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Part 15 - WIP_001.jpg Part 15 - WIP_002.jpg WIP - A Mother's Love Part 15 *Earth-Child #1

Hey everyone! I apologize for the delay, but here are the first two WIP scripts of Mother's Love Part 15!

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon :)
 
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View attachment 4136945 View attachment 4136943 WIP - A Mother's Love Part 15 *Earth-Child #1

Hey everyone! I apologize for the delay, but here are the first two WIP scripts of Mother's Love Part 15!

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon :)
Thank you for sharing this Aiden619! :love: :love: :love: Yay an update on the progress for Part 15!:love::love:

Back to theory time:

WIP Pic #1: Self-explanatory. It appears Nicole wants to see MC (Us) and we very much want to see her. I hope Nicole doesn't stood us up again. I'm guessing Nicole is really emotional on the news that MC (Us) is potentially leaving. But two things interest me in this pic:
1. The dialogue where Nicole says, "I'll be there at the park for a short while" interests me. Does Nicole have a surprise for MC (Us)? Because from that dialogue it appears she's preparing for something.
2. The time on when this phone call takes place interest me. Because of the second WIP picture.
But I bet at the end of this meeting both Nicole and MC (Us) will end up kissing each other and having sex.

WIP Pic#2: Self-explanatory too. It looks like MC (Us) will have some inner monologue after we got angry at Nicole and start to regret it. It's most likely this monologue we have is taking place where MC (Us) is talking to someone but I'm not sure who. The only two people I can think of are either Marilyn or Sylvia. Since they're the only two characters in MC's (Our) life that knows about our feelings for Nicole. But feel free to share who you think is MC (Us) talking to.

The only question is where does this scene take place? It's a possibility this scene takes place after Nicole and MC (Us) meet at the park. But it's also a possibility the meeting at the park is where MC (Us) apologizes to Nicole. And after MC (Us) apologizes both characters talk and will eventually kiss and find a place to have makeup sex. And I heard from movies and TV shows makeup sex is usually HOT! Hehehe:LOL::LOL:

But what do you guys think? I would like to hear your thoughts.
 

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is it true that at the end of chapter 14, there are hints of MCs mom NTR? if there is then is it avoidable or not?
Yes that is basicly jhon plan but so far we know nothing. just wait for next update, we will see she got ntr so hard or not.
 

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View attachment 4136945 View attachment 4136943 WIP - A Mother's Love Part 15 *Earth-Child #1

Hey everyone! I apologize for the delay, but here are the first two WIP scripts of Mother's Love Part 15!

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon :)
Thank you for this share, Aiden619.

Considering what is shown in those interesting WIP screenshots of the Part 15 code, it's very clear that MC is very frustrated with the situation generated in the cliffhanger of Part 14 and has undeservedly paid for it with Nicole, although I cannot explain what the cause may have been because MC knows that Nicole loves him, that she wants to be with him and that she already knows serious clues at least about what a bad person John is with Silvia.

I can totally understand that this is just caused by MC's huge frustration at being forced to leave his town, his friends and, above all, the woman he loves, but I can't help but find this rather fishy. Maybe it's something exclusive to the route where MC confesses his love to Nicole and doesn't happen in the route where Nicole confesses her love to MC? Or maybe it was just a too-crass attempt by MC to not give the impression of how close he and Nicole really are to each other when someone familiar (probably Chloe, John, or one of MC's parents) approached them unexpectedly while they were at the park? Or has MC, seeing that his departure is irreversible, simply tried to end (probably unconsciously) their relationship for Nicole's sake, so that she doesn't ruin the marriage and family that she loves so much, even if it is with that bastard John (it may be a bit cliché in fiction but this often happens in many affairs where both want to be together but one or both are tied down by their respective families and don't dare to take the step, so the other decides to burn bridges for the sake of the person he/she loves)? Or maybe MC is so nervous that he doubts Nicole's true love for him, perhaps thinking he's become nothing more than a plaything for her to temporarily escape her loveless marriage to John?

