VN Ren'Py A Mother's Love [Part 1-15 Plus] [OrbOrigin]

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J0K3RXXX said:
Thank you for this share, Aiden619.

Considering what is shown in those interesting WIP screenshots of the Part 15 code, it's very clear that MC is very frustrated with the situation generated in the cliffhanger of Part 14 and has undeservedly paid for it with Nicole, although I cannot explain what the cause may have been because MC knows that Nicole loves him, that she wants to be with him and that she already knows serious clues at least about what a bad person John is with Silvia.

I can totally understand that this is just caused by MC's huge frustration at being forced to leave his town, his friends and, above all, the woman he loves, but I can't help but find this rather fishy. Maybe it's something exclusive to the route where MC confesses his love to Nicole and doesn't happen in the route where Nicole confesses her love to MC? Or maybe it was just a too-crass attempt by MC to not give the impression of how close he and Nicole really are to each other when someone familiar (probably Chloe, John, or one of MC's parents) approached them unexpectedly while they were at the park? Or has MC, seeing that his departure is irreversible, simply tried to end (probably unconsciously) their relationship for Nicole's sake, so that she doesn't ruin the marriage and family that she loves so much, even if it is with that bastard John (it may be a bit cliché in fiction but this often happens in many affairs where both want to be together but one or both are tied down by their respective families and don't dare to take the step, so the other decides to burn bridges for the sake of the person he/she loves)? Or maybe MC is so nervous that he doubts Nicole's true love for him, perhaps thinking he's become nothing more than a plaything for her to temporarily escape her loveless marriage to John?

However, whatever the true origin of that poorly controlled frustration, it could also be adding a little more drama to their relationship for the narrative purpose of distancing them a bit so that MC (with the probable help of Marilyn and/or Silvia) can focus on finding a way to avoid his forced transfer and then reconcile with Nicole after a sincere apology and show her that he truly loves her. However, considering that the reason for the forced move is the health of his Aunt Martha, I highly doubt that he can do anything to prevent this move that would take him away from Nicole. At least in the short term.

Another thing is that Nicole, already completely hooked on MC's love, decides on her own to help MC, claiming to accompany him in helping to take care of his aunt Martha and trying to get away for a while from all the family circumstances that are tormenting her at that moment, since Chloe is apparently going to take a long time to recover and John is not exactly playing the role of a husband and father afflicted by his family circumstances, but rather focusing on his business affairs and enjoying coercing another of his many victims (probably the wife of the school principal, in revenge for what happened with her daughter since, being the principal, he should have ensured the safety and well-being of all his students at the graduation ceremony).

However, I highly doubt that this possibility will come true because it would mean Nicole would distance herself from Chloe in these difficult times and that would not be motherly at all. In fact, the following scenario seems more likely to me and would be a bombshell: Nicole is next to an unconscious Chloe during a night that she spends with her in a private hospital room for her alone and Nicole cannot help but be flooded by remorse for everything that happened (perhaps fueled by the frustration suffered at the words of MC) and she confesses in a loud enough voice her forbidden relationship with MC, at which point Chloe could wake up from her coma (probably without Nicole noticing, as she may have gone shortly afterwards to the bathroom in the hospital room where Chloe is staying).

Finally, leaving aside the multiple speculations about the content of this new Part 15, it must be kept in mind that Orb usually updates its new part three or four months after releasing the first post with WIP screenshots. So it looks like we'll be getting more MC and Nicole adventures starting in January or February 2025. Definitely a great way to make us want to get to next year as soon as possible.
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Your theories and the multiple scenarios are always great to read! But it's a real headache to find out which one will play out when Part 15 is finally released. But I do hope this "fight" between MC (Us) & Nicole will not be dragged on or resolved in Part 16. That will be gut-wrenching. But I will speculate that their "fight" will be resolved towards the end of Part 15 and MC (Us) and Nicole will have makeup sex.

Your theories in the second paragraph are great! I just like to add to your theories about MC (Us) ending the relationship and MC (Us) thinking that Nicole is just using us to fulfill her sexual pleasures.

1. The first one is heartbreaking but I think it's out of character for MC (Us) to do this since we're so in love with Nicole already. It would make more sense if Nicole will be the one to do this but I doubt she'll be the one to initiate it now since in Part 14 regardless of whether MC or Nicole said, "I love you" first she's already in the next stage of love feelings towards MC (Us).

2. This is also heartbreaking and I bet Nicole will have a shocked face and will try not to cry face when MC (Us) mentions that she's just using us to fulfill her sexual desires. But I have a feeling if this were to happen adding my theory here. When MC & Nicole were to makeup towards the end and have makeup sex. Towards the climax of their sex (like both characters almost cumming), to prove that Nicole isn't using MC (Us) for sexual pleasure only, she decides for MC (Us) to cum inside her and it will surprise us. Also after the HOT makeup sex both characters will have a conversation about the future of their relationship and this will be the moment that Nicole will tell MC (Us) that she wants us to cum inside of her every time we have sex with her.

