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JJJ84

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Running commentary:

1) gong = going (spelling)
2) don't make a choice a non choice (unless I'm missing something further down the road) first "choice" accept or not has (so far) equal conclusions.
3) Maddy, so far, is great, love her snark!
4) Sadie is cute AF, nice! (but I always liked that stock model, you did good making her just slightly different from stock).
5) You have "current LEPOS with DANNY at 50" I assume this is supposed to be SADIE?
6) Danny is super cute, but watch out for model looking underage if she's going to be a LI (ESPECIALLY with the braces!)
7) Nice job on the intrigue, but (and this is just my opinion) maybe don't explain it. I'm specifically talking about Maddy reaching for her gun... you know what.. nevermind, a lot of people don't pay attention and click fast, you are correct to explain.
8) If it isn't horrendosuly difficult, consider putting in a notes section for things like the back of Maddy's card. I'm guessing I'll want to refer to the prophecy later and won't remember it due to the game being an ongoing progress.
9) think about making an aoptional stat revealer. I'm not a coder, but I'm guessing choices made perhaps define your character? Like first choice, if you take the money you're adverturous, if you don't you're cautious. at Right or left choice if you choose left again, you're cautious, if right, adventurous? Or I'm totally wrong and it's just fake choices (which are bad IMO).
10) Heh, I retract all my 1 path from above stuf with "I never really had a choice, did I?" Nicely done!
11) Don't fall into the trope of not talking to people as you trust them. This ring has tingled at least 3 times and you haven't thought to ask Maddy why? Don't do that (though I suppose it's forgivable with the Cardinal's "Trust noon", but then you couldn't trust the cardinal, so you SHOULD trust someone!
12) NICE rendering and video of Maddy! (also, of COURSE you're going to peek (and reload if you get caught, lol! :) )
13) Heh, lol "I JUST turned 18 today!" lol, don't use "I'm not a teen anymore" since 18 is still a "teen" Maybe, "I'm finally legal! Then something like "To vote, you perv" or something like that. Ah, crap! NICE humor!
14) Heh, buying your way into Danny's pants with fake money, also nice work on the render with Sadie's buttons.
15) OK, dude, no WAY the render of Danny is 19.5 years old I'd (barely) buy that she turned 18 a month ago, but not 1.5 years ago.
16) Sigh... you've got it all worked out don't you... it's like you're reading my critique in advance and responding to it...
17) Well... Nicole is now number 1 unless her personality sucks.... Also "she likes to watch" Planned tag harem? Or at least a throuple?
18) No need to spell out "Maddy is afraid" you did a good render of her face, anyone with a soul knows she's afraid.
19) wonderfully done with the emotions! add a comma after "broken" in her contorted, broken, naked body.
20) and crap, damned onion ninjas, nice writing!
21) I spent 10 minutes google translating the last part and wouldn't even attempt the Greek and then you just gave it to me, you bastard!!!
22) Wendy go... Wendigo? Wendigo might fit......
23) Karina just moved up to number 2 spot, possibly number 1 depending on upcoming stuff with Ncole vs. Karina
24) MC best not be a full Fng Priest in a PORN game!!!!!
25) AH!!! So that's why Maddy looks older, used too much mana, did ya? Went a little Blood magic, did ya?
26) Nice to be proven correct on the Wendigo thing.

Nicely done, the action is good enough to keep me hooked despite no lewds (I like good writing/story over lewds anyway) the characters are interesting and you left me longing for the next update. Gonna copy/paste this into ratings with a 5 star.
Dude, you really should use spoiler tags for your Chapter 3 comments (considering Chapter 3 just came out today on this thread).

I mean, personally, it doesn't really affect me since I finished Chapter 3 already before seeing your post, but other people who didn't play through it yet will pretty much get spoiled by your post.
 
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Anon4990

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Man I'm really digging this one. Its still quintessentially Pixieblink but now with heaps of religious research and script hardening mixed in.
Was the scene where the statue is
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based in Pietà by any chance?
 
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faradhii

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Dude, you really should use spoiler tags for your Chapter 3 comments (considering Chapter 3 just came out today on this thread).

I mean, personally, it doesn't really affect me since I finished Chapter 3 already before seeing your post, but other people who didn't play through it yet will pretty much get spoiled by your post.
You're correct, I thought I'd couched things in enough vague terms to not make sense until after you played it, but a couple things MIGHT stick out. Still If I read it and hadn't played, I'd be "WTF is this guy talking about?"
 

