VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3] [Mr Palmer]

[Devilrebel]

This a slow burn but worth the wait, I guess.

 

[GingerSweetGirl]

Well, Inside Jennifer definitely has NTR, good animations... And a dumb as a rock female MC too.

Inside Jennifer had SOOOOOOO much potential, but it falls apart. The first couple of episodes are fun, and then it just gets dumber and sloppier. The final episode was so broken that it was basically unplayable. It's a shame because it was a great Yin/Yang to slow burn corruption games like APM.

 

[nexer]

There aren't many Davids in real life. Chris's comments after dinner show a total lack of respect for both of them, not just David. I see no reason to continue to be friend with such a creature. Naivety taken to the extreme.
The only time David shows pride is on the tennis court, off it he lets everyone walk all over him?

And for Chris to have the nerve to make such comments, in his friend's house, must hold David in very low esteem. It doesn't seem to be NTR, but rather consented cuckold.

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

There aren't many Davids in real life. Chris's comments after dinner show a total lack of respect for both of them, not just David. I see no reason to continue to be friend with such a creature. Naivety taken to the extreme.
The only time David shows pride is on the tennis court, off it he lets everyone walk all over him?

And for Chris to have the nerve to make such comments, in his friend's house, must hold David in very low esteem.

Chris is not real friends with David, that’s pretty obvious, he’s doing everything he can to sabotage their marriage, constant lying to Ann about David, taking pics of him with a girl, who also is no saint by the way, how she just accepts his creepy antics and says she’ll put them in the vault. Then fake inviting himself over to dinner where he will probly slip a sleeping pill into David’s drink get Ann drunk and try to fuck her

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

Anna is obviously looking at a dick pic from Chris and can't stop thinking about it.

How do you know it’s from Chris, it could be from

 

[nexer]

Chris is not real friends with David, that’s pretty obvious, he’s doing everything he can to sabotage their marriage, constant lying to Ann about David, taking pics of him with a girl, who also is no saint by the way, how she just accepts his creepy antics and says she’ll put them in the vault. Then fake inviting himself over to dinner where he will probly slip a sleeping pill into David’s drink get Ann drunk and try to fuck her

Whatever Chris does, the question is why does David still consider him a friend? And why is he still seeing him? After that dinner, few men wouldn't kick him out of their own house, very few. A simp.

 

[Sadowdark]

see that friend Nexer is slowly detoxing from the game A Wife and Mother or is looking for a new interesting game.

 

[nexer]

see that friend Nexer is slowly detoxing from the game A Wife and Mother or is looking for a new interesting game.

Nah, just waiting for a new teaser

 

[Sadowdark]

Whatever Chris does, the question is why does David still consider him a friend? And why is he still seeing him? After that dinner, few men wouldn't kick him out of their own house, very few. A simp.

Because David is a naive idiot who doesn't realize that he has a fox in the henhouse. Chris wanted to fuck Anna when David introduced Anna to Chris on a date. He needs help to save this marriage the first time. And the second time he won't stand a chance

 

[L0b0ts]

Whatever Chris does, the question is why does David still consider him a friend? And why is he still seeing him? After that dinner, few men wouldn't kick him out of their own house, very few. A simp.

They are long time buddies, so having a go at each other is normal, and David has the catch and rubs it in Chris's nose, as he has the bragging rights. David thinks it's over he won, but Chris has other ideas. Where did David go when he got booted from the house? David trusts Chris.
Anna likes the attention from Chris, so far Chris has been playing his cards very well as David has no clue he is going after Anna.
It's a way better storyline than the movie unfaithfull with Richard Gere, that movie doesn't work for me.

 

[nexer]

They are long time buddies, so having a go at each other is normal, and David has the catch and rubs it in Chris's nose, as he has the bragging rights. David thinks it's over he won, but Chris has other ideas. Where did David go when he got booted from the house? David trusts Chris.
Anna likes the attention from Chris, so far Chris has been playing his cards very well as David has no clue he is going after Anna.
It's a way better storyline than the movie unfaithfull with Richard Gere, that movie doesn't work for me.

Yeah, but doesn't David wonder, if Chris talks to my wife like that in front of me, what happens when I'm not present? Besides, David knows Chris is texting with Anna. Doesn't David wonder how Chris ended up talking to Anna like that? How did he get so bold?
Ok, Chris makes crude jokes when David and Chris are alone, but in Anna's presence, since when?
The plot is well thought out, no doubt, meaning that David, will end up accepting some of Anna's fucks.

 

[Mr_Palmer]

They are long time buddies, so having a go at each other is normal, and David has the catch and rubs it in Chris's nose, as he has the bragging rights. David thinks it's over he won, but Chris has other ideas. Where did David go when he got booted from the house? David trusts Chris.
Anna likes the attention from Chris, so far Chris has been playing his cards very well as David has no clue he is going after Anna.
It's a way better storyline than the movie unfaithfull with Richard Gere, that movie doesn't work for me.