However, whatever the true origin of that poorly controlled frustration, it could also be adding a little more drama to their relationship for the narrative purpose of distancing them a bit so that MC (with the probable help of Marilyn and/or Silvia) can focus on finding a way to avoid his forced transfer and then reconcile with Nicole after a sincere apology and show her that he truly loves her. However, considering that the reason for the forced move is the health of his Aunt Martha, I highly doubt that he can do anything to prevent this move that would take him away from Nicole. At least in the short term.

Another thing is that Nicole, already completely hooked on MC's love, decides on her own to help MC, claiming to accompany him in helping to take care of his aunt Martha and trying to get away for a while from all the family circumstances that are tormenting her at that moment, since Chloe is apparently going to take a long time to recover and John is not exactly playing the role of a husband and father afflicted by his family circumstances, but rather focusing on his business affairs and enjoying coercing another of his many victims (probably the wife of the school principal, in revenge for what happened with her daughter since, being the principal, he should have ensured the safety and well-being of all his students at the graduation ceremony).

However, I highly doubt that this possibility will come true because it would mean Nicole would distance herself from Chloe in these difficult times and that would not be motherly at all. In fact, the following scenario seems more likely to me and would be a bombshell: Nicole is next to an unconscious Chloe during a night that she spends with her in a private hospital room for her alone and Nicole cannot help but be flooded by remorse for everything that happened (perhaps fueled by the frustration suffered at the words of MC) and she confesses in a loud enough voice her forbidden relationship with MC, at which point Chloe could wake up from her coma (probably without Nicole noticing, as she may have gone shortly afterwards to the bathroom in the hospital room where Chloe is staying).

Finally, leaving aside the multiple speculations about the content of this new Part 15, it must be kept in mind that Orb usually updates its new part three or four months after releasing the first post with WIP screenshots. So it looks like we'll be getting more MC and Nicole adventures starting in January or February 2025. Definitely a great way to make us want to get to next year as soon as possible.
 

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the game build around ntr :HideThePain: i'm kinda okay with it. maybe after that happen mc finally stop being pussy.
well mc's mom isn't li and john won't do anything while nic is preggo and doubt even after that.
 

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well mc's mom isn't li and john won't do anything while nic is preggo and doubt even after that.
what li mean ?
btw did jhon even care about the baby ? i mean dude already know about it but still doing his plan againt mc.
 

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love interest.

he cares if it's boy since he wants male hair.
i mean dude go after everyone wife even tho is not his love interest.
well gonna wait for new chapter for that, let's see how far jhon gonna go with it.
 

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i mean dude go after everyone wife even tho is not his love interest.
well gonna wait for new chapter for that, let's see how far jhon gonna go with it.
well john is sexmaniac who fucks women who are in need of money or his help.
 

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Thank you for this share, Aiden619.

Considering what is shown in those interesting WIP screenshots of the Part 15 code, it's very clear that MC is very frustrated with the situation generated in the cliffhanger of Part 14 and has undeservedly paid for it with Nicole, although I cannot explain what the cause may have been because MC knows that Nicole loves him, that she wants to be with him and that she already knows serious clues at least about what a bad person John is with Silvia.

I can totally understand that this is just caused by MC's huge frustration at being forced to leave his town, his friends and, above all, the woman he loves, but I can't help but find this rather fishy. Maybe it's something exclusive to the route where MC confesses his love to Nicole and doesn't happen in the route where Nicole confesses her love to MC? Or maybe it was just a too-crass attempt by MC to not give the impression of how close he and Nicole really are to each other when someone familiar (probably Chloe, John, or one of MC's parents) approached them unexpectedly while they were at the park? Or has MC, seeing that his departure is irreversible, simply tried to end (probably unconsciously) their relationship for Nicole's sake, so that she doesn't ruin the marriage and family that she loves so much, even if it is with that bastard John (it may be a bit cliché in fiction but this often happens in many affairs where both want to be together but one or both are tied down by their respective families and don't dare to take the step, so the other decides to burn bridges for the sake of the person he/she loves)? Or maybe MC is so nervous that he doubts Nicole's true love for him, perhaps thinking he's become nothing more than a plaything for her to temporarily escape her loveless marriage to John?

