Your statement that the English needs "a help" while posting English that needs help.
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That's nitpicking, i'm not the sort of person to complain about things like that, if you're trying to tell an emotional story (which this game is) then having the english be as non-stilted as possible helps out a lot.
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I'd love to see a threesome with the MC, Nicole and Abi. And I'm hoping we'll get the option to have anal sex with Nicole soon
I am very interested in taking Abi to Poundtown.
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No information but most likely see the update after New Year.
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I'm not feeling good after palaying this for some times.My mind is total Deprassed and insecure.
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- Jan 23, 2018
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Damn i cant wait for part 10 ...
anyone got an idea about the parent what they hiding from the MC ?
...anyone got an idea about the parent what they hiding from the MC ?
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missed it by a day, can you please post it again
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WTF?I'm not feeling good after palaying this for some times.My mind is total Deprassed and insecure
I actually played NTR route at some point...shouldn't have done that.
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I played this game quite a few months ago, quit due to the terrible english. Picked it up again a week or so ago and sped through to about where I was last time. The english really has not improved and I agree with others that the dev needs to have someone go through this games dialogue. The game has an appeal because I find games where the MC is kinda a shitbag to be rare. By this i mean where MC is kinda cucking others. This is a big appeal for me but the story is also pretty flawed.
All that said, there are bright spots but the main thing is really the premise and the models. I just feel it's such a shame the games story lacks any sort of realism so I could believe that this stuff could actually happen. Funny thing is all these things could have been avoided EASILY if written slightly better. My main question is why the dev writes the characters into these stupid situations when the plot development could have happened without dumbing down the characters. Either way felt a need to write this off my chest for some reason, I think I really want to like the game more as it has potential and I hope maybe the dev learns for his next game, right now I find it hard to continue onwards.
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All that said, there are bright spots but the main thing is really the premise and the models. I just feel it's such a shame the games story lacks any sort of realism so I could believe that this stuff could actually happen. Funny thing is all these things could have been avoided EASILY if written slightly better. My main question is why the dev writes the characters into these stupid situations when the plot development could have happened without dumbing down the characters. Either way felt a need to write this off my chest for some reason, I think I really want to like the game more as it has potential and I hope maybe the dev learns for his next game, right now I find it hard to continue onwards.
Maybe its all the sexual tension, and the MC just broke that barrier? Also, the fact that a young guy wants her that probably adds on to it
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sometimes it's difficult for amateur writers to see the plot developing any other way than what they see in their head, even if it's contrived as fuck to them it makes sense, this is why Editors are so crucial(or at least taking a break from the story and coming back to it a fair amount of time later). Usually it takes experience to ask the proper questions that allow a story to develop organically.
Honestly this is the level of writing i usually expect from these games, most of these ppl are devs first and writers second, so it kind of ends up like Video Games were in the 90s/2000s.