huh? The whole second hotel scene is a joint direction. Ethans "I love you" or not determines path, then his pull away or not, then nat's "make him cum" or not - these 3 junctions determine rest of scene.
I didn't have as much a problem with the outlines as the expressions. I kept trying to get into game, and I finally realized what was making me hate it so easily was darrell's stock expressions. Go look at the expressions icon folder yourself, the dev could have saved himself some time by making a renpy layeredimage setup like:
layeredimage darrel:
group sneer auto
attribute happy
attribute mean
attribute angry
To unpack this if its unclear:
In nearly every expression he's drawn with sharply slanted eyebrows close to the eyes. This would generally encompass angry/cocky/confident/serious moods- but there's no other brows. In-game, when his expressions have a normal smile, he looks fine, but the majority of the smiles are slightly lobsided, giving this sneer/smirk appearance to everything. Some may like that, but it was just obnoxious to constantly see for me, though once I changed the expressions to more of the normal smiles I found the game more enjoyable.