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VN Ren'Py A mod for ProjectSAGE

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trektant

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Aight, first up, some criticism for once. The line delivery often comes off as robotic. Thoughts are fine but their speech drones on, especially with how... I'll say, static the scenes are? The use of thoughts in place of continued movement is detrimental to the regular dialogue which is already lacking emotion. Not much tone of voice. It'd help to have some more exclamation! Within reason. But then I'm going off on very little right now and the mix with base game scenes is a bit messy.

Man I didn't give a fuck for that goth shirt at first but that ass certainly turned that around, hot damn.
I noticed you messed with the window blinds in the unused bathroom scene... 10/10 author! A true visionary if I've ever seen one.

Overall a nice little time, if held back by your recent troubles along with the continued awkward contrast with the base HS scenes. That said, turning Amy's bath time into a community event is all I need to see a bright future ahead :D

Edit: After some quick reloads it seems the morning drunk scene is unavoidable.
Edit 2: That's probably my fault. I skimmed the dev's sacred word and continued my old save... Didn't crash though. Hitting ignore kept things going.
 
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trektant said:
Edit: After some quick reloads it seems the morning drunk scene is unavoidable.
Edit 2: That's probably my fault. I skimmed the dev's sacred word and continued my old save... Didn't crash though. Hitting ignore kept things going.
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In my test run - with a new save - it did not fire at all.
Pictures look sweet, though. I am not going to coplain, I am glad that Gunsothegreat took this up, and I love what is there. Still I expected a little bit more after this time, but that's just me - I don't have the least idea how much effort is required to do this.
 
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trektant said:
Aight, first up, some criticism for once. The line delivery often comes off as robotic. Thoughts are fine but their speech drones on, especially with how... I'll say, static the scenes are? The use of thoughts in place of continued movement is detrimental to the regular dialogue which is already lacking emotion. Not much tone of voice. It'd help to have some more exclamation! Within reason. But then I'm going off on very little right now and the mix with base game scenes is a bit messy.

Man I didn't give a fuck for that goth shirt at first but that ass certainly turned that around, hot damn.
I noticed you messed with the window blinds in the unused bathroom scene... 10/10 author! A true visionary if I've ever seen one.

Overall a nice little time, if held back by your recent troubles along with the continued awkward contrast with the base HS scenes. That said, turning Amy's bath time into a community event is all I need to see a bright future ahead :D

Edit: After some quick reloads it seems the morning drunk scene is unavoidable.
Edit 2: That's probably my fault. I skimmed the dev's sacred word and continued my old save... Didn't crash though. Hitting ignore kept things going.
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I´ve often felt like P.S. was a first draft and the dialogue needs a complete re-write. There is a lot of repetition, like Amy constantly reminding you that all her clothes are too warm for the climate in her new home. Dialogue about stuff that really has nothing to do with the story and doesn't really add any depth to the character. I have mixed feelings about the inner thoughts throughout the game, personally I would have left other characters thoughts and motivations remain hidden and leave the player with the mystery of figuring out why those characters are doing what they are doing.
I decided to mostly focus on the graphics, and maybe condense the dialogue a bit (Making 20 images of the characters just standing around talking is in my opinion a waste of time.)
That being said, I wont be spending a lot of time on changing the dialogue other than trying to condense it a bit. If there is somebody out there who would like to take a shot at editing the script I would be all for that.

If you use an old save the new variables wont be set and since those are usually involved in anything new I add the script may not make any sense (on top of that I haven't ironed out the transitions between the new scenes and the old, so they will often feel a bit sudden)

That being said, day 2 is at the moment a bit of a mess, there's a lot of missing transition between scenes which I will do eventually, I expect I'll do the scenes from the first three days rough and then smooth out the missing stuff and maybe work on the dialogue a bit. Be prepared for a rough ride.
 
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In my test run - with a new save - it did not fire at all.
Pictures look sweet, though. I am not going to coplain, I am glad that Gunsothegreat took this up, and I love what is there. Still I expected a little bit more after this time, but that's just me - I don't have the least idea how much effort is required to do this.
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It should run if you copy the contents of the zip into the base game folder (the folder where the "game" folder is) I do have the bathroom cheat mod in my game directory, which may be the reason my bathroom script crashes the game, I'm not sure what scripts were changed by that mod.

Did the game not run or the new very drunk beginning?
 
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Since I am currently helping another developer upgrading their graphics to daz studio renders, my spare time is split between these two projects, and I do give priority to the other project since Project sage is just done for fun.
 
