VN Ren'Py A Mother's Love [Part 1-14 Plus] [OrbOrigin]

[Optimus69420]

does F95zone has the plus version

The first post in the first page should have links to the Plus version Part 12 of the game.

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Thank you for sharing this Lady Aspen! I just like to ask, did you make this?

Hey everyone! Here are three more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13. (Sorry this post was posted later than usual, something went wrong with scheduling the post.)

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon

Thank you for sharing again Raminita!

My thoughts about each WIP pictures:

Picture #1: I'm assuming Marilyn and MC (Us) are at his parents house. She's probably hanging out with MC's (Our) parents while we're on our way from the Heaven's household due to spending the night with Nicole. From Marilyn's facial expression, I'm assuming MC (Us) asked her a very important question. But I have no idea what MC (Us) asked her. Feel free to chime in on this one.

Picture #2: I'm assuming we're in John's office. I'm guessing John will question us, if MC (Us) chose the option to look through the papers on his desk when we snuck into his office in Part 12. Feel free to add in more details and thoughts about this photo.

Picture #3: As for this picture, looks like Beeman is out of hiding. I'm assuming this outcome only happens if you're still in the "Chloe is Still my GF" route in Part 12 because, correct me if I'm wrong, is that during the dance in Part 12 MC (Us) and Chloe get to do a prank on Beeman's classroom. And I'm guessing it has to involve cookies. Again, feel free to add in details and thoughts about this photo.

 

[Lady Aspen]

Thank you for sharing this Lady Aspen! I just like to ask, did you make this?

With pleasure!,Yup with Photoshop.

 

[Optimus69420]

With pleasure!,Yup with Photoshop.

That's awesome! I hope you make more!

 

[Rundmck]

The last few updates are riddled with typos, spelling errors, grammatical errors and nonsensical sentences. Really disappointing and totally ruins the mood of the story.

 

[cxx]

The last few updates are riddled with typos, spelling errors, grammatical errors and nonsensical sentences. Really disappointing and totally ruins the mood of the story.

right thread? since before .12 update there was "tiny" break between updates.

 

[Rundmck]

right thread? since before .12 update there was "tiny" break between updates.

I'm replaying it from the start so can't pinpoint the exact update number but this issue's becoming impossible to ignore post the beach trip.

 

[Barretto24]

The last few updates are riddled with typos, spelling errors, grammatical errors and nonsensical sentences. Really disappointing and totally ruins the mood of the story.

Doesn't bother me and doesn't detrack from the experience or the story for me.

 

[ThorinKing]

Doesn't bother me and doesn't detrack from the experience or the story for me.

Considering your spelling, I wouldn't suspect so.

 

[Barretto24]

Considering your spelling, I wouldn't suspect so.

Nothing wrong with my spelling pal, as I said. Spelling errors unless extremely glaring does not bother me.

 

[ThorinKing]

Nothing wrong with my spelling pal, as I said. Spelling errors unless extremely glaring does not bother me.

*do not bother me

And poor grammar and spelling do detract from the experience for most folks - at least those of us that are intellectually blessed.

 

[Night Hacker]

*do not bother me

And poor grammar and spelling do detract from the experience for most folks - at least those of us that are intellectually blessed.

Minor things, like what you just pointed out, do not bother me that much. I usually know what they meant. Larger errors do though. I haven't gotten to the newer content in this yet, been replaying it from the start.

I think the worst I ever seen was several screens in a foreign language totally, but that wasn't this game. My guess was whomever did the translation didn't check for errors or missed text.

But yeah, it depends on the severity of the errors. If I hate it enough, I'll demand my money back.

 

[Raminita]

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Hey everyone! Here are three more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.
(For the script WIP, I've decided to add it along with the tittle photo. Hopefully that fixes the blurriness)

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon

 

[ThorinKing]

Minor things, like what you just pointed out, do not bother me that much. I usually know what they meant. Larger errors do though. I haven't gotten to the newer content in this yet, been replaying it from the start.

I think the worst I ever seen was several screens in a foreign language totally, but that wasn't this game. My guess was whomever did the translation didn't check for errors or missed text.

But yeah, it depends on the severity of the errors. If I hate it enough, I'll demand my money back.

I only pointed out those items to the poster because of his claims to not be bothered by language. Figuring out what something is supposed to mean or be saying isn't difficult, but when a VN is riddled with mistakes and awful constructions, it really takes away from the enjoyment of it.

I get that many of the devs don't know or speak conversational English - and may use something like Go-dawful-ogle to translate. Even if it isn't excessively egregious, it does start to distract, particularly when it is constant and there is no apparent effort to improve upon it. I've offered no-cost review to some of the guys that have otherwise good VNs, but awful language editing, in hopes of helping them improve. But, they don't seem to want to be better, and that is truly annoying.

 

[MAGO-DAG]

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Hey everyone! Here are three more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.
(For the script WIP, I've decided to add it along with the tittle photo. Hopefully that fixes the blurriness)

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon

Judging by the 2nd picture, everything went well, especially by Nicole’s appearance, she was noticeably already completely succumbing to Mc

 

[cxx]

Judging by the 2nd picture, everything went well, especially by Nicole’s appearance, she was noticeably already completely succumbing to Mc

she has fo a quite a long time.

 

[Latex224]

You must be registered to see the links

Hey everyone! Here are three more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.
(For the script WIP, I've decided to add it along with the tittle photo. Hopefully that fixes the blurriness)

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon

Thank you 4 sharing.

 

[Night Hacker]

I only pointed out those items to the poster because of his claims to not be bothered by language. Figuring out what something is supposed to mean or be saying isn't difficult, but when a VN is riddled with mistakes and awful constructions, it really takes away from the enjoyment of it.

I get that many of the devs don't know or speak conversational English - and may use something like Go-dawful-ogle to translate. Even if it isn't excessively egregious, it does start to distract, particularly when it is constant and there is no apparent effort to improve upon it. I've offered no-cost review to some of the guys that have otherwise good VNs, but awful language editing, in hopes of helping them improve. But, they don't seem to want to be better, and that is truly annoying.

Agreed. There definitely needs to be some beta testing to check for errors. Many of these feel like they were rushed out the door without checking them at all. And for that I put some of the blame on people whining and complaining about how long it takes.

 

[ThorinKing]

And for that I put some of the blame on people whining and complaining about how long it takes.

Considering most of them are pirates, I'd just tell 'em to fuck off.

 

[Aiden619]

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Hey everyone! Here are three more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.
(For the script WIP, I've decided to add it along with the tittle photo. Hopefully that fixes the blurriness)

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon

Pic 1... I guess we would finally Take Nicole on the Kitchen Counter in continuation to the Nicole Welcome Dinner Deal when we made out with her hard....
Pic 2... As much as I want it to be the MC, Looking at those lips of the Man... I feel its John...

 

[Barretto24]

*do not bother me

And poor grammar and spelling do detract from the experience for most folks - at least those of us that are intellectually blessed.

Do not bother me is a statement. Doesn't bother me is a reaction. The correct usage would be Doesn't bother me but swings and roundabouts lol