VN Ren'Py Abandoned A.O.A. Academy [Ch.5 Gold] [TLGGAMES]

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AL.d

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Some beautiful renders and fun concept but the writing needs some work even for porn game standards. Imo it tries a bit too hard to be dramatic by dealing with heavy subjects but those need to be treated carefully otherwise it ends up silly.

For example, an emotional discussion about deceased relatives doesn't tend to be immediately followed by 'Hey, wanna play with my titties?". Unless the two participants have really weird tastes about the type of talk that sets the mood.

In the same vain, apparently Mr Richards has some kind of turbo cancer because it seems to have gone beyond the final (4th) stage.

I don't even need to go in depth about all the possible ways MC could get acquainted with the female cast that don't involve being a freakin maid doing laundry...
 
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AL.d said:
Some beautiful renders and fun concept but the writing needs some work even for porn game standards. Imo it tries a bit too hard to be dramatic by dealing with heavy subjects but those need to be treated carefully otherwise it ends up silly.

For example, an emotional discussion about deceased relatives doesn't tend to be immediately followed by 'Hey, wanna play with my titties?". Unless the two participants have really weird tastes about the type of talk that sets the mood.

In the same vain, apparently Mr Richards has some kind of turbo cancer because it seems to have gone beyond the final (4th) stage.

I don't even need to go in depth about all the possible ways MC could get acquainted with the female cast that don't involve being a freakin maid doing laundry...
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And yet the writing is still better than 90% of the crap out there...at least even in his sheltered farm life he isn't...Ohh a woman...ohh she looked at me...what do I do...fuck she's hot...need to bang her....
 
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Maviarab said:
And yet the writing is still better than 90% of the crap out there...at least even in his sheltered farm life he isn't...Ohh a woman...ohh she looked at me...what do I do...fuck she's hot...need to bang her....
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I wouldn't say 90% but it's decent. Which is what made me notice those flaws even more. They stand out because the overall level of writing is not that bad.
 
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I'm kind of surprised by the people who are upset about having to clean a house for a week to be accepted to college. Seems like a really small price to a random heiress who forced a college to accept substandard applicants.
 
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Lord_b said:
I'm kind of surprised by the people who are upset about having to clean a house for a week to be accepted to college. Seems like a really small price to a random heiress who forced a college to accept substandard applicants.
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I understand that, and we will have a choice after one week whether we want to continue this or not. It doesn't bother me, we can get to know girls better during this. :)
As in Being a DIK, there was Hell Week. And the tasks were not easy. You had to go through it to join DIK's.
 
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Vmr15 said:
How to get perfect score for Jenny?

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There's a walkthrough mod for the right choices, but I think the thing that most people miss is not saying "Thank you" in the office after she intervenes. That and don't accept the BJ.
 
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I just finished playing. I like this game very much, it has potential. I don't understand why people are complaining about Jenny like that, I like her. Ok, I didn't play the previous version, it was a bit different there, but it's good anyway.
I am very interested in who was the person that MC reminds Jenny of her.
About the job Jenny gave us. Some people are annoyed that we cannot refuse this offer, but why do so many people complain? when it's just for a week. After that, we will have options to quit or continue working. And at work, we'll get to know the girls better, what's wrong with that?

I'm curious about Rebecca's past, I liked her, such a shy girl. Valerie definitely has a history with some murder, this flashback spoke it for itself.
I love Ashley the most. Sweet, loving girl. :love: I'm waiting for more content with her, and a conversation about their past, for a moment when the MC will tell her about his father's death. And it would be fun to meet Ashley's roommate.

Susan is beautiful, I hope we can create a relationship with her.

This guy Eric (muscular bald man) interested me a bit. Although he is muscular, his behavior is not typical of a person like him.
I wonder what his story is.

I don't know if it's just me, but Dev seems to have picked up some of the women's looks from Being a DIK. Jenny looks a lot like Maya. I will not mention the rest, whoever played in BaDIK knows.

Besides, waiting for more, good job Dev. :)
 
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Skylaroo said:
Porn game players are extremely alpha macho man boi, so it hurt their heart of stainless steel when the male character that they projected themselves into is being made to work for a woman.
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Oversimplification, generalization and passive-aggressive insults, all telltale signs of a very weak argument.

I could type a dozen jobs a man can do while employed by a woman that don't involve a profession traditionally associated with female subservience for decades if not centuries.

In the context of a porn game, I 'd be fine with it, if it fit the overall theme of the game. Another femdom game that's all about a dude serving in a house full of rich women is among my favorites on here after all. In this case, it doesn't fit the theme at all.
 
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Skylaroo said:
Porn game players are extremely alpha macho man boi, so it hurt their heart of stainless steel when the male character that they projected themselves into is being made to work for a woman.
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It is very amusing that you brought up gender into this considering if genders were reversed people like you would be the first one to be outraged if Jenny character would be portrayed as morally good. A young girl has to take of her shirt to entertain bunch of men or give up any hope of ever being enrolled into a college in her country. I bet the guy who set this all up would be viewed as a sweetheart by everyone.
 
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AL.d said:
Oversimplification, generalization and passive-aggressive insults, all telltale signs of a very weak argument.
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Overcomplication, generalization and passive-aggressive insults, all telltale signs of someone who can't take a joke. smh

AL.d said:
In the context of a porn game, I 'd be fine with it, if it fit the overall theme of the game. Another femdom game that's all about a dude serving in a house full of rich women is among my favorites on here after all. In this case, it doesn't fit the theme at all.
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Why does being a maid have to be about femdom? A job is a job. A butler is basically doing a maid's job and being a man seems to fine, no? MC is poor guy from the country side being accepted into prestige university without finishing high school just because of the owner pulling special card. Willing to repay the favor AND getting paid to do so has nothing to do with femdom.

Meridian said:
It is very amusing that you brought up macho man streotype considering if genders were reversed people like you would be the first one to be outraged. A young girl has to take of her shirt to entertain bunch of men or give up any hope of ever being enrolled into a college in her country. I bet the guy who set this all up would be viewed as a sweetheart by everyone.
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It's like you don't even read the dialogue in the game or something.
1. MC is already accepted despite not even finishing high school.
2. Being the maid is a PAID job.
3. Taking the shirt off is OPTIONAL. Yes, MC can refuse to do so if you don't want to.
4. Refusing to take the shirt off does NOT affect MC's hope of ever being enrolled into a college in the country.
 
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