Hi and thank you for your comment.
It looks like you have been regularly active in f95zone for some time (2016), many posts and likes as well as being a donor. I can only imagine you have seen some very polished work. I agree my work so far has been less than polished. That has been pointed out multiple times within this thread. I also have started working to resolve many of the spelling and grammar issues. After the release of v004 this past weekend I extracted the dialog purchased a real word processing software package and slowly started to go through the 32,000+ words in the first 10 days of the visual novel.
I feel you have missed the point that my project is in an early stage much like a "pre beta" or 3rd draft. That is why the version is 0.0.4 and not version 1. That should be an indicator it is not polished and does need some work. I did not post my project on this site or even know it was here until recently. You certainly have not taken in consideration I am new at this which makes me wonder if you bothered to read through some of the earlier comments of others and my responses. I get that some people will want the MC to get it on faster with all the women and others will want a drawn-out story. You can’t please everybody all the time. But I don’t get why you would download a game or visual novel, have more than a few issues with it and post a review with all the spoilers you did. It is like you don’t understand this site is about fantasy and porn or you did not like the story and for some reason you want to trash it now. I try to give people the benefit of the doubt. You seem to have issue with the things in my story that are not believable. Here is a spoiler you left out of your review, nothing in my story is real.
Your comments in the review are a great example of why developers stop working on their projects. You should consider not taking these things so seriously and remember it is just meant to be entertainment.
First of, sorry for replying so late, I must have missed the notification about you quoting my post.
I'll be honest and open in my reply, which is what I always try to be, I don't mean to insult you, make you sad or dampen your enthusiasm, but you complain quite a bit about my review and my comment and I have to address that.
I'll use spoilers so the post doesn't get too long and only someone who is interested will actually read my rantings.
I do hope you continue with your project, even if it might never become my cup of tea (though I'd be glad if it did), there are obviously many people who enjoy it a lot already and it's not like your game has to be for everybody or be liked by everybody.
