VN Ren'Py A Mother's Love [Part 1-14 Plus] [OrbOrigin]

[hatefuldisplay]

Who are the pursuable characters? Right now my mc pursues/had sex with chloe and nicole. I thought marilyn and abigail would be pursuable?

I am pretty sure the goal is pursuing Nichole. I do wonder if pushed more toward corruption, the door will open to threesomes or an open relationship. It would be cool to see Abigail, Marilyn, or the hot blonde secretary brought into that arrangement.

Through my play through, I have had some sexual interactions with Marilyn but I don't think they involved penetration. She is definitely one of the best characters in the game, so I wouldn't mind the option to pursue her.

I dropped Chloe as soon as the opportunity presented itself. She just wasn't of interest to me.

It would be cool to see some of the business associates or some of the other minor interaction ladies in the game pop up for some action, but I suppose I won't be disappointed if it never happens.

 

[lorenzo110]

its probably a good job if the Dev don't come on here because he has mostly fucked up this game this time.
there seems to be a cockup with the Mc, Nicole where you can Jump her downstairs or go upstairs to the bathroom and have her come to you for a sex scene if you choose upstairs option after sex when she wants water you sudenly get the same bathroom scene you get if you jump her downstairs.

theres also a out of squence part where johns at home trying to tempt Nicole to wear his secatarys green nickers then he go's for a shower and nicole gets a phone call next thing Chloe steps in moms bedroom to talk and johns not even home yet?.

But the worst part is the pathetic fight scene followed by the equilly pathetic hotel scene.
Why the last click to Dodge when even if you click while its 3rds full Beeman still gets you to try and strangle you? its just a pointless click.
As for the fight lol first off dont care how drunk you are or how thick skulled you maybe only in films, books and cartoons could someone take being hit that many times over the head even by empty bottles but hit hard enough to break them all and then still be fit enough to be able to do what beeman do's.
what were they made of sugar glass?.

And apparently the MC had more than enought strength to carry Abi but not the strength to put up a fight.

And I get why the Dev didn't have them report Beeman for banging his student Chloe.

But at no point do's it even cross there minds to phone the police.
MC wont even let Nicole report him to the priciple its not her problem aparently.

I mean beemans a drunken wife beater who's proven he's willing to go as far as to commit murder and he banging her daughter.
But she shouldn't worry its not her problem because the MC will protect Chloe "Dont make me Laugh".
The MC's just proved he couldn't even protect himself and Abi so the very idea he could protect Chloe is laughable.

So lets have a recap shall we.
The MC and Abi get the crap beaten out of them but twice they temporarily incapacitate Beeman do they call the cops Nope.
Do they even look for a way to restrain him nope and so Beeman comes around again and beats them both up again, he then ends the fight by threatening them with a Gun so that they give him the Vase and then he aparently just go's off somewhere.
Do they then call the cops then? Nope.

Instead they goto a hotel and have a pity party over who is the most to blame for the beating they both took out of the two of them.
Then do they call the cops NO!

Instead Abi calls Nicole to come to the Hotel to look after the MC.
When Nicole arrives the MC explains what Beeman did to both He and Abi but not before he first balls it up by explaining so badly that Nicole starts to think that the MC and Abi must have something going on.
However he manages to explain it properly to Nicole and then Nicole being the sencible one sujests calling the police.
Except NO do's she bollocks Her bright Idea is not the police for the Drunken Wife beating Child abusing atempted Murdering Teacher Beeman nope she just wants to tell the Priciple. (I prosume that Priciples must be way better at dealing with crime than the police?.)

What planet are these charcter living on for F-ks sake.
Odviously one where the MC is deluded enough to think he could handle Beeman despite all avidence to the contrary.

And the Mc is actually stupid enough to think he actually has any chance beating John when he can't even handle Beeman.
And lets face it John's seems way more dangerous than beeman could ever be.

Of corse I am also prosuming the same sort of shit happends what ever choices you pick.

