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VN Ren'Py Abandoned A.O.A. Academy [Ch.5 Gold] [TLGGAMES]

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VossJck

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Dec 31, 2019
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Welp, you got me, had to sign on. I want to see where this goes!
Well written, good models, made me think a bit about what is happening.
 
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VossJck

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Phooploid said:
Just started playing, and everything seems very well executed. Nice models, well written out and believable dialogues, believable story (so far) and no major bugs or anything. Scene direction also seems quite nice.
I do have one major annoyance though. That anime style intro movie you get after that first phone call, the audio in that isn't linked to the audio opties. So it fking blasts the audio at full volume. Very annoying for someone who tends to put down the in game volume to 10 or 20%, because he wants to listen to his own music. Please fix.

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Okay, I'm starting to noticing some writing issues.
"has train doors always been this short" "I've never gotten in one for years..."

I don't even know what the writers are trying to say with those sentences. Even if I were to interpret those sentences as:
Have train doors always been this small? I haven't been in a train for years." -- I'd still say the sentences are weird.
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They are letting you know that the MC is tall. Being extremely tall this made sense to me. It might not be perfect English but get the intended point.
 
robbaniak

robbaniak

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Jul 17, 2019
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I am absolutely for it.
The sensational (slightly nostalgic) atmosphere of the game, beautiful renders and, most importantly, an interesting story.
I look forward to the sequel.
 
elysium1988

elysium1988

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Sep 21, 2017
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Wow I didn't think the creator would come up with an update so fast, in the matter of days and that too with a decent bit of addition and changes. Nice work. It seems like the latest update has pretty much addressed every issue that people were having with the Jenny character/scene/section.

Btw I just noticed a small discrepancy TrueLoveGames, while the calendar in Ashley's room shows June 2020, the acceptance letter shows April 21, 2018 and according to letter the 'MC should 'come before next month before the semester starts'.
 
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oidex

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TrueLoveGames So. Much. Better now. The characters actions and reactions now actually make sense and Jenny feels like the troubled but goodhearted character you wanted her to be. Double thumbs up.
 
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elysium1988 said:
Wow I didn't think the creator would come up with an update so fast, in the matter of days and that too with a decent bit of addition and changes. Nice work. It seems like the latest update has pretty much addressed every issue that people were having with the Jenny character/scene/section.

Btw I just noticed a small discrepancy TrueLoveGames, while the calendar in Ashley's room shows June 2020, the acceptance letter shows April 21, 2018 and according to letter the 'MC should 'come before next month before the semester starts'. Also the Acceptance later and the admission form has Mr. Marc as the character name which kinda doesn't suit the flow since the character name is user choice.
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Marc is the MC's last name.
 
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shenzy

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I usually just blast through the dialogue to get to the juicy bits and go everyone ,but man Ashley really makes me want to just go on her route only. Fantastic!
 
kanekidom

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I didn't really know what to think because the name didn't really catch me, but damn this has alot of potential to be an amazing game. I like the school setting it gives me Being a Dik vibes. Multiple beautiful women with engaging convos that you actually want to read, I can't wait for more thank you!
 
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Raptus Puellae

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elysium1988 said:
Huh? wait what? He/she should not have created the character because YOU do not like it. It's HIS/her GAME after all and his/her story to tell, the way he wants. TLG already has mentioned that he/she created the character as a 'gray' character. People think just because they are the MC's love interest the character needs to be 'good'. No it doesn't really have to be like that.

In real life too there are often people who have done or do bad things, that doesn't really mean they are an all out evil person, they could be misguided or controlled by circumstances so yeah people can be neither good or bad, but a bit of both. Jenny at this current point of time seems like that kind of character with tinges of both good and bad traits just like many people have in real life. Like the developer mentions he will slowly reveal the backstory of the character and what her intentions with the MC are. That is only when we will be able to decide if she is a lovable character or if she should be despised.

And what even if she is a bad character, its not like in real life people do not fall in love with bad people. Not like in movies there aren't negative partners of protagonists. After all its just a STORY that is being told. We are just interactive readers.
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Meridian said:
Didn't he mean to say that Jenny is already perfect?:unsure: And I think the whole Jenny discussion happened not because she did something questionable but because developer didnt give player any meaningful agency over main characters reaction
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that's precisely what I ment, and the whole Jenny situation I considered as a combination of few things.
1) MC might have gotten a schlarship or not, but he still needs money, Jenny offered him a job that wouldn't interfere with his studies.
2) she saw MC and ashley talk and got a bit jealous
3) she wanted to put both the girls and MC at ease so she did that thing, plus she liked that MC refused the bj
 
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