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The dev is taking his time with the Peter route because there isn't much to it once Nat is corrupted. All that's going to happen is Peter will achieve penetration and then suffer from palpitations. Then a brief scene at a hospital and a graveyard.
Anyone know how to get to this scene? So far Nat returns to the car with a different dress.
Playing the game again, I have to say that I found this update weak. One is because of a defect that I think the game already had, and the other is because of a decline in an aspect of writing that he should have been more daring like he did before and sometimes abused more in this aspect of writing. The first, I see that throughout the game, King B did not understand the format of a visual work very much, I believe because of his habit of writing for the literary model, in which you have to paint the mental image for the reader, and in the audiovisual it is very verbose, which he often describes in excess for something that we are already seeing and leaves the player's flow a little truncated, which could be more succinct but still provocative, and allow more thoughts of the husband and Nat to describe. The second, I found this update weak in the dialogues, it lacks more provocation between the couple, speaking in a more naughty way, and during sex Nat lacked more speech and the guys were more daring when speaking, and I found this update to be one of the most verbose of the problem I mentioned, it seems more dialogue to inflate the little content of the update. But enough negative criticism, let's talk about the visuals now and animation, to which I say that King B is improving a lot, each time the game passes you have improved this.
Good update, we all know Hubby is going to be doing a double blow with Nat soon. Next conversation to make it "hotter" after she just did a quad cock session, is to let him join in preparing the bulls.
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. Downloading issues? Look here.Agree on the fact that there is too much description of the scene which breaks the player’s flow and enjoyment. This as you stated comes from the dev’s literary ventures. He also repeats the same narrative, dialogues or thoughts a lot which gets annoying and superfluous in the long term. He still has to find the right balance for a VN. I did mention that to him a while back but he hasn’t changed anything. It’s going to get more and more difficult to write good scenes now that Nat is totally corrupted. We need less narratives and more dialogues in a VN.
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Well, Peter work in the porn industry, so he must still have connections... Nat would probably be tempted to make homemade videos like OnlyFans or work in the industry. She'd just have to convince Ethan or do it secretly.
I mean, since this game is still about finding routes everywhere, a continuation of the Fake Sick Peter
route wouldn't seem odd to me.Thanks for the update! Glad you are back after your accident. I'm sure it wasn't easy. Looking forward to seeing what you're able to do with this in the future.
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The onlyfans angle is already in play with Jenna. Unless you find out Peter is the one who put her on it.Well, Peter work in the porn industry, so he must still have connections... Nat would probably be tempted to make homemade videos like OnlyFans or work in the industry. She'd just have to convince Ethan or do it secretly.
I mean, since this game is still about finding routes everywhere, a continuation of the Fake Sick Peter
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This is a good and valid point. I do notice I have the habit of describing the scenes like in a book. Which eats up the time I can use for dialog and other dynamics. Can you recommend Any other vn as a good example I can learn from?
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Eva Kiss' "Good Girl Gone Bad" and "Our Red String" come to mind. She hits a good balance of relying mostly on dialogue and inner thoughts and not so much on the exposition.
I don't understand now what's the point of continuing this story Nat has no more brakes, she takes dicks by the thousands, what's the point of continuing in something already seen and reviewed. adding a dick more or less doesn't make sense anymore, putting her pregnant with Darrell, my interest has worn out, too much repetitiveness, it's like watching an animal in agony, you just wait for it to die.
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Check out the recent "My Husband's Boss." Even though it is a kinetic novel it does a really good job of visual storytelling with minimal dialogue or narration. It also advances manually to create the illusion of animation without using animation. It is a very interesting work in the same wheelhouse. Just don't take it as a prompt to start over and fix what isn't broke. Your prose is very effective in differentiating routes that use similar scenes.