I understand that there are a lot of viewers here that enjoy the cuckold humiliation. Personally, it disgusts me and is a huge turnoff. I play all the paths because I have written a critique that criticizes the fact that the story is driven by Darrel and race play, and has very little to do with Ethan or Natalie and their growth or change as characters. That is a poorly written story that lacks focus.
That doesn't mean that there is no entertainment value here. There are lots of stories told poorly that are still entertaining and serve their purpose. It just so happens that many of those stories are NTR stories. I do not understand how these authors begin these stories well with a couple wanting to explore, and then they all devolve into a humiliated mess of a husband and a disgusting slut of a wife that has no value other than to be a prostitute or whore slave to BBC. King B would do well to write the main story he wants here: A weak minded cuckold who cannot contain his wife's sexuality. She must explore larger and larger cocks with more and more men until she has destroyed her husband, her marriage, and her life.
That is the story he wants to tell. But I think he slips in the voyeur and exhibitionist routes to try to even out the humiliation route. To please a wider audience. As a result, the story becomes ineffective, repetitive, and lacks dynamics. Now, I know there are a lot of fans on this page that would completely disagree (the facepalm brigade), and that there are fans that don't care, they just want to see Natalie fuck as much as possible. My point is, that is fine for cheap erotic porn literature. It is not good for a classy story with intellect and maturity that does justice to the lifestyle of those who choose to swing or become hotwives. And it hurts this story.
