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Avaron1974

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I tried so hard because a couple of the girls looked great but by gawd .... that MC.

It's like someone typed "peaked in College frat cringe" into GhatGPT and this is what it came up with.

I don't understand the purpose of Monica claiming to be in love with her husband. She's off fucking around behind his back and doesn't even attempt to defend him when he's being mocked. If that's her loving her husband I don't wanna know what she's like with people she hates.

Yeah, the girls are great and if I cover up the chat box so I can't read it it's awesome.
 

Assman_6969

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What the fuck did I just start playing? Here we go with another retard mc who has money car and can do whatever and fuck any chics and we are some idiot playing some dumb shit that is not something that ever happens. I would have fucked Monica once and then told her after when you come to your senses I will be here or maybe I won't but I ain't bout to be your play friend when you get bored. Glad we met and had some fun and sure there may be something between us but there was before but you ran off and said nothing. Now after all this time we meet up and if she isn't all about dropping hubby and being loyal only to us then now the mc can ghost her & when or if they cross paths mc just says I don't come 2nd to anyone so I just did whatI thought was how we do shit and just ghost the other like you did now if thats all have fun with ur dbag husband, you are not the only woman I was seeing or fucked and one who is an adult is waiting for me cya
 

Avaron1974

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What the fuck did I just start playing? Here we go with another retard mc who has money car and can do whatever and fuck any chics and we are some idiot playing some dumb shit that is not something that ever happens. I would have fucked Monica once and then told her after when you come to your senses I will be here or maybe I won't but I ain't bout to be your play friend when you get bored. Glad we met and had some fun and sure there may be something between us but there was before but you ran off and said nothing. Now after all this time we meet up and if she isn't all about dropping hubby and being loyal only to us then now the mc can ghost her & when or if they cross paths mc just says I don't come 2nd to anyone so I just did whatI thought was how we do shit and just ghost the other like you did now if thats all have fun with ur dbag husband, you are not the only woman I was seeing or fucked and one who is an adult is waiting for me cya
Be a bit stupid of her to drop her husband considering the MC told her she will always only be a side chick.
 
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OWSam000

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Just see the kinetic novel tag after playing all three chapters. I think we had better leaving to DEV create his own 'realistic' fantasy story cause he clearly dead set his perspective on his story. The useless discussion/argument can end now before it gets worse.
 
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Maybe you're right; those who want harem stories don't care if the story is unrealistic, they just want to sleep with all the characters and have them be theirs alone.
I would have had Monica simply leave her husband, but it seemed a little simple and boring to me; I thought it was more exciting and hot for MC to sleep with a married friend and have her husband give his approval.
But anyway, unfortunately, people aren't seeing it that way.
Thanks for commenting, sorry for not responding to your comment sooner.
It's not realistic tho... that's just your excuse.

You deny reality and pretend you aren't purely responsible for what you wrote and made.

People don't want to eat shit in their sandwich... it's not rocket science. If you make them eat shit don't be surprised they hate it lmao.
 

Scooter_Tramp

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I don't know how to answer that, haha.
Jony is a fairly common name in the country where I live.
It's derived from Jonathan.
In other countries, it's derived from John, like John Wick, haha.
Joney Wick would have had less impact as we would have all thought of Joanie Cunningham from Happy Days.

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John or Johnnie or Johnny would be better.
 
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YogSothoth1982

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And about Monica and the harem: it's never mentioned in the script that Monica will be part of the harem; in fact, Monica already knows she won't be part of it. There's an entire scene where the two of them talk about it.
That's why Monica doesn't want to leave her husband so she won't be alone.
Well, I don't understand what she's doing in the game. If she's not going to be part of the harem, the whole story and the relationship with her are a waste of time.

The first thing you should have considered is what fans of the genre (harem romance in this case) are looking for. Monica is netorase from the perspective of the "other guy." She's not your girlfriend/wife and never will be, so you only have casual sex with her. So, if she's never going to be part of the harem, why do I want the MC to have a relationship with her? It's wasting time and scenes that could be used with girls who are going to be part of the harem. The harem is what the fans want.

It's incredible that you think sleeping with your married friend is wrong, and that in order to keep sleeping with her, she should leave her husband.
What I think is you have a fundamental error. You want to make a romance harem game, but you haven't understood what fans of the genre like. Having a guy share his wife with you is a different kind of fantasy than a romance harem fantasy, and while some people will enjoy both, many won't. In fact, it won't appeal to too many romance harem fans.

The expectation is that she'll leave her husband, and if that doesn't happen, that she'll disappear from the game and make way for girls we'll be interested in (this is harem material).

What you've done is include a fetish that isn't among the most popular for fans of the genre you're targeting. And make it the majority of the game.
 

