I’m writing a story. Any new ideas you might like to share?
The problem with this game is that it doesn't have a coherent plot... the developer tried to please everyone and ended up pleasing no one...
What you should have done was create characters with consistent personalities, creating choices that didn't distort the personalities of the protagonists...
Path 1... If a wife is tired of her marriage, she starts cheating and the marriage must end with a fight and divorce. ..
Path 2... If a wife is tired of her marriage, she finds a husband who loves her and is willing to become a cuckold and voyeur in order not to lose her.
Here (just an example), the wife is the protagonist, and it is unrealistic that in one path she humiliates her husband and in another she feels humiliated by him...
With choices, the story must change, but the personalities of the characters must not change. . Otherwise, they become empty puppets and the story becomes stupid.
When the characters' personalities change, the author usually loses the original inspiration that led them to write a story that they had to modify to please everyone...
This way, the fans are all left unsatisfied, and the writer loses the desire to write the story because the paths have diverged to such an extent that it is impossible to find a logical narrative connection.
It would have been better to write different kinetic novellas rather than forcing the same game to contain them all.
Just my 2 cents