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firefall132

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Man, just from looking at the summary and preview pics I am really leery of the writing quality in this. Like, is it in first or second person? Because the preview pics seem to disagree. Looks better than what you typically get from MTL but still...
 

DeUglyOne

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Reading the overview and dialogues in the previews, it definitely needs an English speaking proofreader.

Those side panels are way too distracting for my taste. A complete waste of space that could be used for stats, hints, etc.

First impression: Nope
 

Arqa_dev

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Man, just from looking at the summary and preview pics I am really leery of the writing quality in this. Like, is it in first or second person? Because the preview pics seem to disagree. Looks better than what you typically get from MTL but still...
Thanks for the feedback, yeah i realized that mistake pretty late too, thats on me, if you give it a try let me know which one you like best, i believe only Valentina, the inital part of Siri and first quest of Skylar are on first person since those were the ones i made first before a break.
 

Arqa_dev

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Reading the overview and dialogues in the previews, it definitely needs an English speaking proofreader.

Those side panels are way too distracting for my taste. A complete waste of space that could be used for stats, hints, etc.

First impression: Nope
Hey no problem with that. The side panels are just background to notify you the time of the day, i could try thining them. Those are kind of feedback i want, i was also thinking about the top part seems a bit empty too and thought of maybe the random events can pop moving the image of the location to the side, stats i'm not so sure, let me know about any other recommendations you can think of.
 

Feyschek

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Hey no problem with that. The side panels are just background to notify you the time of the day, i could try thining them. Those are kind of feedback i want, i was also thinking about the top part seems a bit empty too and thought of maybe the random events can pop moving the image of the location to the side, stats i'm not so sure, let me know about any other recommendations you can think of.
In truth, you can create your own sidebar.
You can find custom panel options on the Internet or disable the default sidebar and make your own.

As they say, what you have enough personal skills for, then choose.
 

johnmnf692

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This might just be the most generic real-porn game I've ever seen, not being able to name the MC, having a slut for a sister, and being forced to watch said sister get railed by some other guy in her sex-tape is just the icing on the bland cake.
 

Feyschek

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This might just be the most generic real-porn game I've ever seen, not being able to name the MC, having a slut for a sister, and being forced to watch said sister get railed by some other guy in her sex-tape is just the icing on the bland cake.
I don't think that the lack of the possibility of naming your protagonist is a disadvantage.
For developers, I would call this a plus and a small ease of development.

About the plot of the game, it's purely taste and nothing more, each author does what he has enough imagination for.
 

johnmnf692

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I don't think that the lack of the possibility of naming your protagonist is a disadvantage.
For developers, I would call this a plus and a small ease of development.

About the plot of the game, it's purely taste and nothing more, each author does what he has enough imagination for.
As conceited as it may sound, a game should not be made for the convenience of the developer. Ultimately, what you're making is a product, and a product should be catered to the consumer base. This doesn't mean that a dev should just completely bend their will to whatever a player says, but it does mean making small sacrifices for quality of life changes. And that is what a name-changing function is.

As for the plot being purely taste, that's only partially true. This game is dull and unoriginal in both its plot and characters, but only one of those things is subjective. And even then it's not totally subjective because there are objective qualities to writing. The characters are all 1 note, that could change in the future, but based on what's already there I don't see any reason to believe that it would.
 
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Feyschek

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As conceited as it may sound, a game should not be made for the convenience of the developer. Ultimately, what you're making is a product, and a product should be catered to the consumer base. This doesn't mean that a dev should just completely bend their will to whatever a player says, but it does mean making small sacrifices for quality of life changes. And that is what a name-changing function is.
Although you will probably disagree, but the game in development should be convenient for the authors of the game.
This applies to all elements in the game from the code to other points in the game.

But at the same time, I cannot disagree with your opinion that the game should be convenient for the player, yes, you are right here.
All these points should still be made at the stage of designing and creating the game.

I think the developers are still new and such moments for the first game can be forgiven.
As for the plot being purely taste, that's only partially true. This game is dull and unoriginal in both its plot and characters, but only one of those things is subjective. And even then it's not totally subjective because there are objective qualities to writing. The characters are all 1 note, that could change in the future, but based on what's already there I don't see any reason to believe that it would.
I think the plot of the game just didn't hit your taste categories and that's it.
To be honest, neither do I, but I have another problem with these games.

And to be honest, no one wants to experiment with these games and bring something new to the plot when there are good old solutions that work well.
:cautious: We change the wrapper, change the words a little and the game is ready and not like the others.
 
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Arqa_dev

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Babe wake up, update v0.2 just dropped.

Now there is an option to download with videos at 576p (reduced quality) at almost half the size of normal v0.2 version

Recommended to make a new save

Changes since v0.1:
  • +5 missions with Skylar (focusing on dominance around the house) He will not fold to the power of pussy! (Even though i did for a moment while writing him hehe)
  • +16 missions with Chanel (focusing on your revenge on Blu)
  • +10 missions with Alexa Pearl (kinda wholesome to be honest) - Trigger at the beach on the evening.
  • Just in case, you can trigger Valentina's introduction quest at night on the Red Light District Or taking certain decisions on Skylar's first mission.
  • Character relationship, first and last name customization. Last name selection affects Siri and Skylar.
  • Added mentions to the relationships between characters along the 45 missions of Siri and Skylar.
  • Stripclub functionality. 3 strippers at the moment. You can call 2 of them to your house. One scene on the beach that appears at night on random basis, you can unlock it by investing on a certain stripper.
  • + 18 random scenes to watch on PC.
  • Almost 150 new videos added.
  • Everything written in second person.
  • Quest mission wait time enabled.
 
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having a slut for a sister, and being forced to watch said sister get railed by some other guy in her sex-tape is just the icing on the bland cake.
Sounds very nice., is she also a mean girl bully toward the MC?
 
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Arqa_dev

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Dad died check
Living with mom and sister check

Now where did i heard that before?
Dad may or may not have died... :whistle:
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An online HTML for Phone would be a good option for the next update
Yeah, i've been investigating that too. i'm not exactly sure where to host, but definitely got it tagged as important on tasklist. I tried Itch.io, thats why there is a 576p version of less than 1gb (there is a 720p + version that is 1.8gb in size), but got the file amount restriction so thats discarded.
 
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narukamiYuu

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I mean the images and the style of the game are good, but you gotta be able to take the beta of the betas of main characters.
 

CaptainBl00d

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Hey! Decided to check this game out because I liked the models that you used.

I gotta say, one thing that could really see some improvement is... the city. I saw all the locations, and I'm like "DAMN, must be a lot of stuff to do here". Well, turns out most of these locations are empty. Why?

It's like buying a lot of empty land and then bragging about "beautiful city" that you built. No, it's just empty land. Nothing here.

So I suggest you either fill these locations with some interactions (at least some random encounters that could tease me a bit) or remove them completely.

Overall, the premise is fine and project has some potential for sure. Good luck!
 
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Arqa_dev

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Hey! Decided to check this game out because I liked the models that you used.

I gotta say, one thing that could really see some improvement is... the city. I saw all the locations, and I'm like "DAMN, must be a lot of stuff to do here". Well, turns out most of these locations are empty. Why?

It's like buying a lot of empty land and then bragging about "beautiful city" that you built. No, it's just empty land. Nothing here.

So I suggest you either fill these locations with some interactions (at least some random encounters that could tease me a bit) or remove them completely.

Overall, the premise is fine and project has some potential for sure. Good luck!
Hey! thanks for the kind words. The next update is gonna come with a lot of random events giving more life into the world and to the house.
 
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