Bychipi

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What the fuck did I just start playing? Here we go with another retard mc who has money car and can do whatever and fuck any chics and we are some idiot playing some dumb shit that is not something that ever happens. I would have fucked Monica once and then told her after when you come to your senses I will be here or maybe I won't but I ain't bout to be your play friend when you get bored. Glad we met and had some fun and sure there may be something between us but there was before but you ran off and said nothing. Now after all this time we meet up and if she isn't all about dropping hubby and being loyal only to us then now the mc can ghost her & when or if they cross paths mc just says I don't come 2nd to anyone so I just did whatI thought was how we do shit and just ghost the other like you did now if thats all have fun with ur dbag husband, you are not the only woman I was seeing or fucked and one who is an adult is waiting for me cya
Don't quit the game when the Chapter 2 completion indicator appears.
If it says Chapter 2 completed, and the game is called A.L.I. History Chapter 3,
it means you still have to play Chapter 3.
You can play it by continuing, not quitting the game.
 
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New cover, new previews… but still the same Monica inside :ROFLMAO:

I just want to say, this is only my personal opinion, not meant as an attack on anyone.

There’s actually a game with almost the same setup. The main LI is a married woman but the difference is, she and her heart truly belong to the MC. They went through countless struggles, yet their love only grew stronger. Even with her husband still alive and living with her, it’s clear she’s with the MC in every way that matters.

Without spoiling too much: that game is A Mother’s Love. That’s how you make a married LI feel meaningful, not like a second option.
 

Lynava

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New cover, new previews… but still the same Monica inside :ROFLMAO:

I just want to say, this is only my personal opinion, not meant as an attack on anyone.

There’s actually a game with almost the same setup. The main LI is a married woman but the difference is, she and her heart truly belong to the MC. They went through countless struggles, yet their love only grew stronger. Even with her husband still alive and living with her, it’s clear she’s with the MC in every way that matters.

Without spoiling too much: that game is A Mother’s Love. That’s how you make a married LI feel meaningful, not like a second option.
But Monica no LI:rolleyes:
She's the one who moves the plot along a bit and fills in the time slots.:whistle:
 

Bychipi

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But Monica no LI:rolleyes:
She's the one who moves the plot along a bit and fills in the time slots.:whistle:
Yes, the game should really only be in Chapter 1.
But since creating these games takes a lot of time and work,
I had to cut it.
There's still a lot to go.
 
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Mrsexoo3

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New cover, new previews… but still the same Monica inside :ROFLMAO:
That doesnt change much considering Monica is still 80+% of the game. Most people who start playing this game will be looking forward to how the relationship with her develops because thats all there is basically till chapetr 3, so when it all ends in that weird deal, it honestly makes you think the whole game will be as bad.

Be a bit stupid of her to drop her husband considering the MC told her she will always only be a side chick.
Would it really? If she cared that much about her marriage would she have cheated on him several times already? It doesnt matter how many times the dev has her say she is in love with the guy, her actions show that she either hates him or just doesnt care about him in the slightest, so why would she want to stay with that man, who makes her unhappy and she would even have to sleep with him, when shes said she never onced enjoyed doing it.

If it is a money thing she could divorce him and take his money, not to mention the MC is loaded already and it is clear he would provide for her. So I fail to see much logic in any of her actions really. Hell, it would make more sense for her tell both the husband and the MC to fuck off and go find someone else, I just cant get over how silly the whole deal is.


Regardless of that, whats with the MC "iF sHE noT vIRGin or TouchED oTher mAn She caNt BE IN mE HareM"? Like, seriously? Monica cant be in the harem even when she lost her virginity to the MC? And that childish way of thinking of the MC contradicts the whole Monica situation anyway, since he is clearly open to share a woman. And also that means no milfs in the harem right? or any woman over 18, hell it would be hard to even find 18 yo virgins since the dev wants the story to be realistic

In the end the two prominent characters in the game are a walking contradiction, their actions dont coincide with the words they say and there isnt any logic in what they do, which doesnt make for a very compelling story, when you cant take the characters or scenarios seriously.

Honestly I had the hope the husband didnt really exist, there were hints of that, like when Monica talks on the phone with a woman and then lies to MC telling him she was talking to her husband, but it seems that it was just a red herring
 

Acsuka

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Yes, the game should really only be in Chapter 1.
But since creating these games takes a lot of time and work,
I had to cut it.
There's still a lot to go.
Do I understand what you're saying? You wanted to squeeze all the Monica scenes into the first episode, but it probably took longer because of Kira's story? You should have told the players that right away, because everyone is mad about Monica, that after 3 episodes there are still players who think Monica is LI... And now let me ask you a question: Is this a harem game in the classic sense, or a harem based on your fantasy...? Because the difference can be huge, and the comments clearly want a classic or romantic harem...
 