Sorry but for me atleast the Dev seems to have totally lost the plot with this latest offering.
I can only suspend belief for solong and I have already had to stop playing 3 times and take a break because i couldn't suspend belief long enough to get past the fight and hotel scene in one go infact I still havent got past it.
Which is a shame as I have always liked this game.

Just getting it off my chest.

I have to agree with you. It is just lazy or bad writing in all honesty. The last update really didn't have any cohesion at all, nor make much sense. Since Abi's introduction she has gone out of her way to tease and flirt with the MC, making it plain and obvious she was hungry for some dick off him. She even flashed him for God's sake. Showing him titties. There was zero pay off of this in the last update and only made things worst and unrealistic. I know its a fapping game, but damn even pornos have some semblance of a plot. Then to compound this even worse Beeman pulls a gun out and doesn't use it. This is America, Dude, every guy who has ever pulled out a gun on a suspected cheating wife and blown her head off. No exceptions. I abhor violence but that is just a fact. Then Beeman after getting his ass knocked out and beaten up throughout the fight rises up more times then Michael Meyers from Halloween. WTF...I mean fer reelz..WTF. Than after escaping death Abi all of a sudden plays tight with the cooter and calls Nicole for a slimy back alley fuckfest on a ground with possible junkie needles and used up jimmies filled with AIDs sperm. Come on Dude even I could have written a better update than the distorted cluster fuck I had to spend over an hour reading. I think I actually lost a few brain cells I will never get back because from it. This really took me out of the fapping mood and pissed off even my pecker who echoed the same thing I felt. The Abi I know ain't no cock tease, she is ready to fuck. I mean for reelz in the early episode she was flashing an old dying man at the hospital. How the fuck does she go from that to playing tight with the vajayjay. Please who ever is writing the plot of this game be consistent in your writing. Watch a youtube video on writing plots or read a book on writing. I wouldn't be surprised if in the next update we find out that it was all a dream. Hashtag #makeAbifuckMChardcorenextepisode "Drops the Mic"

 

[Snugglepuff]

Since Abi's introduction she has gone out of her way to tease and flirt with the MC, making it plain and obvious she was hungry for some dick off him. She even flashed him for God's sake. Showing him titties.

As "tropey" as it is, flirting and flashing doesn't automatically mean a woman wants to fuck a guy.
There is such a thing as "a bit of fun" that applies to those kinds of events...

 

[lorenzo110]

As "tropey" as it is, flirting and flashing doesn't automatically mean a woman wants to fuck a guy.
There is such a thing as "a bit of fun" that applies to those kinds of events...

Wow if that is the case then things really have changed because I sure don't remember that ever being the case. Every time a female allows a guy feel her up 90 percent of the time it leads to straight fucking. Especially if the said person is married. Now, I don't mean to offend you but was what you said something that personally happened? Because again in the cases I have experienced I don't ever remember that being the case. I don't remember a married woman ever just having a bit of flash fun that didn't do more and want more. Not trying to troll you, it's just the truth.

 

[Ssisy]

its probably a good job if the Dev don't come on here because he has mostly fucked up this game this time.
there seems to be a cockup with the Mc, Nicole where you can Jump her downstairs or go upstairs to the bathroom and have her come to you for a sex scene if you choose upstairs option after sex when she wants water you sudenly get the same bathroom scene you get if you jump her downstairs.

theres also a out of squence part where johns at home trying to tempt Nicole to wear his secatarys green nickers then he go's for a shower and nicole gets a phone call next thing Chloe steps in moms bedroom to talk and johns not even home yet?.

But the worst part is the pathetic fight scene followed by the equilly pathetic hotel scene.
Why the last click to Dodge when even if you click while its 3rds full Beeman still gets you to try and strangle you? its just a pointless click.
As for the fight lol first off dont care how drunk you are or how thick skulled you maybe only in films, books and cartoons could someone take being hit that many times over the head even by empty bottles but hit hard enough to break them all and then still be fit enough to be able to do what beeman do's.
what were they made of sugar glass?.

