- Jul 25, 2020
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I have to agree with you. It is just lazy or bad writing in all honesty. The last update really didn't have any cohesion at all, nor make much sense. Since Abi's introduction she has gone out of her way to tease and flirt with the MC, making it plain and obvious she was hungry for some dick off him. She even flashed him for God's sake. Showing him titties. There was zero pay off of this in the last update and only made things worst and unrealistic. I know its a fapping game, but damn even pornos have some semblance of a plot. Then to compound this even worse Beeman pulls a gun out and doesn't use it. This is America, Dude, every guy who has ever pulled out a gun on a suspected cheating wife and blown her head off. No exceptions. I abhor violence but that is just a fact. Then Beeman after getting his ass knocked out and beaten up throughout the fight rises up more times then Michael Meyers from Halloween. WTF...I mean fer reelz..WTF. Than after escaping death Abi all of a sudden plays tight with the cooter and calls Nicole for a slimy back alley fuckfest on a ground with possible junkie needles and used up jimmies filled with AIDs sperm. Come on Dude even I could have written a better update than the distorted cluster fuck I had to spend over an hour reading. I think I actually lost a few brain cells I will never get back because from it. This really took me out of the fapping mood and pissed off even my pecker who echoed the same thing I felt. The Abi I know ain't no cock tease, she is ready to fuck. I mean for reelz in the early episode she was flashing an old dying man at the hospital. How the fuck does she go from that to playing tight with the vajayjay. Please who ever is writing the plot of this game be consistent in your writing. Watch a youtube video on writing plots or read a book on writing. I wouldn't be surprised if in the next update we find out that it was all a dream. Hashtag #makeAbifuckMChardcorenextepisode "Drops the Mic"its probably a good job if the Dev don't come on here because he has mostly fucked up this game this time.
there seems to be a cockup with the Mc, Nicole where you can Jump her downstairs or go upstairs to the bathroom and have her come to you for a sex scene if you choose upstairs option after sex when she wants water you sudenly get the same bathroom scene you get if you jump her downstairs.
theres also a out of squence part where johns at home trying to tempt Nicole to wear his secatarys green nickers then he go's for a shower and nicole gets a phone call next thing Chloe steps in moms bedroom to talk and johns not even home yet?.
But the worst part is the pathetic fight scene followed by the equilly pathetic hotel scene.
Why the last click to Dodge when even if you click while its 3rds full Beeman still gets you to try and strangle you? its just a pointless click.
As for the fight lol first off dont care how drunk you are or how thick skulled you maybe only in films, books and cartoons could someone take being hit that many times over the head even by empty bottles but hit hard enough to break them all and then still be fit enough to be able to do what beeman do's.
what were they made of sugar glass?.
And apparently the MC had more than enought strength to carry Abi but not the strength to put up a fight.
And I get why the Dev didn't have them report Beeman for banging his student Chloe.
But at no point do's it even cross there minds to phone the police.
MC wont even let Nicole report him to the priciple its not her problem aparently.
I mean beemans a drunken wife beater who's proven he's willing to go as far as to commit murder and he banging her daughter.
But she shouldn't worry its not her problem because the MC will protect Chloe "Dont make me Laugh".
The MC's just proved he couldn't even protect himself and Abi so the very idea he could protect Chloe is laughable.
So lets have a recap shall we.
The MC and Abi get the crap beaten out of them but twice they temporarily incapacitate Beeman do they call the cops Nope.
Do they even look for a way to restrain him nope and so Beeman comes around again and beats them both up again, he then ends the fight by threatening them with a Gun so that they give him the Vase and then he aparently just go's off somewhere.
Do they then call the cops then? Nope.
Instead they goto a hotel and have a pity party over who is the most to blame for the beating they both took out of the two of them.
Then do they call the cops NO!
Instead Abi calls Nicole to come to the Hotel to look after the MC.
When Nicole arrives the MC explains what Beeman did to both He and Abi but not before he first balls it up by explaining so badly that Nicole starts to think that the MC and Abi must have something going on.
However he manages to explain it properly to Nicole and then Nicole being the sencible one sujests calling the police.
Except NO do's she bollocks Her bright Idea is not the police for the Drunken Wife beating Child abusing atempted Murdering Teacher Beeman nope she just wants to tell the Priciple. (I prosume that Priciples must be way better at dealing with crime than the police?.)
What planet are these charcter living on for F-ks sake.
Odviously one where the MC is deluded enough to think he could handle Beeman despite all avidence to the contrary.
And the Mc is actually stupid enough to think he actually has any chance beating John when he can't even handle Beeman.
And lets face it John's seems way more dangerous than beeman could ever be.
Of corse I am also prosuming the same sort of shit happends what ever choices you pick.
Sorry but for me atleast the Dev seems to have totally lost the plot with this latest offering.
I can only suspend belief for solong and I have already had to stop playing 3 times and take a break because i couldn't suspend belief long enough to get past the fight and hotel scene in one go infact I still havent got past it.
Which is a shame as I have always liked this game.
Just getting it off my chest.