VN - Ren'Py - A Mother's Love [Part 1-13 Plus] [OrbOrigin]

[As of Part 1-9 Plus]


The Good:
- Nicole looking real nice.
- Some of the other girls are fine as well.
- Very Intriguing Story (can't wait to tear down that degen John)
- Game is repayable as choices matter and lead to different endings.
- Lewd and sex scenes are nice.
- Average Animation


The Bad:
- MC's GF is FUGLY (no wonder i cheated)
- Animations need some work
- Sometimes i can't see the words bc of the white background
- Typos

Conclusion:
Highly underrated game. MUST TRY.
4.5/5.

This is good stuff right here, easy 5 stars. Let me give my reasons why.. I am not a fan of engrish, (as its affectionately known as) but this it adds certain charm in this VN, it is very well written, but i will point out slightly negatively that the writing lacks accurate past tense, present tense and pluralising. For example the word "mines" is what irritates me the most in alot of these translated games/VNs for the English language. It is simply "mine" that is something belonging to only you. I am an Englishman myself, although only a B grade in GCSE English studies, i would be happy to go through and correct everything for your English language version. I would promise of course to keep the said charm of your writing, only alleviating your negative feedback of these minor errors. For free of course as i am a big fan of your work.
*possible spoilers ahead*
Now the positives and boy theres is alot, Firstly if you are a sucker for unrequited love with potential of blossoming into real love, then this is for you, it is fascinating to me to try to imagine whether it is the writers imagination, or real life experiences. Either way this journey is beautifully crafted. And with this i was able to really immerse myself into the story so far.
The animations vary from ok-ish to great. some erotic scenes (particularly early on) are only a few frames tops, but for me personally is better than still non-animated stuff out there, that said there are also scenes that are fully animated amazingly well with an obvious multitude of frames and expertise, so maybe expect these lesser ones to be improved at a later stage? Lets hope.
The NTR content is avoidable, i am sure i am not the only one who detests sharing women both in my fantasies and imagination and in real life, the only exception personally is with another woman, as long as the bond is stronger with me. But i am digressing, but i do hope there is lesbian or MFF scenes planned.
Even though the MC's girlfriend (in my opinion) isn't particularly attractive, she won me over with her cute personality and charm, which is a testament to the wonderful writing. Same goes for Abigail. Marilyn however is beautifully created but she would be stunning with her hair in a different style, maybe let her hair down? But Nicole? Jesus, i know, i know she is made of pixels but fuck me is she beautiful. Damn if i saw a female that looks like her in real life, i would just melt. I know i'm sad ain't i?
Anyway fuck the TLDR bollocks, this game/VN is amazing, try it. I hope you love it as much as i do.

Please, please, please, developer, please get someone who speaks English to fix your dialogue - your translation is maddening. And please quit having so much of it. Finally, please don't go the domination route - there are enough games with almost nothing but spanking to satisfy folks with that fetish.

Please do continue with beautiful women and stimulating sex scenes.

A Mother's Love is an investment in the long run. 9 episodes deep with enough content for hours of steamy pleasure. It's very heavy on story building and character development with NTR-like themes that subvert the genre as you keep advancing through each episode. If you enjoy the tease and good characters with decent dialogue instead of diving straight into caveman sex scenes. This game is defs for you. Nicole is bae.

GOOD:
+ Interesting plot
+ Great build up and tease to sex scenes
+ Choices matter as it does lead to diff scenes
+ Animation is good but enhanced more by the story
+ Protagonist isn't a fck dog humping every woman who throws their vagina at him

BAD:
- Little too much talking and exposition during ep 8

I liked the game, the story is good, it takes place in a pleasant way, the characters are nice and the mother is very hot (not only she but the teacher's wife too), I can't wait for the next updates to continue with the story

Very good game with an intriguing story. One of the better VN renpy games I have played. I would put it on par with something like Acting Lessons. Very excited for part 2 and can't wait; keep up the great work!