And apparently the MC had more than enought strength to carry Abi but not the strength to put up a fight.

And I get why the Dev didn't have them report Beeman for banging his student Chloe.

But at no point do's it even cross there minds to phone the police.
MC wont even let Nicole report him to the priciple its not her problem aparently.

I mean beemans a drunken wife beater who's proven he's willing to go as far as to commit murder and he banging her daughter.
But she shouldn't worry its not her problem because the MC will protect Chloe "Dont make me Laugh".
The MC's just proved he couldn't even protect himself and Abi so the very idea he could protect Chloe is laughable.

So lets have a recap shall we.
The MC and Abi get the crap beaten out of them but twice they temporarily incapacitate Beeman do they call the cops Nope.
Do they even look for a way to restrain him nope and so Beeman comes around again and beats them both up again, he then ends the fight by threatening them with a Gun so that they give him the Vase and then he aparently just go's off somewhere.
Do they then call the cops then? Nope.

Instead they goto a hotel and have a pity party over who is the most to blame for the beating they both took out of the two of them.
Then do they call the cops NO!

Instead Abi calls Nicole to come to the Hotel to look after the MC.
When Nicole arrives the MC explains what Beeman did to both He and Abi but not before he first balls it up by explaining so badly that Nicole starts to think that the MC and Abi must have something going on.
However he manages to explain it properly to Nicole and then Nicole being the sencible one sujests calling the police.
Except NO do's she bollocks Her bright Idea is not the police for the Drunken Wife beating Child abusing atempted Murdering Teacher Beeman nope she just wants to tell the Priciple. (I prosume that Priciples must be way better at dealing with crime than the police?.)

What planet are these charcter living on for F-ks sake.
Odviously one where the MC is deluded enough to think he could handle Beeman despite all avidence to the contrary.

And the Mc is actually stupid enough to think he actually has any chance beating John when he can't even handle Beeman.
And lets face it John's seems way more dangerous than beeman could ever be.

Of corse I am also prosuming the same sort of shit happends what ever choices you pick.

Sorry but for me atleast the Dev seems to have totally lost the plot with this latest offering.
I can only suspend belief for solong and I have already had to stop playing 3 times and take a break because i couldn't suspend belief long enough to get past the fight and hotel scene in one go infact I still havent got past it.
Which is a shame as I have always liked this game.

Just getting it off my chest.

I agree with most of the things you have mentioned. That Beeman scene was annoying with abrupt ending with mc and Abi going to hotel. John and silvia part is also fkd up. I am plying this game because I really like Nicole. She is so damn sexy

 

[Belzeebub$]

As "tropey" as it is, flirting and flashing doesn't automatically mean a woman wants to fuck a guy.
There is such a thing as "a bit of fun" that applies to those kinds of events...

Sorry to intrude guys, but, I totally agree with you. In both real life and in games it does not always mean physical, as you said and I quote "bit of fun" is for fun and fun only. It is like siblings (not incestuous) having fun with each other. Though flashing titties or genitals are not part of them

Wow if that is the case then things really have changed because I sure don't remember that ever being the case. Every time a female allows a guy feel her up 90 percent of the time it leads to straight fucking. Especially if the said person is married. Now, I don't mean to offend you but was what you said something that personally happened? Because again in the cases I have experienced I don't ever remember that being the case. I don't remember a married woman ever just having a bit of flash fun that didn't do more and want more. Not trying to troll you, it's just the truth.

