VN Ren'Py Abandoned A Deceitful Act [Short Stories v2.0] [Mr.Axxx]

BubbaRiley47 · Feb 13, 2023

Man this is hard to play, If you are going to make a game in English and that is not your first or even second language, get someone who is willing to help you out because this one hurts to read. I mean everything else about the game seems pretty good but hard to get past that dialogue

The Wizard of Oz · Feb 14, 2023

It looks not bad. But only in appearance, because the android port does not work, it is not even installed more accurately. I tried Joyplay but it works disgustingly with android 12. It's a pity.

shio0o · Feb 15, 2023

I can't save. This keep coming up. What to do?

Code:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
  File "renpy/common/00action_file.rpy", line 382, in __call__
AttributeError: 'module' object has no attribute 'HIGHEST_PROTOCOL'
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
  File "_layout/screen_load_save.rpymc", line 35, in script
  File "renpy/ast.py", line 923, in execute
  File "renpy/python.py", line 2235, in py_exec_bytecode
  File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_load_save.rpym", line 35, in <module>
  File "renpy/ui.py", line 298, in interact
  File "renpy/display\core.py", line 3276, in interact
  File "renpy/display\core.py", line 4110, in interact_core
  File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 1090, in event
  File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 1090, in event
  File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 1090, in event
  File "renpy/display\screen.py", line 726, in event
  File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 1090, in event
  File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 1297, in event
  File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 273, in event
  File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 1090, in event
  File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 1297, in event
  File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 273, in event
  File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 1090, in event
  File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 273, in event
  File "renpy/display\behavior.py", line 979, in event
  File "renpy/display\behavior.py", line 914, in handle_click
  File "renpy/display\behavior.py", line 329, in run
  File "renpy/common/00action_file.rpy", line 382, in __call__
  File "renpy/loadsave.py", line 415, in save
  File "renpy/loadsave.py", line 401, in save
  File "renpy/loadsave.py", line 49, in dump
AttributeError: 'module' object has no attribute 'HIGHEST_PROTOCOL'

kratos1234 · Feb 15, 2023

Marisadge said:
Compressions

ADeceitfulActEpisodes1-7-7-Win-Lin-compressed (415 MB) - Tested Windows 11

ADeceitfulActEpisodes1-7-7-Mac-compressed (400 MB) - Tested macOS Ventura

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Don't you have another link from another server like MIXDROP or gofile? because the current one only cuts the download or is very slow

sunqian3000 · Feb 16, 2023

It's definitely a great game. But are the last few updates a little off topic, or is the author deliberately trying to make some stylistic changes.

Wildbill5150 · Feb 19, 2023

Does anyone have a compressed Android version?
They would be willing to share

Thank you for your time

leopold_00 · Feb 22, 2023

Thanks for upload but the game fails to install on android. Its like the file is corrupt and crashes after 1 min of installing. I have android 13 fyi.

TurboGaming1 · Feb 25, 2023

MOD WALK?

Michael_MAN · Mar 14, 2023

Well, I see why people here dislike the game. But the problem is in perception (their attitude towards the story).
It's very important to consider the whole game as your(MC's) dream or fantasy! If you manage to do this, you will enjoy it. Otherwise you'll end up listing game's disadvantages only.
What I exactly mean is:
There is some magic branch of plot but the main topic is all girls jumping at MC's cock. There is little story, at least now(but many scenes). And the game starts without any backstory. Just MC waking up and getting to fuck neighbours.
And here is my point. MC is you. The game is your dream. That's why you have no backstory and the girls are horny. It's just your fantasy. And there you just have sex with beatiful girls.
YOUR FANTASY DREAM

Nevertheless the typos are awful. I'm not a native speaker but even I noticed them there. Several phrases are mixed up between the speakers and that needs editing.
And ambient music should be added into the game. It's strange that there is music only in the menu.
I hope that the author won't abandon this project and in future updates will corect mistakes.

tanstaafl · Apr 24, 2023

I've played some poorly written games before, but this may be the first time that I felt a game actively killing brain cells with every click.

And yet I kept clicking, because I'm weak and...boobies.

ProofreadingRUS · Apr 24, 2023

Well. if you need a better proofreader, try ProofreadingRUS .

tanstaafl · Apr 24, 2023

ProofreadingRUS said:
Well. if you need a better proofreader, try ProofreadingRUS .

Might want to actually read the first bit of this one before volunteering. Literally goes from "sexes friends mom -> mom is evil cult leader -> summons evil succubus goddess -> MC is reincarnated god" in the number of frames it takes most games to introduce a character or two. It's that bad.

ProofreadingRUS · Apr 24, 2023

tanstaafl said:
Might want to actually read the first bit of this one before volunteering. Literally goes from "sexes friends mom -> mom is evil cult leader -> summons evil succubus goddess -> MC is reincarnated god" in the number of frames it takes most games to introduce a character or two. It's that bad.

Sounds good to me. I like the fantasy exageration.

tanstaafl · Apr 26, 2023

ProofreadingRUS said:
Sounds good to me. I like the fantasy exageration.

My point is that to proofread this and present an acceptable narrative will require you quintupling the the size of the game as it is. At least.

ProofreadingRUS · Apr 26, 2023

tanstaafl said:
My point is that to proofread this and present an acceptable narrative will require you quintupling the the size of the game as it is. At least.

I'll have to see it to believe it.
It can't be that difficult to fix.

tanstaafl · Apr 26, 2023

ProofreadingRUS said:
I'll have to see it to believe it.
It can't be that difficult to fix.

The problem isn't that the english is bad, I've actually seen way, way worse, it's that there is no narrative. The dialogue is basically 1 line per entire plot point with no expansion at all. No build up, no explanations, no background. It's just things like: "This is my friend" "Now we have sex" "Now we're in love" "This is my friends mom" "Now we have sex" "Now I've been drugged."

This an exaggeration, of course, but not by much. It's so ridiculously barren of any kind of actual writing that it's scary.

Though he does get more verbose during sex scenes...kinda:
example:

h "Am I a better fuck?"
m "Best... that old junk... Yes, there... You hit the spot..."
m "You... know how to use... your cock."
h "Damn, you have some moves too."
m "Faster... Fuck me better than anyone..."

It is as if he has a guide for making a VN that says "You need to establish this and this and this." So he writes a scene for "that and that and that".

ProofreadingRUS · Apr 28, 2023

Am I a better lover?
Well one down, many to go.
I see what you mean.
It needs a whole makeover, erase the whole line and put something else instead with an even better line.

El-Gandrino · May 25, 2023

Hmmm... Intertesting....

Me-ta-Xa · May 27, 2023

For those still interested in this game...