Ren'Py A Family Venture [v0.09 v2 Alpha] [WillTylor]

[Madeddy]

Ok. Lets see. After some playing a first summary.

>This needs much work.<
Pro:

• Graphics style looks overall nice, render-quali is very good.
• Base story is ok. Mom + Sisters is nothing much new; on the other side, the dad in jail and with mafia is interesting.

Contra:

• Teen chars look really a bit too young. It's like the (big) heads of 16-17 year old people mounted on the body of 12-13 aged. Does'nt fit, looks Frankenstein'ish and a turn-off.
• Main map looks like squish. Icons and bg hurt the eyes.
• House navigation is'nt good. A simple top-down clickable house-plan or door-room navigation would be better imho.
• Image size only std HD. FullHD is minimum this days.

Bugs: Sidney sleeps on the couch and in bed with Lauren at the same time. Mom send me to her office and i land before the bathdoor@home. ->Cannot find office.
Notes:
- Webp images should by now standard with all the pro's. There is even a lossless mode wich is more efficient as other formats. (Or does mankind still write on stone-plates? )
- I did take a look in the dir-structur and noticed the "interface-images" dir with 145/163 images is 2 times there. A messy project struct slows the progress or worse...

The game is still young so i will look again and see. Keep it up.

 

[WillTylor]

Ok. Lets see. After some playing a first summary.

>This needs much work.<
Pro:

• Graphics style looks overall nice, render-quali is very good.
• Base story is ok. Mom + Sisters is nothing much new; on the other side, the dad in jail and with mafia is interesting.

Contra:

• Teen chars look really a bit too young. It's like the (big) heads of 16-17 year old people mounted on the body of 12-13 aged. Does'nt fit, looks Frankenstein'ish and a turn-off.
• Main map looks like squish. Icons and bg hurt the eyes.
• House navigation is'nt good. A simple top-down clickable house-plan or door-room navigation would be better imho.

Bugs: Sidney sleeps on the couch and in bed with Lauren at the same time. Mom send me to her office and i land before the bathdoor@home. ->Cannot find office.
Notes:
- Webp images should by now standard with all the pro's. There is even a lossless mode. (Or does mankind still write on stone-plates?)
- I did take a look in the dir-structur and noticed the "interface-images" dir with 145/163 images is 2 times there. A messy project struct slows the progress or worse...

The game is still young so i will look again and see. Keep it up.

Thanks for the critique. This game is the product of a beginner developer and beginner Daz user. A lot of the coding and navigation in the game are products of “how to Ren’py for beginners.” After my first game release I was lucky enough to attract the help of D.S.-sama, and he’s been helping me make a ton of improvements to the game. The code in our upcoming release will be much cleaner. All of the new images in version 0.02 were webp, and in the next release all the images in the game have been converted to webp with lossless compression. It does sound like you are playing an older version of the game, or did not apply the bugfix patch. The versions on my subscribestar and patreon don’t need the bugfix. I like your idea for the top down navigation. That is something that could possibly change in later versions. I appreciate you taking the time to critique the game. I feel user suggestions have already helped me make a lot of improvements.

 

[strenif]

Top down nav would be cool.

 

[Tottoro]

Pic of the mom? Is the mom son content worth it? Opinions! Thankx!

 

[Raps87]

is ther a walkethow

 

[Madeddy]

You mean walkthrough Raps87? Not to my knowledge. If the game content/story progresses there will surely one.

Thanks for the critique. This game is the product of a beginner developer and beginner Daz user. ... ... The code in our upcoming release will be much cleaner. ... ... It does sound like you are playing an older version of the game, ... ... I appreciate you taking the time to critique the game. I feel user suggestions have already helped me make a lot of improvements.

Thanks for the reply.
Its no problem to be a beginner. With time every task gets easier, stuff gets faster done. Rom wasn't build in 1 day...
Possible i tested a older game, it was from here + bugfix. I will see with the next version how it is.

Looking forward. Greets

 

[RG80100]

Thanks for this game, love it. The girls are really gorgeous and very naughty, and they squirt too ! Good work, keep it up. (There is a preview pic on the first page with the cheerleader who blow you, how trigger this event ?)

 

[WillTylor]

Thanks for this game, love it. The girls are really gorgeous and very naughty, and they squirt too ! Good work, keep it up. (There is a preview pic on the first page with the cheerleader who blow you, how trigger this event ?)

Thanks! I’m glad you like the game. Right now the only way to trigger the event is to choose the NTR route while you are talking with Matt in the classroom, and then you go into the school bathroom during a weekday afternoon. However in the next update that is coming very shortly. There will be a way to trigger this event for those on the loyalty route as well.

 

[Meridian]

Will mc get scenes with mom if you are on ntr route? Idea of her whoring in club and classmate screwing her can be pretty cool but only if mc gets to fuck her plenty of times unlike most of other ntr games where mc just jerks off in a corner or something.

 

[PJWhoopie]

Pardon my ignorance, but where does the bugfix file go (which folder?)

 

[Frostling]

Any butt-love in this? Asking for a friend...

 

[echizen128]

Good stuff, but please change how the room navigation works. All rooms should be displayed in fixed positions, with the current room grayed out. Takes longer than it should to move around when you need to figure out where the room moved to.

 

[crashload]

The preview pic shows the mom stripping is she a stripper or only on NTR route ?

 

[markus T]

a stripper in general...teacher/stripper

 

[crashload]

so ntr a stripper and general stripper teacher ?

Other question are their any answers that I have to do or only give cash to mafia to avoid NTR ?

 

[Wild_Cat]

I cant find the way to trigger bj scene can someone help plzzzz

 

[markus T]

so ntr a stripper and general stripper teacher ?

Other question are their any answers that I have to do or only give cash to mafia to avoid NTR ?

I think its the same either way...she is teacher by day and stripper by night. Not sure that it changes from one path to the other.

 

[RedPillBlues]

So how big of a theme is NTR in this game going to be? The renders look really good but im not trying to get myself into one of those bad half and half NTR games.

 

[jamdan]

So how big of a theme is NTR in this game going to be? The renders look really good but im not trying to get myself into one of those bad half and half NTR games.

Most of the content is on the non-NTR route. NTR isn't the focus of the game, its there as a consequence of MC's action, or lack thereof.

 

[strenif]

Well currently anyway.