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Avaron1974

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Regardless of that, whats with the MC "iF sHE noT vIRGin or TouchED oTher mAn She caNt BE IN mE HareM"? Like, seriously? Monica cant be in the harem even when she lost her virginity to the MC? And that childish way of thinking of the MC contradicts the whole Monica situation anyway, since he is clearly open to share a woman. And also that means no milfs in the harem right? or any woman over 18, hell it would be hard to even find 18 yo virgins since the dev wants the story to be realistic
I think that's more the devs view on things.

It lines up with the whole "red pill manosphere" shite I keep hearing about.

How women must be pure and all that shit, value goes down when they have more sex partners yada yada yada.

Women that have been touched by other men are good for a fuck but not for a relationship.

Everyone is entitled to their own view on things, it doesn't touch my life in any way that's not the issue here. The main problem when someone tries to bring that to a character like this is they come across very immature.

I mean, they have the MC be this successful guy with a family and long term relationship which was pretty open to involve other women for both him and his wife. Then they have him talk like a drunk frat boy that's seen tits for the first time in his life. It's very jarring.

Would it really? If she cared that much about her marriage would she have cheated on him several times already? It doesnt matter how many times the dev has her say she is in love with the guy, her actions show that she either hates him or just doesnt care about him in the slightest, so why would she want to stay with that man, who makes her unhappy and she would even have to sleep with him, when shes said she never onced enjoyed doing it.

If it is a money thing she could divorce him and take his money, not to mention the MC is loaded already and it is clear he would provide for her. So I fail to see much logic in any of her actions really. Hell, it would make more sense for her tell both the husband and the MC to fuck off and go find someone else, I just cant get over how silly the whole deal is.
It seems more like she doesn't want to be alone.

If she leaves her husband she is going to be stuck as a side fuck while watching the MC with his main girls. That just seems like a pathetic place to willingly put yourself. Give up a man that loves her just to be a part time cum dump.

The problem with that kind of writing is it puts her in a bad spot. When he MC is acting like she's not worth being with then the players won't give a shit about her and then what's the point of her character?

As it stands I don't understand why the dev has done her character like that. It seems utterly pointless going to the effort of making a character, have her and the MC reconnect after his wifes death, put her into the love interest role and have players start to care about her character and then say she's just a side fuck.

She's put in the role of the MC being the love of her life and then him telling her he doesn't see her as a potential harem member. It just makes no sense.

Honestly I had the hope the husband didnt really exist, there were hints of that, like when Monica talks on the phone with a woman and then lies to MC telling him she was talking to her husband, but it seems that it was just a red herring
That's explained later between the lines. She was on the phone with her daughter that she was trying to hide from the MC until she was ready (as it's his kid it seems).

If it is a money thing she could divorce him and take his money, not to mention the MC is loaded already and it is clear he would provide for her.
The main problem there is he wouldn't. He doesn't see her as a partner or harem member or whatever. She's literally just there to empty his nuts into.

It's another matter if the husband does turn out to be a lie but then, she kept her (possibly his) daughter from him for years then potentially lied about being married. How could he trust anything she says?

I think her character model is great, well, all of the women are. But her character writing is terrible. Her and the MC don't come across well at all in places. Not to mention they have her daughter (possibly his) fall in love with him, talk about what a great guy he is while he's trying to push one of her closest friends into fucking him for money and just using her mother to fuck when he's bored.

It's in an odd spot is this game.

In some places it's really good and in others it's just weird as fuck.
 

herreraaa

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Man.... I started bcs the harem and incest tag but all I saw was girls talking about their bfs, MC's former gf basically using his love for her just for some pounding then going back to her husband...
That game is ridiculous
 
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Avaron1974

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Man.... I started bcs the harem and incest tag but all I saw was girls talking about their bfs, MC's former gf basically using his love for her just for some pounding then going back to her husband...
That game is ridiculous
You got the ex's part wrong.

He's using her for pounding not the other way around. He told her that even if she leaves her husband she'll never be his girl, just a side fuck.
 
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Mrsexoo3

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That's explained later between the lines. She was on the phone with her daughter that she was trying to hide from the MC until she was ready (as it's his kid it seems).
That makes this all situation even worse tbh.

And I agree that the game had been building her as a love interest. The amount of time the game spends on her, talking about their backstory, their relationship and then all of a sudden, it turns the MC only sees her as piece of meat, and even considers her some kind of used goods, or lower category of woman thats not fit to be with him on a serious relationship, and she just accepts that? if thats the mother of his child then wow. I truly dont know what to say about it anymore.

It is clear the MC is a piece shit for sure, and theres something seriously wrong with Monica as well. and her husband, and well, pretty much everyone on this game, theyre on drugs or something.
 
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