Pixieblink

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Man I'm really digging this one. Its still quintessentially Pixieblink but now with heaps of religious research and script hardening mixed in.
Was the scene where the statue is
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based in Pietà by any chance?
Uh, nope. I actually had to look it up :)
But it DOES tie in nicely with the Vatican now doesn't it?

Hey, may squeeze that into a future update. Assuming you don't mind.
 

JJJ84

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You're correct, I thought I'd couched things in enough vague terms to not make sense until after you played it, but a couple things MIGHT stick out. Still If I read it and hadn't played, I'd be "WTF is this guy talking about?"
I just try not to risk it.
Vague or not, if I talk about specific narrative spoilers/quotes from game, I use inline spoilers tag (as I did on my chapter 3 thoughts).
But if I talk about narrative in chunks of volume which are spoilery, I just end up using block spoiler tag.

For the 5 days or so, I think it's best to use spoilers tag so other people don't inadvertently get exposed to it.
But after that time, I think it's pretty safe to spoiler talk (if they get spoiled, well, the game's been out for 5 days or so, that more than enough time which enough people played the game already, so they only have themselves to blame)
 

DariusStrada

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Huh, I downloaded the update - Chapter III - but the blonde girl says it's all that it is and the game doesn't advance to the newest chapter. Any help?
 

BarbarrossaNA

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Thanks for the suggestion, but I really don't know what to offer for a $5 tier. And I feel like if I'm going to add another tier there should be some kind of reward associated with it.

uh, doesn't patreon allow you to slap a couple of extra bucks on if you feel like it?
In any case thanks for at least considering it. Starving dev's need all the help they can get. :rolleyes:

And I'm glad you enjoyed the game.

I don't care about the 'offer' is for the 5 dollar tier.. as a matter of fact offer the same as the 1 dollar tier with the phrase..

For those who don't want or need more then the first tier but really like the game and want to show some additional support without breaking their piggy banks. Just know I really do appreciate it! (We call this one the Barbarrossa Tier)


Addition: You really don't have to call it the Barbarrossa Tier.. but I would bet you'd get quite a few in this one as time goes on.. maybe even upgrades from the 1 dollar tier who feel the same way I do! I mean if you only get two.. that's like 10 additional 1 dollar Patreons.
 

sdawg1234

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grrr waiting until May for next update. Can't really complain since 3 came so quick but I need more of this story. Looking good so far keep it up dev.
 

JJJ84

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grrr waiting until May for next update. Can't really complain since 3 came so quick but I need more of this story. Looking good so far keep it up dev.
Refer to both posts below:

Pixieblink end of update says next update will come first week of May 2022, but I'm assuming this was before the patreon poll?
Guessing since you're sticking with Sins for now with roughly 3 weeks interval releases, Chapter 4 is coming second week of April?
Ya, should have corrected that before I released the game.
Honestly slipped my mind.

I will be releasing new updates every 2 or3 weeks for the foreseeable future. The Prof II is on the backburner and I will work on it in my spare time. Not abandoned, but certainly... slowed down.

Gunning for the first week of April for chapter IV.
Or version v.0.02115.9345 :)

Whichever you prefer.
 
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ArturiousDesign

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One question: can I corrupt some Nuns?

I just wanna play a game where you become a priest and get to enjoy a cast of sexy nuns with varying personalities ...

I just wanna baptize them with the Holy seed, is that too much to ask for? Lol jk
 

TheDick69+

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As a "professor" fan naturally I had to play this game and I wasn't disappointed. It was great! I'll promise a review after next update, even if I'nm cedrtain that gime will pass my update test. (My update test means that it should feel natural to go on playing the game after an update, some games have failed that heavily. Then I would have been ready to give the game a 5* review but end up with a much lower and give the thread an Ignore after that.) Keep up the good work Dev! (y)
 
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Pixieblink

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One question: can I corrupt some Nuns?

I just wanna play a game where you become a priest and get to enjoy a cast of sexy nuns with varying personalities ...

I just wanna baptize them with the Holy seed, is that too much to ask for? Lol jk
That's a tall order.
Hmmm....

Hey, Sister Bernadette is a nun! :ROFLMAO:
I would have thought she was a giant buzz kill as far as fap material goes, but who am I to judge?

ALL the Sorores Misericordae are nuns.
 
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