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I finally caught up on the last few chapters I had never played, not with all the runs, but with enough to get a feel for it.
on the positive side, the story seems to have picked up a good pace, definitively resolving issues (the whole Beeman and Abigail part) and also moving other subplots forward in a meaningful way.
the development of many situations remains unfortunately average for AVNs, dramatic situations constructed however in a very forced way. the climax is the final twist, throughout the game continuously the parents find opportunities to talk to MC but never tell him anything and the idea of doing so in front of what is his boss and potentially also the father of his girlfriend, all this after she has subtly accused him of a theft and blatantly of being the one responsible for Chloe's kidnapping (which on the heat might have been forgivable, but afterwards becomes quite surreal).
But aside from these rather very common weaknesses, the “journey” was enjoyable.
the only thing I can't stand about this game is Marylin, who beats John in sadism every time she opens her mouth, and it often happens in very tense moments, where the excuse of wanting to lighten up doesn't work much, also with her “superpowers” she is also quite out of place in the plot for now leaving open a thousand possibilities for all the characters. in a story where there is Marilyn, John might as well be the devil...
on the positive side, the story seems to have picked up a good pace, definitively resolving issues (the whole Beeman and Abigail part) and also moving other subplots forward in a meaningful way.
the development of many situations remains unfortunately average for AVNs, dramatic situations constructed however in a very forced way. the climax is the final twist, throughout the game continuously the parents find opportunities to talk to MC but never tell him anything and the idea of doing so in front of what is his boss and potentially also the father of his girlfriend, all this after she has subtly accused him of a theft and blatantly of being the one responsible for Chloe's kidnapping (which on the heat might have been forgivable, but afterwards becomes quite surreal).
But aside from these rather very common weaknesses, the “journey” was enjoyable.
the only thing I can't stand about this game is Marylin, who beats John in sadism every time she opens her mouth, and it often happens in very tense moments, where the excuse of wanting to lighten up doesn't work much, also with her “superpowers” she is also quite out of place in the plot for now leaving open a thousand possibilities for all the characters. in a story where there is Marilyn, John might as well be the devil...
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as i said earlier, raminita hasn't posted anything so apparently not.
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Ooh, something spicy is coming up.
Fine setup for John
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Given the way Marilyn and John are, I wouldn't be surprised if a future Part reveals a new plot twist, stating that Marilyn is John's bastard daughter.
After all, I can't help but suspect the authenticity of her fascination with meddling in MC and Nicole's secret affair (the fact that she's attracted to Nicole can be an excuse, but I'm still not entirely convinced) and conditionally helping MC in everything related to this. Also, it's mentioned that she lives with her grandmother, but we barely know anything about her parents (I think the only thing about that is that Marilyn's mom was the first MILF MC noticed when he was a kid, by jokingly soaking her with the hose). On the other hand, this theory would also imply the possibility that John also had some kind of psychic powers, which in his case would help him corrupt the women he wants to turn into his sexual slaves.
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there might be a paranormal twist at some point, going beyond the character of Marylin, which I think is sort of a comic angle (which I don't find funny, but that will be my problem), but I hope not. there is already a big disparity of forces in the confrontation between Mc and John
what worries me more concretely is that Marylin is right about Silvia, even of Abigail she had always distrusted and in some ways she was right, if Silvia continued to be John's tool it would be a bad time.
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I understand your point about having those suspicions:
- In the case of Silvia, having been John's favorite plaything for so long may have corrupted her enough that all interactions with MC are a double agent's work, but perhaps with a hint of selfishness of her own (from her point of view, and if John has corrupted her completely, wouldn't she prefer Nicole's affair with MC to continue successfully so she could be left alone with John?).
- In the case of Abigail, what I find very fishy about her was that she didn't mention anything about the extraordinary resemblance between Chloe and Abi's dead sister to MC, which she found out by chance from the photo that Beeman dropped after their conversation shortly before graduation. On the other hand, this enormous resemblance has been material for many theories, since it would mean some kinship between Abi and her sister with Chloe, but neither Abi, nor John, nor Nicole mention anything about it (In fact, neither Abi nor Nicole show any sign of recognition between them when they meet at the hospital or at MC's high school).
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That ending hit me in the worst possible way. Especially since something sort of similar happened to me. I will have my vengeance. One day.
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This theory is very interesting and a part of my mind wants it to come true but there's another part that reminded me of the erotic novel that Marilyn wrote about her and Nicole. But it's still an interesting theory and twist.
These are also two interesting theories but if they turn out to be true it would be heartbreaking that two of our close allies or friends that we worked so hard to be on our side would use us and betray us later in the game. Even when they showed signs of support that they ship Nicole with MC (Us).
felicemastronzo
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I "forgave" Abigail's omission, albeit with serious consequences; her sister's story is very personal and complicated, with a very painful intersection of relationships and desires for her.
Losing Silvia, however, would be much more painful, not least because it would hardly really be her fault, but just a sign of how much John has her in his grip
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I totally forgot the game was updated months ago, and just barely played the latest chapter yesterday. It reaffirmed my feelings about the story. I only care about two things: Nicole, and after a big gap, seeing how big a bastard John can be. He's cartoonishly evil and it's pretty entertaining.
Also, does anyone have all of the Patreon exclusive stuff? Or does it completely end up in the game?
Also, does anyone have all of the Patreon exclusive stuff? Or does it completely end up in the game?
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I folded the baby into "Nicole", but of course the baby.
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Hey everyone! Here are two more WIP scripts of Mother's Love Part 15!
Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon
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Thank you very much for this share, Aiden619.You must be registered to see the links
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Hey everyone! Here are two more WIP scripts of Mother's Love Part 15!
Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon
Some very interesting screenshots of the new Part 15 code. On the one hand, we see a hot moment in the foyer of Nicole's home where she will be more corrupted if we are on the route where she is pregnant by MC. On the other hand, we see how John Heavens has the arrogant nerve to confess to MC that he "enjoys to have MC's mother in sight".
The doubts about them are, in my opinion, mainly two:
- if the first of the codes is before or after the moment when MC undeservedly takes out on Nicole his enormous frustration over the family situation he finds himself in. Personally, I'm leaning toward the idea that said code is part of a new wet dream of Nicole's that turns into a nightmare when she imagines John catching them red-handed or the make-up sex scene we all longed for after reading last week's WIP screenshots (at first glance, the scene seems more exhibitionist and risky than what MC and Nicole could actually do, but it could be justifiable considering the frustration that MC has been feeling lately).
- if the second of these codes occurs in the Heavens' own house, shortly after the ambush suffered by MC, or if it occurs during a visit by MC to Magic Grand, after John informs him that he is lifting the veto on him going to the agency. Each possibility has its pros and cons, although it happens wherever it happens, I think this scene will be before MC unfairly takes out his deep frustration on Nicole.