Assassin_Prime
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Honestly, I was going to say the same, but you already covered everything way better than I could. Well said.
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Thank you for taking the time to comment on that.
I think my game is realistic in the sense that the characters are intelligent; Monica would not leave her husband to be the protagonist's secondary love interest. To me, that is intelligent.
Besides, at no point did I make it clear in the story that the protagonist and Monica are dating.
As the protagonist and another character are.
Many people believe that; even Monica is not included in the MC's potential harem.
I wrote a scene where the two characters talk about it.
Perhaps because Monica is the most developed character so far, it seems like they are dating, or perhaps because they treat each other very affectionately, it seems that way, but no, they are not.
I don't want to give any spoilers, but in the future, it will become clear what the protagonist will really do with Monica, but that will be several chapters later.
That's the problem; as I said before, my mistake was thinking that people would play and wait to find out what happens in the next chapter, but no, they already think the story is about NTR.
But hey, it's my fault for creating a very long story that I can't explain and make everything clear in each chapter.
As I also said before, I should create more of a season than an episode, so that nothing is left unexplained or leads to misinterpretation.
It was good to hear your opinion; thank you for taking the time to write what you think of my game.
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You left the game when the text came out that is the end of chapter 2 right?
s_1_n
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Damnit, just when the story gets freaking interesting.
Now i've got to wait at least half a year for the next chapter.
Now i've got to wait at least half a year for the next chapter.
Lynava
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The famous disadvantage of good AVN is the waiting time for updates.
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TKdropemoff
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Ight I can say I appreciate you taking your time to respond to everyone's concerns about monica and this whole ordeal.. I will say i respectfully disagree about the intelligent aspect.. Nothing is intelligent about what she is doing.. Hell the mc is the biggest clown in this whole ordeal.. He is also not intelligent either.. If she will not leave her husband, then this whole fling thing with her is a waste of time..
Cuz a self respecting person would also leave any situation like this.. If we trying to talk "realism" most men would not dip there toes into this whole monica ordeal.. Because most of the time, this stuff ends badly IN REAL LIFE..
But i digress... As a harem mostly player, I don't like being a second option in a harem game... If Monica will not leave her husband. Than imo, It should be an option to turn her down as soon as that convo came up. Because me personally I don't do FWB, or this whole ordeal.. But see you wrote yourself in a box, because having something like that, breaks the whole story you trying to write, since it seems she is IMPORTANT to the plot... But I also digress again. If she's still so in love with her husband then let her just be with her husband, and let the MC just live his life... Tbh man with monica lies and other stuff, she is a bad character tbh... To much baggage.
Having an option to turn her down giving her 2 choices. 1. Divorce and leave her cuck husband, or 2. Her and the MC stop all this they are doing, and go there separate ways.
would have put alot of talk about her and her husband to rest.. Because like I said why would I want to be with someone who only sees me as a second option and a extra cock, to her husband when I can have girls who see me as there 1 and only option? Why would I want to stick around as her cuck of a husband is holding all the power in his hands in this situation??
Sorry man it's a turn off.. And alot of people is not going to stick around for chapters on chapters being a clown in this circus in this whole situationship involving monica... But seeing how this got the kinectic novel tag, we are at the mercy of you, aka the developer...
Maybe in the future I will check back and see how this resolve itself.. But that's a very low possibility ... Good luck!
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Acsuka
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Well DEV, you really confused the players...
Monica tells MC that she has a son.... Why?
It turns out that she has a daughter, and Kira is the one whose virginity MC took the night before... Why did Monica lie? The reason you wrote is the most stupid thing in the world... Don't put this nonsense in the players' mouths, that if she tells the truth that she has a daughter, MC will be overprotective and have a lot of questions... Nonsense, she should have heard the truth right away.
Another interesting thing: MC lives alone in a very big house, and supposedly adores her children... Why is there not a single picture of the children anywhere in the house? Am I the only one living in a special country and culture, that all my friends and relatives have at least one family photo somewhere in the apartment? Moreover, a widowed man, who only has his children left, it is not a sign of shame or weakness if there is a photo of my beloved children in the house... Anyone who thinks otherwise should be judged... He talks about his children for three episodes and doesn't show anyone a single miserable photo of them,(once to Kira about the twins, but we don't see the photo) it's funny...
Monica tells MC that she has a son.... Why?
It turns out that she has a daughter, and Kira is the one whose virginity MC took the night before... Why did Monica lie? The reason you wrote is the most stupid thing in the world... Don't put this nonsense in the players' mouths, that if she tells the truth that she has a daughter, MC will be overprotective and have a lot of questions... Nonsense, she should have heard the truth right away.
Another interesting thing: MC lives alone in a very big house, and supposedly adores her children... Why is there not a single picture of the children anywhere in the house? Am I the only one living in a special country and culture, that all my friends and relatives have at least one family photo somewhere in the apartment? Moreover, a widowed man, who only has his children left, it is not a sign of shame or weakness if there is a photo of my beloved children in the house... Anyone who thinks otherwise should be judged... He talks about his children for three episodes and doesn't show anyone a single miserable photo of them,(once to Kira about the twins, but we don't see the photo) it's funny...
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Lynava
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Is Monica even a LI?
MC just said that she will never be the main girl because she slept with another guy
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About the first point, regarding the protagonist’s daughter, please try not to give spoilers.
As for the photos, yes, it could be a mistake on my part, but it can also be justified by the fact that he recently moved into his new house, which is mentioned several times in the story.
And about not showing the children, that’s because I have a rule of not including unnecessary information, since I might change my mind later—whether in dialogue or in renders.
Cheers, and thanks for being so observant.
Acsuka
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I corrected it. Sorry. Unfortunately, you didn't convince me about the photos, because I think 1-2 innocent pictures of the children can't influence future conversations. But I'll tell you this, one thing is for sure, everyone is very curious to see what the princess looks like... And hopefully it will be LI...
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Thanks for covering the spoiler.
And about the princess, yes, she’s going to be a very important character.