VN HTML Abandoned A Day in the Life Of [v0.08] [Erneiros]

[Erneiros]

I have to agree with the person who said the NTR feels very forced.
Like, I have no interest into seeing the girls with other men (forcibly) than the MC...
It's too bad because the concept is actually great.

Ntr is unavoidable, so I'll skip, good luck with your game.

So I did some research on this and technically there's no NTR in the game (yet). NTR is only with spouses, wives and girlfriends and a daughter is not one of those. When there is NTR I will probably make it avoidable.

Either way, just out of curiosity, why is NTR a problem? Maybe I might change it in future releases.

 

[KurosU]

why is NTR a problem?

It's just personal preference. Many others fine with it and even like NTR, I'm fine with NTR but prefer netori. Just make the story the way you want it, you can't please everyone and trying to do that might even hinder your creativity.
And while daughter technically is not NTR, it can be considered NTR if the daughter has some romantic or sexual relationship with family member. Even it is not the case, some people still feel that it falls into NTR as the daughter is somehow still being stolen from the family.

 

[TheSluttyThing]

Then maybe im playing a different game. But yeah, why you even talk to me if you dont like criticism.

Duaghter is not equal to Duaughter. If you're bashing someone for his writing, you should rather be perfect while doing so.

So I did some research on this and technically there's no NTR in the game (yet). NTR is only with spouses, wives and girlfriends and a daughter is not one of those. When there is NTR I will probably make it avoidable.

Either way, just out of curiosity, why is NTR a problem? Maybe I might change it in future releases.

You won't hit everyone's taste, so don't try to appeal to everyone and just create what you enjoy, or it will pretty soon suck the joy out of you.
Making anything avoidable is a good move to get a wider spread, but you're coming off like a people pleaser and this will hurt you in the long run. At least, that's my experience in that matter

 

[Erneiros]

It's just personal preference. Many others fine with it and even like NTR, I'm fine with NTR but prefer netori. Just make the story the way you want it, you can't please everyone and trying to do that might even hinder your creativity.
And while daughter technically is not NTR, it can be considered NTR if the daughter has some romantic or sexual relationship with family member. Even it is not the case, some people still feel that it falls into NTR as the daughter is somehow still being stolen from the family.

Duaghter is not equal to Duaughter. If you're bashing someone for his writing, you should rather be perfect while doing so.


You won't hit everyone's taste, so don't try to appeal to everyone and just create what you enjoy, or it will pretty soon suck the joy out of you.
Making anything avoidable is a good move to get a wider spread, but you're coming off like a people pleaser and this will hurt you in the long run. At least, that's my experience in that matter

Thank you both for the replies and the feedback. And I won't try to please too many / all people since that's going to be impossible as you said. It is a sort of chyoa, so I try to give the player as much option as possible, within limits of course.

Also, thank you for the duaghter / duaugther thing, I hoped someone would notice, because I was not going to waste anymore time on it

 

[Panther7]

The game has a good concept. I also liked your take on not having the videos autoplay. The only suggestion I would make is to have the father look a tad younger, considering his "sister" looks 20 years younger than him. Overall I look forward to what you have in store for future content.

 

[Grandy_UiD]

This is a super cool idea. I'll keep an eye on this one. The younger daughter is super cute.

 

[RockyBalboa1985]

So I did some research on this and technically there's no NTR in the game (yet). NTR is only with spouses, wives and girlfriends and a daughter is not one of those. When there is NTR I will probably make it avoidable.

Either way, just out of curiosity, why is NTR a problem? Maybe I might change it in future releases.

Ntr has 3 meanings. Netorare is your girlfriend cheating on you behind your back(I hate this) .
Netorase is the husband allowing the girlfriend or wife fucking others and he loves to watch(I hate this even more).
Netori is you stealing girls from other guys(I love this) but netori isn't considered ntr on this website only the other 2 are. The game already has ntr and it's unavoidable. But good luck with your game.

 

[klmr585]

NTR is NOT avoidable?!? sign me in! haha.. in your face, haters.. hahahaha... keep on dating your mamas and daughters and dogs...

btw. stealing the wife of a man wich is in a happy relationship is disgusting! what is the problem if the man want to spice things up even with a threesome when everybody is having fun?! sometimes even the wife wants her husband to have fun with other girls. so if you where that guy then everything would be great, right?

these discussions again and again. just play other games.

 

[exsomon]

nice concept, multiple branches can be very taxing for the developer
this one can be very complicated many braches game or abandoned mess

what are the names of the stars featured in the game?

 

[Erneiros]

Ntr has 3 meanings. Netorare is your girlfriend cheating on you behind your back(I hate this) .
Netorase is the husband allowing the girlfriend or wife fucking others and he loves to watch(I hate this even more).
Netori is you stealing girls from other guys(I love this) but netori isn't considered ntr on this website only the other 2 are. The game already has ntr and it's unavoidable. But good luck with your game.

Alright, I did not know this, thank you for your explanation. I was only aware of the Netorare.

nice concept, multiple branches can be very taxing for the developer
this one can be very complicated many braches game or abandoned mess

what are the names of the stars featured in the game?

The names are in the Credits in game (left bar).

Also, I aim for complicated and not for the mess. But every part is fully written out before it's implemented in the game so storylines do not create a mess and still make sense. Also I have a system in place that should keep everything organized.

 

[DKoW]

From my experience on this site, if one of the female characters has sex with anyone other than the main character, even if at the time of the story they had no intentions of getting together, people will cry NTR when it really isn't.

For example, the standalone spin-off story for the game "Single Again" was criticised heavily for the character Lily having sex with her boyfriend, in a flashback story, where the MC of the main story hadn't even had sex with her by that point and she was pretty hostile to the MC all the way up to the end of that spin off story.
This was apparently worthy of the spin off "needing" the NTR tag when it really wasn't within the context of the story

The only NTR that was actually in that game was her boyfriend cheating on her with her work colleague, but that doesnt count apparently.


Don't worry about the cries of "Forced NTR." Just make the story how you see fit and people will come and play it and you can make refinements as you go along.

I personally didn't see any NTR and the only time there was the potential for it, you allowed the player to skip it.

 

[konabwo]

vn i assume?

 

[DoctorVenom2]

Como que que instala o jogo ?

 

[Hock]

wow, I'm surprised by the number of characters, keep up the good work

 

[Erneiros]

vn i assume?

I like to see it as more then a regular VN, since there are more paths and choices, there's no bad or good choice. I try to make a solid cyoa (Choose Your Own Adventure) type of game.

Como que que instala o jogo ?

Extraer y ejecutar el archivo html.

 

[konabwo]

I try to make a solid cyoa

i am into sandboxes so kinda need some quests n "grind"
though some cyoas technically can be called semi-sbx / vns-into-sbx. if, say, it has some sbx UI elemets , some obtainable stats...and-or require some certain sequences of choices made (including locations within a text picked)

 

[Baralover001]

May I know if this game have a dad son gay incest content where the father have sexual relationship with his own son? Before I try to play this game?

 

[Madarahyuuga]

I liked the game although it's still short, the idea is very interesting I especially liked Cara's story, I really want to see what she will do now that she won't be a model. Maybe porn star? That would be a very interesting twist.

 

[diego68usa]

normally not a fan of html games either but this was easy to navigate and not a lot of grind. looking forward to story development (especially youngest daughter and the dad). mom seems way to easy but that is personal opinion. suggestion is do the story as per your desires/wishes as everyone has an opinion and you will not be able to meet all. great start dev! v/r Diego

 

[jerry03]

this game look kind of promising! let's wait for the evolution