I really like this story, it has a good combination of real life and fantasy - too many girls though, I'm not sure if Riley suddenly finds out your involvement with Marissa, Harlow , Erika, Vanessa etc.... will she still be obtainable, also if you want only one girl - Riley can you stop with the others and just stay friends with them (No Sex etc...)
I'm not sure where the Sophia make out came from, So can you just be friends with all these women and help them without have a relationship with them, and concentrate on Riley?