Can fall in love with a naive housewife that happens to be your girfriend's mother, or kinda enslave her.
Cum inside counter provided, pill and pregnancy risk mentioned.
Be one of the important guy in a company.
Meet an open minded quirky friend who happens to know secrets.
Can still be in a relationship with girlfriend despite the intimate relationship with her mother.
See a couple who got cucked and keeping the cuckold baby.
Be a friend to a lesbian couple who seek a place in their world.

The graphics were great for me.
I enjoy a lot of well positioned scene and posture.
I play with no sound so I can't be aware if there's any sound.

I hope at the end of the game, the wife would be less naive by the MC's help.

What an amazing VN! I happened to come across this game purely by chance and while I initially came for the sex, I stayed for the story. This game's story has to be one of the most captivating stories I've read on this site. Almost all the characters here are excellently written. I understand there are a few grammatical errors, but the plot points and pacing are pretty good.
Nicole Heavens... what a beauty both inside and out. Also characters here are not dumb. Especially John Heavens as the antagonist who is ruthless and cunning. The scenes are really good as well, though I'm not too critical on the animation given how fantastic everything else is.
In conclusion this game is 100% a must-play for people that love a romantic story.

The game is truly excellent. The renders are good, the animations are perhaps its biggest flaw (they are ok). What makes this game perfect is the story, character building and the plot and available interactions.

This is one of the best blackmail implementations I saw so far. I also love the fact that the game includes a negotiation factor. I think that is the first blackmail game that attempted to cover that aspect and nailed it. If you are in anyway into the blackmail tag - don't miss out on this title. It's believable and the blackmailed character motives are realistic and well laid out which makes it stand out among the typical "fear of reveal" or "money desperation" blackmail games.

The plot is interesting and just when I thought the game would end it opened up another plot-line. I don't want to spoil it so won't go into details.

There is a ton of content here, I'm still on the first play through but that is one of the rare titles where I plan to actually start again and explore one or two additional paths.

Give it a try, this one is that good.

What a fantastic VN!

Check the "other" section and you'll notice a lot of simple games... more like individual chapters... well, it looks an awful lot like they were the practice sessions, and they did the job well.

This is a complex story, with fantastic character models and settings. Under other circumstances I would probably believe that this story would be a great time waster that would eventually become too complex and fall into the abandoned category, but I have some hopes. Don't get me wrong, it is still very complex and may well fail in the final execution, but the production quality remains high enough that I likely won't care.

There is a lot of story here. The cheating and likely criminal husband, the oddball friend with psychic powers who is lusting after the very same mother you are taking advantage of. The girlfriend on the nexus of a quality relationship and a fling with a teacher who hates you. The teacher's wife who has interesting motivations of her own and apparently works everywhere in town...

And Nicole. The mother in question in a loveless relationship who is easily manipulated with her desire to protect her daughter.

Yeah, there are a hell of a lot of plot threads to solve.

The models are photo-real and even though I usually preface my opinion by stating that favorites are based upon my opinion, I do think the mother character is pretty hard for anyone to turn down. Special mention though for every other character model as they all appeal to me in an interesting way; they are all kind of "real". OrbOrigin seems to make an effort to make Nicole the most beautiful of all, an idealized woman, and then make every other character a tiny bit... plain. Not ugly at all. For me, this has a very interesting effect. Sure, I really want Nicole above all else, but all of the "plain" NPC's are appealing because they are just more "normal" than you would expect in a VN. It makes everything more "real" than most other VN's where every single character is meant to exhibit some sexual trait or look and appeal to the broadest audience. Instead, we get a world populated by the people you would expect in the real world. People with flaws, people with different traits, people who try to look good and people who don't. The immersion value is immense, and on a personal level it's actually a huge turn on for myself (my porn searches get a lot of "homemade" in them as the "reality" of them is attractive as hell).

So I eagerly await a part 9.... and 10, 11, 12. I'd love this VN to simply go on, maybe resolving a plot thread here and there. It would be awesome to nail all the plot threads, but I am actually getting a lot of satisfaction just enjoying the ride.

Keep up the fantastic work OrbOrigin!

Very average game. No complaints about the graphics and animations, they're acceptable, they don't need to be perfect.

