Just a couple things I noticed.
When you explore the house you visit the basement, is there a reason you won't allow the player to take the ladder before going to the attic? I see no reason to make you backtrack to the basement if you have already been there.
When talking to the previous owner you give the option of "That's my mom" When clicking on it you get the message that it isn't a good idea. To me one of the more frustrating things I find in games is when you are given an option that isn't really an option.
There is a discrepancy when talking to Eve after deciding to go buy milk. She asks if you have given any thought to how to make money. For some reason you can't answer truthfully that you have and that you had just spoken to the previous owner who was going to speak with his friend about the issue. Since the game is fairly linear at this point, there is no way you wouldn't have spoken to him before Eve, so the omission is glaringly obvious.
I wanted to add, don't worry about responders that just came to whine about how this isn't their type of game or that there should be more content. This is literally the earliest you can get into development, there isn't going to be a whole lot going on. They are lucky you included a lewd scene at all this early in development. Keep your chin up, create what you want to create and follow your passions.