Sorry to barge in and interfere in between conversations, but I think you forgot the part that even if abi is married both she and her hubby hate each other and as implied (since we did not encounter any sexual scenes between those two) they did not have any physical relationship with each other. And also a little flirting or touching does not mean anything sexual. May be you can call it sensual, but I do not think it is sexual. Now it is just my perspective that I am sharing with you. It may and I think it will differ with one another, so please do not think ill of me. We may differ in views but we all like the game (hopefully )

 

[lorenzo110]

Sorry to intrude guys, but, I totally agree with you. In both real life and in games it does not always mean physical, as you said and I quote "bit of fun" is for fun and fun only. It is like siblings (not incestuous) having fun with each other. Though flashing titties or genitals are not part of them

Sorry to barge in and interfere in between conversations, but I think you forgot the part that even if abi is married both she and her hubby hate each other and as implied (since we did not encounter any sexual scenes between those two) they did not have any physical relationship with each other. And also a little flirting or touching does not mean anything sexual. May be you can call it sensual, but I do not think it is sexual. Now it is just my perceptive that I am sharing with you. It may and I think it will differ with one another, so please do not think ill of me. We may differ in views but we all like the game (hopefully )

We do think different but that is ok. We will agree to disagree I can respect that. You leave out the fact she was flashing some old guy at the hospital. She could be having a bit of fun there but touching is another thing all together. The actions she has presented throughout her interactions with the MC which finally culminated to last release make no sense what so ever. This from an adult over 40 whose had a bit of experience in life. If Abi was a teen I could buy your point of view, but as an adult woman with a teen still in high school? Does that make any sense to you at all? As a story teller you have to have a better grasp of understanding each characters motivation and point of view in the world. I am probably a lot older than you and have seen more, which there is nothing wrong if you are younger. One must differentiate human behavior based on maturity and age. Abi is probably in her early to mid 40s, while the MC is still in high school. Common sense dictate as a mature woman if she ain't getting it at home she is going to get it somewhere else from someone else. See Nicole and MC for proof. Again it's just my experience speaking and you may see it different and that is ok. But I do feel my point is more grounded on reality.

 

[Belzeebub$]

We do think different but that is ok. We will agree to disagree I can respect that. You leave out the fact she was flashing some old guy at the hospital. She could be having a bit of fun there but touching is another thing all together. The actions she has presented throughout her interactions with the MC which finally culminated to last release make no sense what so ever. This from an adult over 40 whose had a bit of experience in life. If Abi was a teen I could buy your point of view, but as an adult woman with a teen still in high school? Does that make any sense to you at all? As a story teller you have to have a better grasp of understanding each characters motivation and point of view in the world. I am probably a lot older than you and have seen more, which there is nothing wrong if you are younger. One must differentiate human behavior based on maturity and age. Abi is probably in her early to mid 40s, while the MC is still in high school. Common sense dictate as a mature woman if she ain't getting it at home she is going to get it somewhere else from someone else. See Nicole and MC for proof. Again it's just my experience speaking and you may see it different and that is ok. But I do feel my point is more grounded on reality.

One thing is for sure. Abi was and still is asking for attention from opposite gender. Since the mc showed her some(at least I,flirted) she teased him and touched him (or he touched her). But I think the old man that touched abi in hospital was interested in her rather than other way round. She did say she was allowing it so that the old man could have some fun at his age and remains in control or something like that (if I am not wrong). At least she did not initiate the process at least as shown or depicted to us. And yes, you are right to some extent, I agree that being in mid 40s or early 40s you should act more maturely instead of leading a teenager to think she may be interested in mc. And also, I do not get the reason of adding these characters in a story which loosely based on mc, nicole, chloe and their family. I get adding sophia and even marilyn to some extent but adding beeman and not only him, but his wife.... I do not understand the purpose, except for complicating the plot. Anyway, maybe it will be revealed later on. Also, you may be older than me and must have seen much more than me.

 

[lorenzo110]

One thing is for sure. Abi was and still is asking for attention from opposite gender. Since the mc showed her some(at least I,flirted) she teased him and touched him (or he touched her). But I think the old man that touched abi in hospital was interested in her rather than other way round. She did say she was allowing it so that the old man could have some fun at his age and remains in control or something like that (if I am not wrong). At least she did not initiate the process at least as shown or depicted to us. And yes, you are right to some extent, I agree that being in mid 40s or early 40s you should act more maturely instead of leading a teenager to think she may be interested in mc. And also, I do not get the reason of adding these characters in a story which loosely based on mc, nicole, chloe and their family. I get adding sophia and even marilyn to some extent but adding beeman and not only him, but his wife.... I do not understand the purpose, except for complicating the plot. Anyway, maybe it will be revealed later on. Also, you may be older than me and must have seen much more than me.