WAY TOO MUCH POINTLESS TEXT THOUGH

I don't want to literally click constantly for 5 minutes to get anywhere, I don't want to read a shit story, I want to play a sex game. You could tell the same story in 80% less text, just pointless filler that made me close the game several times out of boredom and flacid cock in my hand.

This game is unique for me. Best intimacy with a milf if you choose that path. Renders are good and girls beauty too especially Nicole. Writing is so good I mostly choosed the romantic way but it was a few blackmail thing and it was great as well. Lewd scene animations the only problem for me angles are good it would be great if it would pictures but animations are not smooth. I love the other aspects so much that why I'm not too harsh about the animation thing. Overal great game.

When I first played this game I think it was supposed to be a shorter one, as with other games by OrbOrigin, but I'm delighted that the game has continued and the story taken further. The tension between Nicole (+1 point) and MC is palpable, and so is the passion. I think that's because the characters were well thought out as well as their story arcs.

The sex/erotic scenes are always mouth watering and groin moistening, and the writing is fine (text could use some work in terms of grammar, but the content is decent). So much so that a lack of sound doesn't really bother as such.

A couple of things I'm unsure of, apart from grammar issues which can be easily rectified by proofreading (I could certainly help ) are the side arcs that are introduced but left hanging, and side characters. In the past few updates, everyone apart from MC, Nicole and John haven't got much attention, even though some of them do seem pretty important, like Chloe, the nurse, and Marilyn. The MC's parents also seem to be in a supernatural universe with the way they talk and their own thing. Their dialogues and introduction anytime in the game feels a bit strained and weird. Then there are characters like John's assistant and MC's co-workers who just seem like dead weight and take attention away from the main arcs and chars and don't offer anything worth following.

All in all, the game started out well, continued its high, and seems a little overwhelmed at times with the decision of how to progress the plot further and tie all loose ends. But it's alright. Just shows that the dev doesn't want to leave this project and is willing to rack their brains to get something attractive as an end product. Keep it up, you're doing fine. Just make sure you're keeping track of all the side stories you introduce, because people here surely will!

At start the story is really good but at last few chapters story becomes a headache because of gibberish lines,Spell and grammar Mistakes.
Ntr story is very uninteresting.
NTR Male Character is....i wanted to say disgusting but i think even that is not enough.a questionable character choice i guess.ohh and i am 99% sure that no girl would fall in love with a face like that.

like already said by many other people the main love interest is really well designed and that is why i am giving it 3 stars otherwise it would have been 1 or 2 at max...

There are some really good parts in this game, but the horrible localization to english makes this game really hard to endure, especially at the later parts. Its like the original text was thrown into google translate and copy psted in the game. On the plus side, Nicole, the main love interest, is really cute and beautiful, every scene with her is almost perfect, same with Marylin. The female characters look good, the rest not so much, and the environments are pretty bad especially the outside ones. But there are a few good ones.
Overall its an ok story, desperately in need of better translation.

A really great game. I was surprised at first because i expected *cough*certain things. But this game delivered a good plot, one of the best love interests i have seen in a vn, and was more easier and generally well done. Good job!

somewhat repetitive, but there are characters that can give a lot of intertwined play. Marylin can to intervene more with the relation between the family and the boy.
Will see what the future holds....

one of the best game in the forum (i played a lot of games) and the is a man of his word intressting caracter of course nicole a her personnality nice woman but she can bite too also the villain finally a game with real villain

the game is well played. The content is good and meaningful, there is a lot of choice, the characters are beautiful.It is clear that the Developers make a good game so I support the plus well done !
If even sex scenes are a little better with movements to do, for example that the member moved more and did not twitch I mean one movement is made and the old one is not quite
gone. Thanks !!!

I really like the game. (I think I played till version 6 so far!)
- good scenes
- it is good told so far
- I love how the mother want the MC out of her daughters life and get corrupted by him

Only flaw is Marilyn. I mean that she is saying she has powers, is ok, but it would be cool if we can find out that her powers are hacking skills and not powers.

The game make me like a MILF story and hoping for more. Which is does not happen often. So five stars from me.