VN Ren'Py Abandoned A Deceitful Act [Short Stories v2.0] [Mr.Axxx]

[Jay4201]

Not to bad of a start. English seems a lot better then on pure love so far. I truly hope mc gets one up on that blonde hoe and ex boss cause ya that was total fuckery if I ever seen it. They need to go down! Lmao I hope mc comes out on top and not stay her little bitch. After how nice he was and she played him she needs to get it raw in the booty and taken down a notch lol

 

[Beast161616]

On android how do i hide the hud?

 

[lyfsavor]

REALLY short game! Lara is extremely promising though and the renders and animations are good, anxious to see where they take this story too. I was expecting more from something titled "acts 1&2" I guess.

 

[7empest5teele]

LOL alright, this game starts off trying SO desperately to get the player to believe that the MC has a big heart and is so caring, rather than the completely oblivious blind IDIOT that he is behaving like.
What, all of those instances were just coincidences that they played out exactly as they did, and he just can't put two and two together?
Come on now, I expected better from this VN, try and write a story that's compelling at least, one that doesn't make the player feel like a complete moron by having to make obvious wrong choices, get a decent translator, I am guessing this was initially written in Italian or something, and some of the characters really need a makeover to show them as women, instead of men with women bodies.
The 2 full and 3 mini sex scenes were done properly though, so it has that going for it I suppose.
This is just what I am seeing from my end, take it as you will, and hopefully, it can improve with other constructive criticism like what I have typed out here.

 

[Vampira]

Is this still live?

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Is this still live?

I think it's a short story. May get an episode 3, after all other updates are done.
That's what happens when they don't stick to one game. You have to wait a lot.

 

[putzseila]

have a nice weekend to all


Episodes 1-3 version 3.0

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[Spfjolietjake]

have a nice weekend to all


Episodes 1-3 version 3.0

Mega

Thank you you as well

 

[fortuna95]

have a nice weekend to all


Episodes 1-3 version 3.0

Mega

 

[JokerLeader]

A Deceitful Act [Ep. 3 v3.0] [Mr.Axxx]

Original Size Win/Linux: 601 MB
Original Size Mac: 583 MB

Compressed Size Win/Linux: 89 MB
Compressed Size Mac: 71 MB

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[M_Trav]

looks interesting

 

[Adoringfan]

previous game was uh something, maybe worth a look?

 

[Bailz]

WTF did this game turn into made to do porn then forced to go somewhere with your gf and i bet she will be made to join in the porn to, some weird mother thing this game is just getting a little silly

 

[dan123456ggvgv]

looking forwd to more

 

[yihman1]

This game could be great, but it has some serious issues it needs to resolve first. The main problem with it in my opinion is that it lacks sufficient non-sexual interactions, and teasing.

Games Fall into a certain pattern.

Most Games:

Character development, a bit of teasing, sex scene, repeat.

A Wife and Mother:
Character development, teasing, repeat repeat repeat repeat... one day a sex scene... maybe?

This game: Sex scene, repeat.

 

[JeremyCole300]

Not bad. I really like Lara, and I'm really curious to see where the story goes.

 

[polojo635]

+1

 

[Thespaceboss26]

The game looks nice, quite short but sweet, can't wait for more.

 

[DavidCF]

Hi there,
Game is very enjoyable.
Finished chapter 3 and found some typoes and a character name swap.
Have attached a file for you to look at.
Regards,
David

 

[Macgamer]

The characters look great and there were some interesting sex scenes, but the writing needs a lot of help. Thats being very kind in my opinion. Might be better to start over with a better story much better written then what I just saw. Art works great writing bad.