However, whatever the true origin of that poorly controlled frustration, it could also be adding a little more drama to their relationship for the narrative purpose of distancing them a bit so that MC (with the probable help of Marilyn and/or Silvia) can focus on finding a way to avoid his forced transfer and then reconcile with Nicole after a sincere apology and show her that he truly loves her. However, considering that the reason for the forced move is the health of his Aunt Martha, I highly doubt that he can do anything to prevent this move that would take him away from Nicole. At least in the short term.

Another thing is that Nicole, already completely hooked on MC's love, decides on her own to help MC, claiming to accompany him in helping to take care of his aunt Martha and trying to get away for a while from all the family circumstances that are tormenting her at that moment, since Chloe is apparently going to take a long time to recover and John is not exactly playing the role of a husband and father afflicted by his family circumstances, but rather focusing on his business affairs and enjoying coercing another of his many victims (probably the wife of the school principal, in revenge for what happened with her daughter since, being the principal, he should have ensured the safety and well-being of all his students at the graduation ceremony).

However, I highly doubt that this possibility will come true because it would mean Nicole would distance herself from Chloe in these difficult times and that would not be motherly at all. In fact, the following scenario seems more likely to me and would be a bombshell: Nicole is next to an unconscious Chloe during a night that she spends with her in a private hospital room for her alone and Nicole cannot help but be flooded by remorse for everything that happened (perhaps fueled by the frustration suffered at the words of MC) and she confesses in a loud enough voice her forbidden relationship with MC, at which point Chloe could wake up from her coma (probably without Nicole noticing, as she may have gone shortly afterwards to the bathroom in the hospital room where Chloe is staying).

Finally, leaving aside the multiple speculations about the content of this new Part 15, it must be kept in mind that Orb usually updates its new part three or four months after releasing the first post with WIP screenshots. So it looks like we'll be getting more MC and Nicole adventures starting in January or February 2025. Definitely a great way to make us want to get to next year as soon as possible.
Your theories and the multiple scenarios are always great to read! But it's a real headache to find out which one will play out when Part 15 is finally released. But I do hope this "fight" between MC (Us) & Nicole will not be dragged on or resolved in Part 16. That will be gut-wrenching. But I will speculate that their "fight" will be resolved towards the end of Part 15 and MC (Us) and Nicole will have makeup sex.

Your theories in the second paragraph are great! I just like to add to your theories about MC (Us) ending the relationship and MC (Us) thinking that Nicole is just using us to fulfill her sexual pleasures.

1. The first one is heartbreaking but I think it's out of character for MC (Us) to do this since we're so in love with Nicole already. It would make more sense if Nicole will be the one to do this but I doubt she'll be the one to initiate it now since in Part 14 regardless of whether MC or Nicole said, "I love you" first she's already in the next stage of love feelings towards MC (Us).

2. This is also heartbreaking and I bet Nicole will have a shocked face and will try not to cry face when MC (Us) mentions that she's just using us to fulfill her sexual desires. But I have a feeling if this were to happen adding my theory here. When MC & Nicole were to makeup towards the end and have makeup sex. Towards the climax of their sex (like both characters almost cumming), to prove that Nicole isn't using MC (Us) for sexual pleasure only, she decides for MC (Us) to cum inside her and it will surprise us. Also after the HOT makeup sex both characters will have a conversation about the future of their relationship and this will be the moment that Nicole will tell MC (Us) that she wants us to cum inside of her every time we have sex with her.

But at the end of this new update, I still believe that both of them will makeup near the end and will have a HOT makeup sex session.

I also love your theory about Nicole wanting to leave with MC to "help" him take care of his Aunt Martha but I agree that it will be completely out of character of Nicole to leave Chloe behind. However, according to the first WIP picture Nicole didn't come with her husband to the police station. But at the same time, I think this is a signal that she starts to lose trust and feelings towards John. But she won't leave Chloe.

I LOVE your theory about Nicole confessing to an unconscious Chloe about her forbidden relationship with MC (Us) and that confession could wake Chloe up and she ends up hearing everything about her mother's confession. This could be a good progress of the game and potentially Part 15's cliffhanger. But let's wait and see if this will be in the next update.

Lastly, in your last paragraph, if this is true, I want more dedicated MC (Us) and Nicole parts because before Part 14 MC's moments with Nicole were a bit short, So I hope in Part 15 and future updates we have more MC (Us) and Nicole moments.
 
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