VN Ren'Py Abandoned A.O.A. Academy [Ch.5 Gold] [TLGGAMES]

[Alfred the Fallen]

So far, the game seems to sit in that awkwardly frustrating position where it's almost great. So while it is one of the better games here, it's going to be hit with a disproportionate amount of criticism and complaints because players can see the potential here and want the game to be as good as it can be. (Keep that in mind as I complain about stuff now.)

It's great the the author addressed the problem with Jenny, but I think that they have over-corrected a bit.

Spoiler: Jenny Scenes

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I think that Susan is the hottest character in the game so far, so I was disappointed with how our first meeting went.

Spoiler: Susan Intro Scene

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On the whole, I think that the game is very promising. I am curious to learn what exactly went on with Ashley, and eager to get to know Vicky and Rebecca better. Looks like there will be a lot of fun to found here at A.O.A Academy in the future.

 

[Dripping]

It's great the the author addressed the problem with Jenny, but I think that they have over-corrected a bit.

Spoiler: Jenny Scenes

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I think Ashley saying so came a bit out of the blue, she knew Jenny even less than MC did. However, from Rebecca and Jade, it totally made sense, because that is their point of view. They're grateful to Jenny, and understand Jenny had her reasons to pick MC as their handymaid. So, they will try to encourage MC to stay around, it's the least they can do for Jenny.

The reason why Jenny picked MC is more interesting to me though. He reminded her of someone, that's one thing. But I suspect that MC's sacrificial nature, how he put caring for his father before everything else, played a big role as well. It seems like she didn't want an alphamale around her house, but wanted someone who cares more about other people. (I also have a hunch that being too dominant would prove lethal around Valery)

 

[akikospam74]

Damn, I'm simping Jenny already

Visually, this game is top notch! I hope the story is ok

 

[Nakathor]

I really love it so far and I can't wait to know more about every charac ! The story is nicely written, I enjoyed it a lot before going to sleep eh ! I wish you the best for the future !

 

[chaughton22]

Girl on the far bottom left looks like an ex of mine.... She was a really hot ex, so that's a good thing. I dig alt girls, and chicks with ink and piercings, so this is checking a lot of boxes. Keep up the good work.

Definitely gonna download, will report back with gameplay impressions.

 

[-L-L-MJ-]

I'll quote my previous comment for some context ;

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Build 1.2
I'll start by saying that with the "original" version fresh in my mind and kind of dreading the changes that were implemented I was absolutely biased.

Seeing the "overdone" elaborate dialogue and inner-thoughts/monologues with such a strong dare I say even forced emphasize to contradict previous speculation made me feel nauseous and I closed the game. After some distractions and hopefully with a more objective mind set I played through the game several times.

I still can't help but feel that the changes are too out there. The text has changed drastically to conform to what I still believe was a very vocal but small minority. I feel like putting some of these statements out there so thick has also robbed Jenny from a more natural path of character discovery/progression. In the previous version she had a certain mystique about her aside from the more interesting dynamics between the two, to which I was looking forward to see develop all of that seems to be downplayed to oblivion now with disclaimers put in every so often about how good it all is. It could really do with some polishing because currently it feels like a children's plot to porn..

Aside from the unnecessary disclaimers put in, there are definitely changes I do appreciate.
Jade instead of Jenny suggesting things, the laundry room where Jade gives a small insight into Jenny, the dialogue in the car towards their place. I just feel like those moments should have been enough to contradict the can of shit some opened about Jenny..

So far, the game seems to sit in that awkwardly frustrating position where it's almost great. So while it is one of the better games here, it's going to be hit with a disproportionate amount of criticism and complaints because players can see the potential here and want the game to be as good as it can be. (Keep that in mind as I complain about stuff now.)

It's great the the author addressed the problem with Jenny, but I think that they have over-corrected a bit.

Spoiler: Jenny Scenes

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I think that Susan is the hottest character in the game so far, so I was disappointed with how our first meeting went.