But at the end of this new update, I still believe that both of them will makeup near the end and will have a HOT makeup sex session.

I also love your theory about Nicole wanting to leave with MC to "help" him take care of his Aunt Martha but I agree that it will be completely out of character of Nicole to leave Chloe behind. However, according to the first WIP picture Nicole didn't come with her husband to the police station. But at the same time, I think this is a signal that she starts to lose trust and feelings towards John. But she won't leave Chloe.

I LOVE your theory about Nicole confessing to an unconscious Chloe about her forbidden relationship with MC (Us) and that confession could wake Chloe up and she ends up hearing everything about her mother's confession. This could be a good progress of the game and potentially Part 15's cliffhanger. But let's wait and see if this will be in the next update.

Lastly, in your last paragraph, if this is true, I want more dedicated MC (Us) and Nicole parts because before Part 14 MC's moments with Nicole were a bit short, So I hope in Part 15 and future updates we have more MC (Us) and Nicole moments.
 
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I finally caught up on the last few chapters I had never played, not with all the runs, but with enough to get a feel for it.

on the positive side, the story seems to have picked up a good pace, definitively resolving issues (the whole Beeman and Abigail part) and also moving other subplots forward in a meaningful way.

the development of many situations remains unfortunately average for AVNs, dramatic situations constructed however in a very forced way. the climax is the final twist, throughout the game continuously the parents find opportunities to talk to MC but never tell him anything and the idea of doing so in front of what is his boss and potentially also the father of his girlfriend, all this after she has subtly accused him of a theft and blatantly of being the one responsible for Chloe's kidnapping (which on the heat might have been forgivable, but afterwards becomes quite surreal).

But aside from these rather very common weaknesses, the “journey” was enjoyable.

the only thing I can't stand about this game is Marylin, who beats John in sadism every time she opens her mouth, and it often happens in very tense moments, where the excuse of wanting to lighten up doesn't work much, also with her “superpowers” she is also quite out of place in the plot for now leaving open a thousand possibilities for all the characters. in a story where there is Marilyn, John might as well be the devil...
 
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felicemastronzo said:
the only thing I can't stand about this game is Marylin, who beats John in sadism every time she opens her mouth, and it often happens in very tense moments, where the excuse of wanting to lighten up doesn't work much, also with her “superpowers” she is also quite out of place in the plot for now leaving open a thousand possibilities for all the characters. in a story where there is Marilyn, John might as well be the devil...
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Given the way Marilyn and John are, I wouldn't be surprised if a future Part reveals a new plot twist, stating that Marilyn is John's bastard daughter.

After all, I can't help but suspect the authenticity of her fascination with meddling in MC and Nicole's secret affair (the fact that she's attracted to Nicole can be an excuse, but I'm still not entirely convinced) and conditionally helping MC in everything related to this. Also, it's mentioned that she lives with her grandmother, but we barely know anything about her parents (I think the only thing about that is that Marilyn's mom was the first MILF MC noticed when he was a kid, by jokingly soaking her with the hose). On the other hand, this theory would also imply the possibility that John also had some kind of psychic powers, which in his case would help him corrupt the women he wants to turn into his sexual slaves.
 
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J0K3RXXX said:
Given the way Marilyn and John are, I wouldn't be surprised if a future Part reveals a new plot twist, stating that Marilyn is John's bastard daughter.

After all, I can't help but suspect the authenticity of her fascination with meddling in MC and Nicole's secret affair (the fact that she's attracted to Nicole can be an excuse, but I'm still not entirely convinced) and conditionally helping MC in everything related to this. Also, it's mentioned that she lives with her grandmother, but we barely know anything about her parents (I think the only thing about that is that Marilyn's mom was the first MILF MC noticed when he was a kid, by jokingly soaking her with the hose). On the other hand, this theory would also imply the possibility that John also had some kind of psychic powers, which in his case would help him corrupt the women he wants to turn into his sexual slaves.
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there might be a paranormal twist at some point, going beyond the character of Marylin, which I think is sort of a comic angle (which I don't find funny, but that will be my problem), but I hope not. there is already a big disparity of forces in the confrontation between Mc and John

what worries me more concretely is that Marylin is right about Silvia, even of Abigail she had always distrusted and in some ways she was right, if Silvia continued to be John's tool it would be a bad time.
 