More than I want to admit unfortunately. Not all of it good either. It is my sense Abi was thrown in as a side character to add as a possibility for another romantic option because only having one female as a sexual conquest would eventually lead to boredom and repetition in a game. If the MC only has two females to choose from it becomes tedious after a while. I think the game dev had or has the intention to adding a couple of more females into the mix Abi being one of them but his storyline has become so convoluted and a mess lacking in much sense in the development of these relationships. He should have paced out and structured his story better by writing it ahead of time instead of on the fly. The whole Beeman fight was an utter mess and felt like something out of wrestlemania sans a referee. And he beat the living hell out of his wife to excess yet did not shoot her during the whole ordeal with the MC. It really took away from the plot of the whole story to be honest. But again there are probably quite a few that could care less about story line in games like this. I was really hopeful we would be getting more Abi content this past update because her storyline was due. But I sure did not expect it to be this messy and not very well thought out. There is a good way to pace out story structure. A good example is "Being a Dik". You could tell that game dev has his story pacing structured in advance. This one story wise fell flat last update. Still a good game for fap purposes with nice renders but its story is falling to the way side which is unfortunate. Just my thoughts.

 

[Jimayo]

So... having low corruption points means having a more loving, romantic relationship with Nicole? Am I getting this right?

 

[Belzeebub$]

So... having low corruption points means having a more loving, romantic relationship with Nicole? Am I getting this right?

If you ask me, it will only make you miss more scenes. In this game, as I realised, there is no "loving, romantic relationship" i.e. to say it is a corruption game. The more you corrupt the more you win and vice versa. If you see the points system, it will be clear there is only corruption points, no love/romantic points. P.S : it is my personal opinion, may differ with others. You are always welcome to try other routes. Actually I have tried it almost 10 times in different ways, and that is the conclusion I came to.

Oh by missing scenes I meant sex scenes. There is this one instance like holding hands of nicole or like applying oil on her back in the beach, where these (low corruption) may come handy. If you prefer holding hands than f*cking her and cumming in her, you may opt to lower corruption. Also, I felt like in that route the mc is a bit submissive (or more like adjusting) whereas in corruption route the mc is dominant. But there is not major or drastic change in the nature of the characters. Good luck, hope it was understandable.

 

[Jimayo]

If you ask me, it will only make you miss more scenes. In this game, as I realised, there is no "loving, romantic relationship" i.e. to say it is a corruption game. The more you corrupt the more you win and vice versa. If you see the points system, it will be clear there is only corruption points, no love/romantic points. P.S : it is my personal opinion, may differ with others. You are always welcome to try other routes. Actually I have tried it almost 10 times in different ways, and that is the conclusion I came to.

Oh by missing scenes I meant sex scenes. There is this one instance like holding hands of nicole or like applying oil on her back in the beach, where these may come handy. If you prefer holding hands than f*cking her and cumming in her you may opt to lower corruption. Also, I felt like in that route the mc is a bit submissive (or more like adjusting) whereas in corruption route the mc is dominant. But there is not major or drastic change in the nature of the characters. Good luck, hope it was understandable.

According to the official walkthrough, having low corruption points means not having to coerce her into going on a trip with you. It seems like having low corruption points means her being more accepting of your relationship.

 

[Belzeebub$]

According to the official walkthrough, having low corruption points means not having to coerce her into going on a trip with you. It seems like having low corruption points means her being more accepting of your relationship.

She will be accompanying the mc. (She will not be coming with me, I am not so lucky ). The difference is if you have high corruption, mc will blackmail her, or else she will be convinced by the mc. So, only the path is different, she will be going with the mc whatever may be the corruption level, and as I said earlier, you are welcome to try all the routes. I just shared with you my perspective. I have already accomplished calling nicole by her name which I could not do without a mod (mc will call her mrs. heavens). You can try it yourself with the "official walkthrough". I can assure you you will be unable to do so.

