Yes, the quality of the render work is really good, better than paperwork, because there were often enough twisted joints and the like ... but the characters seem impersonal and artificial in my opinion.
Amy in the Paperwork version had some kind of charisma, I'm missing that here.
Unfortunatly I don't understand what you're talking about. Aside from Amy most characters in the game have the same blank facial expression, horribly outdated low resolution models. The worst part of the game is the graphics, it is unfortunate that paperwork used HS 1 to make the images, but that's probably just because he didn't have access to anything better. The main character is supposed to be a hot girl, and while that is very subjective, a borderline anorexic is not attractive to most people I think. Besides if I'm going to spend hours rendering images of the main char I prefer to make the main character look attractive to me, if your taste in women differs a lot that is unfortunate. I don't know if this was meant as an insult, if you're trolling, but I'm giving you the benefit of the dought. While I happy to listen to suggestions on how I might improve my work, this kind of wage criticism is not helpful.
Are you annoyed by the excessive amount of free porn or do you want more? If you don't have a better suggestion than "do better" then you might just want to keep your opinion to yourself. If you don't like what I'm doing, find something else you like.
There were people who warned me that this could happen, and I should just go make my own game and naively I thought the people who weren't interested in what I was doing would just go find something else to look at.
I know I should just have ignored this message, but when you've spent countless hours working on something and then people show up just to shit all over it it is quite a bit annoying. Seriously dude, there are a few people who like what I'm doing, and would like to see more, however I don't feel like working when I'm pissed off so you are not helping. Kindy just find something else to look at if you don't like my work.