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Oh, and I forgot to fix the starting images for the wake up not very drunk, the images are in the folder but at the moment you wont see them.
 
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It should run if you copy the contents of the zip into the base game folder (the folder where the "game" folder is) I do have the bathroom cheat mod in my game directory, which may be the reason my bathroom script crashes the game, I'm not sure what scripts were changed by that mod.

Did the game not run or the new very drunk beginning?
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Just the scene with the drunk morning did not happen, though I made Amy drink everything she was offered - sge even fell asleep at the right place. I am pretty sure I placed the files at the right place, all the rest worked fine. Great pics! Love to see the outfits in action!
 
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Just the scene with the drunk morning did not happen, though I made Amy drink everything she was offered - sge even fell asleep at the right place. I am pretty sure I placed the files at the right place, all the rest worked fine. Great pics! Love to see the outfits in action!
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Thats odd, I'll take a look at the script later tonight and see if I find a problem, if anyone else is having that problem please let me know.
 
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Gunsothegreat said:
Thats odd, I'll take a look at the script later tonight and see if I find a problem, if anyone else is having that problem please let me know.
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I spent, like, maybe 2 whole minutes to start a new game and got the same problem.
I should disregard my respect for devs more often. I almost missed some contextualized titties.
 
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Gunsothegreat said:
Hello everybody, I'm still waiting for paperwork to continue his game ProjectSAGE, but I'm loosing hope. So I started modding the game, updating the graphics with daz models, fixing some of the strange grammar, cutting out content that don't add anything to the game. While I'm just doing this for fun, I would be interested in hearing from other fans of the game which parts of the game you liked or disliked, and what you would like to see in the game. I'm just about finished with the first day in the game and I'll probably post my mod here for those interested once I feel there is enough content done for people to enjoy. I might do a poll on what to cut from the game and what people want more of once I've finished with the firs couple of days in the game.
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Project SAGE for me (and I assumed for everyone?) was uniquely enjoyful thanks to the butt stuff. And it's not just a simple, run-of-the-mill butt stuff. There's no odd/obligatory "do her in the ass instead" option in every second sex scene. There's anal masturbation. Butt plugs. Exclusivity of MC's masturbation taste towards the anal self penetration. Her interest in developing her butthole as an erogenous zone.

Like, one of the hottest scenes (for me) was when she peeked on boys watching porn... when she came to tutor/babysit WITH A BUTTPLUG IN (OMG, and close to the start of the game, and while innocent otherwise, so rare and precious!). And she... started to give in to her arousal and lust by moving the buttplug, effectively fucking herself in the ass while she was peeking.

This is it. No other thing in the game was especially taking. The rest was similar / seen in other games, often-wise in way better execution.


Delayed butt stuff and through a guy necessarily (are we talking him getting her ready for himself for anal fucking? like giving her tasks to use buttplugs, etc.?) would be a bit degrading from the original. In original I valued her own, inner BIG interest in anal play, especially the penetrative solo one. And the plugs, of course. Just... maybe try not to dilute it into a "all the butt stuff now will be tied to that 1 guy, who has a big dick and likes to do it in the ass, so she eventually obliges him". My advice/preference.

Oh, and every single scene I see in games with showing the characters piss is just a turn off... especially the perplexing pissing dicks. It's like there is the button in the constructor "add a pissing dick", that many devs just deem a waste to not press... but why, oh, why. In short: piss is a rare'ish fetish, cut all the piss out unless you have it / want to cater to it. It's a turn off for the majority, I assume.
 
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Butt stuff in PS was also the main reason to endure the atrocious "like stick figures" HS models. Anna was too tall and thin, yeah. It's a like a world full of supermodels, bread to be a living clothes-hangers... which was a blow to both the hotness AND unrealistic.
 
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Heissar said:
Project SAGE for me (and I assumed for everyone?) was uniquely enjoyful thanks to the butt stuff.
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Nonsense. It's filled with impactful choices. You're focusing far too much on your personal taste.
Anyway, I presented the idea of an external motivator for the anal fixation as a smoother introduction to its hyper-focus. Amy liking butt stuff is fine, it's just clumsy in the original introduction.
 
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Gunsothegreat said:
That isn´t the plan, Wilson will be the character that introduces her to the idea on the first day of cleaning. Other than that it will play out in a similar way, It´s just delayed. It just seemed like an odd place to start her sexual exploration.
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