Spoiler: Susan Intro Scene

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On the whole, I think that the game is very promising. I am curious to learn what exactly went on with Ashley, and eager to get to know Vicky and Rebecca better. Looks like there will be a lot of fun to found here at A.O.A Academy in the future.

I agree with a lot of this, I also believe we should have been discussing how hot Susan is and why your choices there didn't matter nor seem to reflect on how she perceives you. Would have been way better to have as a topic then how people perceived Jenny.. So many things more interesting than that.

You pointed a lot of things out that I meant with "disclaimers" it really seems way over the top.

 

[Mars88]

Can anybody share PDF walkthrough?

 

[elysium1988]

I think that Susan is the hottest character in the game so far

Didn't read the rest of the stuff but I totally agree with this. Hopefully there will be scenes with Susan and she will be an active character in the story. Maybe even a part of the harem.

 

[Jungchanwoo442]

Andriod version

 

[Maviarab]

Wow, this was pleasently surprising. Can't comment on any changes as only just tried this but really liked what I saw.

Definitely going to follow this one for updates.

 

[Zeruvex]

Hope there is an android version?

 

[AceOfNiagara]

Andriod version

Hope there is an android version?

There's this one but it's the previous version. Just waiting on them to do an update to their port.

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My Android Ports have a 2nd Persistent save location. So, even if you uninstall the game, the saves will remain Intact.

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[89898hh]

Liked it so far. This has potential!

 

[eldonini]

This is really great stuff, keep up the good work.

 

[Ahchi]

Just download the game and did a quick run through,
and I must say that I am very impressed with the quality of the work put into this game.
If TLG can maintain this standard we are looking at a future classic that will surpass "Acting Lessons"
and rival "Where the heart is", "Being a DIK" or even "Melody"

 

[chaughton22]

Just download the game and did a quick run through,
and I must say that I am very impressed with the quality of the work put into this game.
If TLG can maintain this standard we are looking at a future classic that will surpass "Acting Lessons"
and rival "Where the heart is", "Being a DIK" or even "Melody"

That's some really high praise there, those are widely considered some of the best games on the site.

 

[GodOfMercy]

Was enjoyable but short, lots of story plot options and routes it can go, some cute girls as well, sadly did not find any character that that i really want to get to know better right of the bad, did start getting a bit interesting near the end fought

 

[MrFriendly]

Beautiful renders with a fairly standard school setting story idea, too early to decide much else since we only have the prologue to play. Did feel like the whole move from the farm was rushed, it would have been nice to have a bit where the MC talked to his uncle about the farm, maybe something to let us get to know Kara more, etc.
Need to know more about the argument the MC had with Ashley but I am not a fan yet, also not a fan of Jenny (maybe ever).
Never been a fan of being forced to do things (irl or in games) and being required to work as the maid for the girl's house isn't something I was interested in doing (my maid fetish is for women dressed as maids not for cleaning up a house ).

There are some typos that a good proofread would clear up. Nothing too terrible.

Look forward to seeing where this goes from here. Definitely has potential but it needs to be more than a BA Dik clone or "college guy learns to fuck" game.

 

[Moose_Tracks]

Just played the updated 0.1.2 build and wanted to say bravo to TLG for the reworked segments. I can def appreciate the additional level of finesse implemented when navigating through Jenny's scenes, both in the Dean's office and back at her place. Likewise for the extra fun in Jenny's bedroom being entirely dependent on if we choose her or not while downstairs. What a nice and tidy way of cleaning things up all the while keeping the original vision for the story intact. The new extra scenes provided some additional context regarding Jenny to really round out her character a bit more too, and I'm always down for some extra background info.

If it wasn't already before, this now certainly has the feel of a rock solid foundation to build upon for everything that lies ahead. Nice work.

 

[diegao]

Unofficial Android Port for 0.1.1Fix Compressed :

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Could plz do the port of this game with lastest update. Thank you very much