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felicemastronzo said:
there might be a paranormal twist at some point, going beyond the character of Marylin, which I think is sort of a comic angle (which I don't find funny, but that will be my problem), but I hope not. there is already a big disparity of forces in the confrontation between Mc and John

what worries me more concretely is that Marylin is right about Silvia, even of Abigail she had always distrusted and in some ways she was right, if Silvia continued to be John's tool it would be a bad time.
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I understand your point about having those suspicions:
  • In the case of Silvia, having been John's favorite plaything for so long may have corrupted her enough that all interactions with MC are a double agent's work, but perhaps with a hint of selfishness of her own (from her point of view, and if John has corrupted her completely, wouldn't she prefer Nicole's affair with MC to continue successfully so she could be left alone with John?).
  • In the case of Abigail, what I find very fishy about her was that she didn't mention anything about the extraordinary resemblance between Chloe and Abi's dead sister to MC, which she found out by chance from the photo that Beeman dropped after their conversation shortly before graduation. On the other hand, this enormous resemblance has been material for many theories, since it would mean some kinship between Abi and her sister with Chloe, but neither Abi, nor John, nor Nicole mention anything about it (In fact, neither Abi nor Nicole show any sign of recognition between them when they meet at the hospital or at MC's high school).
 
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That ending hit me in the worst possible way. Especially since something sort of similar happened to me. I will have my vengeance. One day.
 
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J0K3RXXX said:
Given the way Marilyn and John are, I wouldn't be surprised if a future Part reveals a new plot twist, stating that Marilyn is John's bastard daughter.

After all, I can't help but suspect the authenticity of her fascination with meddling in MC and Nicole's secret affair (the fact that she's attracted to Nicole can be an excuse, but I'm still not entirely convinced) and conditionally helping MC in everything related to this. Also, it's mentioned that she lives with her grandmother, but we barely know anything about her parents (I think the only thing about that is that Marilyn's mom was the first MILF MC noticed when he was a kid, by jokingly soaking her with the hose). On the other hand, this theory would also imply the possibility that John also had some kind of psychic powers, which in his case would help him corrupt the women he wants to turn into his sexual slaves.
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This theory is very interesting and a part of my mind wants it to come true but there's another part that reminded me of the erotic novel that Marilyn wrote about her and Nicole. But it's still an interesting theory and twist.

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I understand your point about having those suspicions:
  • In the case of Silvia, having been John's favorite plaything for so long may have corrupted her enough that all interactions with MC are a double agent's work, but perhaps with a hint of selfishness of her own (from her point of view, and if John has corrupted her completely, wouldn't she prefer Nicole's affair with MC to continue successfully so she could be left alone with John?).
  • In the case of Abigail, what I find very fishy about her was that she didn't mention anything about the extraordinary resemblance between Chloe and Abi's dead sister to MC, which she found out by chance from the photo that Beeman dropped after their conversation shortly before graduation. On the other hand, this enormous resemblance has been material for many theories, since it would mean some kinship between Abi and her sister with Chloe, but neither Abi, nor John, nor Nicole mention anything about it (In fact, neither Abi nor Nicole show any sign of recognition between them when they meet at the hospital or at MC's high school).
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These are also two interesting theories but if they turn out to be true it would be heartbreaking that two of our close allies or friends that we worked so hard to be on our side would use us and betray us later in the game. Even when they showed signs of support that they ship Nicole with MC (Us).
 
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J0K3RXXX said:
I understand your point about having those suspicions:
  • In the case of Silvia, having been John's favorite plaything for so long may have corrupted her enough that all interactions with MC are a double agent's work, but perhaps with a hint of selfishness of her own (from her point of view, and if John has corrupted her completely, wouldn't she prefer Nicole's affair with MC to continue successfully so she could be left alone with John?).
  • In the case of Abigail, what I find very fishy about her was that she didn't mention anything about the extraordinary resemblance between Chloe and Abi's dead sister to MC, which she found out by chance from the photo that Beeman dropped after their conversation shortly before graduation. On the other hand, this enormous resemblance has been material for many theories, since it would mean some kinship between Abi and her sister with Chloe, but neither Abi, nor John, nor Nicole mention anything about it (In fact, neither Abi nor Nicole show any sign of recognition between them when they meet at the hospital or at MC's high school).
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I "forgave" Abigail's omission, albeit with serious consequences; her sister's story is very personal and complicated, with a very painful intersection of relationships and desires for her.

Losing Silvia, however, would be much more painful, not least because it would hardly really be her fault, but just a sign of how much John has her in his grip
 
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I totally forgot the game was updated months ago, and just barely played the latest chapter yesterday. It reaffirmed my feelings about the story. I only care about two things: Nicole, and after a big gap, seeing how big a bastard John can be. He's cartoonishly evil and it's pretty entertaining.

Also, does anyone have all of the Patreon exclusive stuff? Or does it completely end up in the game?
 
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