A-Levels? Mum? Do we have a British author? \o/
Please please let them talk about eye colo
ur or aluminium recycling....sorry my warped sense of humor :evilsmile:
I like this, and not just because of the above.
The models are attractive and I liked the renders.
The story takes an unusual approach and it will be interesting how this pans out given the rules set down in the text and the ignorance of the sisters.
The back story is less than believable for any number of reasons (not that the headline story is a work of fact :closedeyesmile
and with Rebb doing what she's doing, it'll be interesting to see how the author plays it. TBH long lost uncle or something may have been better....sorry, but this part broke the 4th wall for the time being.
Getting picky now - there are several grammar/spelling errors and I got an error page at the start of the 1st kiss with mum.
Content wise 0.5 felt more like a 0.2 or 0.3, but I enjoyed it and look forward to more.