 

[RandomAccountHere15]

I have already accomplished calling nicole by her name which I could not do without a mod (mc will call her mrs. heavens). You can try it yourself with the "official walkthrough". I can assure you you will be unable to do so.

I just checked my playthrough, and my MC calls her Nicole just fine and she never says anything. Also I never used a mod only the official walkthrough.

 

[Jimayo]

I just checked my playthrough, and my MC calls her Nicole just fine and she never says anything. Also I never used a mod only the official walkthrough.

He's saying with low corruption that won't happen which is not true as the two are unrelated and getting to call her nicole with impunity is based on calling her nicole every opportunity you have the chance too. So he really doesn't know the answer to my question and is just talking out his ass. Does anyone actually know the answer to my question?

 

[Belzeebub$]

I just checked my playthrough, and my MC calls her Nicole just fine and she never says anything. Also I never used a mod only the official walkthrough.

Well, good luck then..... Maybe my attempts were wrong. Anyway, good luck with the progress.

He's saying with low corruption that won't happen which is not true as the two are unrelated and getting to call her nicole with impunity is based on calling her nicole every opportunity you have the chance too. So he really doesn't know the answer to my question and is just talking out his ass. Does anyone actually know the answer to my question?

I had answered your question. That is what I did. There is basically one difference - if you corrupt her more you will get more sex scenes, and vice versa. I think you missed This post. Check it again. And, please no swearing like sailors without reason..... if you do not like my opinion, just ignore it. Best thing/way to know the answer - try both the routes individually, and see for yourself.

 

[Jimayo]

I had answered your question.

No you didn't. An answer would be based on knowledge and fact. You gave me an unsupported opinion that means nothing and answers nothing.

There are three points in the story where choosing the romance option instead of the sexual/corruption option has a long term benefit to the plot so I actually want a real answer as to whether low corruption is a better path from with knowledge and facts, not opinions.

 

[sandstorm1872]

We do think different but that is ok. We will agree to disagree I can respect that. You leave out the fact she was flashing some old guy at the hospital. She could be having a bit of fun there but touching is another thing all together. The actions she has presented throughout her interactions with the MC which finally culminated to last release make no sense what so ever. This from an adult over 40 whose had a bit of experience in life. If Abi was a teen I could buy your point of view, but as an adult woman with a teen still in high school? Does that make any sense to you at all? As a story teller you have to have a better grasp of understanding each characters motivation and point of view in the world. I am probably a lot older than you and have seen more, which there is nothing wrong if you are younger. One must differentiate human behavior based on maturity and age. Abi is probably in her early to mid 40s, while the MC is still in high school. Common sense dictate as a mature woman if she ain't getting it at home she is going to get it somewhere else from someone else. See Nicole and MC for proof. Again it's just my experience speaking and you may see it different and that is ok. But I do feel my point is more grounded on reality.

Seconded, while I've seen the dev quote umpteen times that Nicole is for the MC, what's the point of introducing other female characters with intimate, non-physical interactions? With Marilyn, since she swings the other way, she can be BFF/frenemy with the MC but with Abigail, the scenes made no sense. I was assuming with what went down with Beeman, Abi would find some warm solace in MC and would be a temporary quadrilateral/triangle (depending if you already dumped Chloe). Since Abi wants to flee town for a new life, it would have been a once-over and it would have been a perfect ending to her arc. Getting in Nicole for a night-alley scene, while all drool worthy, should have been Abi's, considering what she had been through.

 

[Allan Trumbull]

Latest update is good ??? Worth to download ?

 

[J0K3RXXX]

Latest update is good ??? Worth to download ?

I recommend downloading it, but the cliffhanger of the last part will probably leave you quite pissed off by the possible implications (if you've previously played the game, it's a highly controversial cliffhanger, as it happened with the end of part 8)