Gorse
MC knows the FBI agents, but their names are missing in that dialogue (maybe intended, maybe not?!)
Intended, for every name I have to assign a letter to it, they will only show up once more so it saves me confusion
Same with Pete, I didn't actually think you would speak to him again initially (It should of been Pete though, not man)
I was a bit confused in the BJ scene with Jazz by the short "interruptions" of the MC being with Elle...
maybe your intention was to show that MC is more affected to Elle (and therefore thinking of the sex with her even when being blowed by Jazz?!).
There should be no interruptions, short or otherwise
A typo short before the flight trip with Casey about that she should WEAR something special, not WERE ;-)
Proof reading fail
There's an image missing during the sex scene with Casey
You are the second person to mention this, yet in my game and in the code it is there. Looking up I just saw why though lol. image 6_img114 was originally called scene 6_something (it still is in image folder) but I have redefine the image name for the gallery code. In the gallery it will be something like img114 = 6_something, back in the code for the scene I change it from 6_something to img114 so the gallery picks it up, you can see what I have done.
for me, the sex scene with Casey would be even nicer, if you inserted a few more renders after image "6_297" for a smoother transition to the image "6_298".
She "strips" down her necklace and after that... bammm! she's fully naked (MC as well) and rubs on his d*ck - that's much too fast and abrupt. Give this scene more spice of that moment when Casey strips down...maybe revealing her tits slowly, teasing a bit... That could be, well just in my opinion, much more immersive and wholesome
I can only work with the assets I have, I tried a few ways to do exactly what you said but it just wasn't working, the morphs in the top wouldn't play along.