Thank you for the suggestions, that's the plan
!!
and I'm flattered that you thought it was illustrations lol. I was using koikatsu party if u were wondering, but I made my own models from scratch :3
I see, that makes the very unique looks because they were made from scratch
. I haven't played Koikatsu Party itself ( so not fully aware of its features ), so good to know players can create model from scratch, which is cool. I played or at least checking out plenty games that uses KK renders, but I think most are using pre-made or stock models.
I've played the game and below are my feedbacks and/or reviews:
Renders are nice, with unique look and feel.
There are music (perhaps sound effects too
?).
The writing is good (English and grammar are outstanding, no jarring typos). It follows (text) novel approach I guess, spoken words are placed inside quotes. It is not very distinguishable from narrations (thoughts, actions, etc.). My suggestion is perhaps use a different styles (for example, different font or italics) so that the difference are very visible (for clarity, as most adult VN game players are used to it).
I think the game did a pretty good job illustrating the experience of the MC falling 'victim' to the
femdom of
Makima. This is a very niche fetish though which explains the lackluster interest. Nevertheless, the most important thing is to make game that pleases and enjoyable to you.
The lewd scenes is relatively short but they are complete.
Overall, pretty good for first release that can serve as part of your learning curve.
Looking forward to your next projects and to see how you will grow as game developer. Cheers.
