more subtlety, when it comes to the reactions of the women (and the MC tbh) not just constantly
"Daw, tha guy has a biiiiiiig penis, me so horny." or "Dat ass!!!"; and this of course also goes for the sex scenes themselves.
Just writing down what you see in the renders anyway? Without any erotic writing, without any added refinements and embellishments?
For me that isn't very sexy, even if the renders themselves aren't bad.
Is nobody bothered, by all the unbelievable stuff that happens, is no one bored, when all the women in the game fall for the MC at first sight?
And the spelling errors and the wrong words used, nobody is bothered by that?
I'm not saying this game is terrible, but there's clearly a lot of room for improvement. A LOT.
IMO, this game desperately needs a proofreader and the dev/writer needs to give things more time to develop, it all happens way too fast and through that it becomes almost surreal.
Also, a bit more finesse, a bit more subtlety, when it comes to the reactions of the women (and the MC tbh) not just constantly
"Daw, tha guy has a biiiiiiig penis, me so horny." or "Dat ass!!!"; and this of course also goes for the sex scenes themselves.
Just writing down what you see in the renders anyway? Without any erotic writing, without any added refinements and embellishments?
For me that isn't very sexy, even if the renders themselves aren't bad.
Pizza Girl does not, even Chloe who is "easy" is not in love, so not sure what you mean. I guess if they don't say no all the time, you are bored. What is more interesting to me, is too much banging the backside. Its like really? All the time its even more prevelant than a bj. And when they succeed in coitus, no worries about pregnancy, or mention of any prevention. Maybe its free at the school clinic? When I was attending college there was quite a bit of this behavior. With the scardy cats believing all the bs of china virus now though. I wonder if they will put on huge bubbles. I saw one social brainwashing media looking like they want girls to give a male elbows, but its probably ok if .... its not a male inside six feet. How about Ellie the cheer leader?
Hi and thank you for your comment.
It looks like you have been regularly active in f95zone for some time (2016), many posts and likes as well as being a donor. I can only imagine you have seen some very polished work. I agree my work so far has been less than polished. That has been pointed out multiple times within this thread. I also have started working to resolve many of the spelling and grammar issues. After the release of v004 this past weekend I extracted the dialog purchased a real word processing software package and slowly started to go through the 32,000+ words in the first 10 days of the visual novel.
I feel you have missed the point that my project is in an early stage much like a "pre beta" or 3rd draft. That is why the version is 0.0.4 and not version 1. That should be an indicator it is not polished and does need some work. I did not post my project on this site or even know it was here until recently. You certainly have not taken in consideration I am new at this which makes me wonder if you bothered to read through some of the earlier comments of others and my responses. I get that some people will want the MC to get it on faster with all the women and others will want a drawn-out story. You can’t please everybody all the time. But I don’t get why you would download a game or visual novel, have more than a few issues with it and post a review with all the spoilers you did. It is like you don’t understand this site is about fantasy and porn or you did not like the story and for some reason you want to trash it now. I try to give people the benefit of the doubt. You seem to have issue with the things in my story that are not believable. Here is a spoiler you left out of your review, nothing in my story is real.
Your comments in the review are a great example of why developers stop working on their projects. You should consider not taking these things so seriously and remember it is just meant to be entertainment.
- Aug 27, 2017
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- Nov 24, 2019
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Let's have a game where the son dies and we play the dad, who is fucking the entire neighborhood. Ahahahaha
- Jul 12, 2020
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- Nov 6, 2017
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I'm so in... Kill that little bastard, or at least send the kid to military school and never talk about or take phone calls from the punk again...
- Jan 8, 2018
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Must admit that I find myself looking forward to the new releases. The story is getting stronger, keep up the good work