Well said.

As far as David knows, Anna doesn’t care for Chris. Sure they’ve gotten on good terms and are friendly towards each other now, but David is clueless to all the texting Chris has done behind the scenes to reel Anna in.

David knows Chris is a pussy hound, and he knows Chris has an attraction towards Anna, but a) he doesn’t think Chris would ever actually pursue her because of their close friendship, and b) even if he did, David believes Anna would never go for it. For these two reasons, David is oblivious to what’s truly happening.

He 100% would not ever be okay with what’s going on between Anna and Chris.

 

[nexer]

OK, Anna is, in David's opinion, an impregnable fortress. He, David, is a loving husband, married to a very beautiful woman. And yet, how easily he fell at the first opportunity.
I believe that one who cheats will think his/her spouse can do it too, he'll always have his radar on. Only the one who doesn't cheat will think that the spouse doesn't either.
You can't work as a bartender, a job without direct involvement, in a brothel and have a good opinion of women at the same time.

I'm not criticizing the game, ... I didn't finish it either, but the discussion after dinner was hard for me to digest. One who laughs at you, right in front of your wife, with a clear intent to humiliate you .... drunk or not .... will sleeping in a dumpster, for sure.

 

[hzjujk]

OK, Anna is, in David's opinion, an impregnable fortress. He, David, is a loving husband, married to a very beautiful woman. And yet, how easily he fell at the first opportunity.
I believe that one who cheats will think his/her spouse can do it too, he'll always have his radar on. Only the one who doesn't cheat will think that the spouse doesn't either.
You can't work as a bartender, a job without direct involvement, in a brothel and have a good opinion of women at the same time.

I'm not criticizing the game, ... I didn't finish it either, but the discussion after dinner was hard for me to digest. One who laughs at you, right in front of your wife, with a clear intent to humiliate you .... drunk or not .... will sleeping in a dumpster, for sure.

In the end, David was written like this by the developer. Everything that Mr Palmer writes about the character of David and his motives simply creates the feeling of being invented afterwards.
The fact that David has the smallest dick of all the other characters in this tail is already a mark of his original role in this game. That alone marks him out as a loser for many players.
One thing should not be forgotten: Anna is the actual main protagonist in this game. David, although just as much a victim in this intrigue, is only a minor character.
And the fact that he is also a victim of the intrigue makes it so difficult for Mr Palmer to credibly tell David's journey in my opinion. Because he is neither responsible for this intrigue (you can even play completely loyal to David), nor is he a total asshole, nor does he have any kind of chuck fetish, he's not a complete idiot, he's just a somewhat nerdy guy who's a bit overwhelmed with family and work at the moment is.
And I think these are the reasons why some people are so annoyed by the portrayal of this character and simply cannot emotionally understand certain situations.
I think it was never intended for David to receive any sort of justice or find redemption in the end, that's clear in that dinner scene with Chris.
NTR is the driving force in this game and usually the narrator tries to enhance the whole thing by humiliating one or both characters. You should keep this in mind when you get involved in this game.
Narratively it's like in many games here on f95, there are a lot of contradictions and harrassments in the story, you shouldn't take the whole thing too seriously. However, I believe that David's position in this game is special, but his ending will be the same as in all other games, and Mr Palmer won't be able or willing to change that.

 

[.N6]

Sunny Day "Fan Art"

 

[Chaosguy]

I see David as a Beta in this story. Beta's are usually meek and passive. Especially in front of a Alpha.

 

[nexer]

In the end, David was written like this by the developer. Everything that Mr Palmer writes about the character of David and his motives simply creates the feeling of being invented afterwards.
The fact that David has the smallest tail of all the other characters in this tail is already a mark of his original role in this game. That alone marks him out as a loser for many players.
One thing should not be forgotten: Anna is the actual main protagonist in this game. David, although just as much a victim in this intrigue, is only a minor character.
And the fact that he is also a victim of the intrigue makes it so difficult for Mr Palmer to credibly tell David's journey in my opinion. Because he is neither responsible for this intrigue (you can even play completely loyal to David), nor is he a total asshole, nor does he have any kind of chuck fetish, he's not a complete idiot, he's just a somewhat nerdy guy who's a bit overwhelmed with family and work at the moment is.
And I think these are the reasons why some people are so annoyed by the portrayal of this character and simply cannot emotionally understand certain situations.
I think it was never intended for David to receive any sort of justice or find redemption in the end, that's clear in that dinner scene with Chris.
NTR is the driving force in this game and usually the narrator tries to enhance the whole thing by humiliating one or both characters. You should keep this in mind when you get involved in this game.
Narratively it's like in many games here on f95, there are a lot of contradictions and harrassments in the story, you shouldn't take the whole thing too seriously. However, I believe that David's position in this game is special, but his ending will be the same as in all other games, and Mr Palmer won't be able or willing to change that.

I agree with everything you said. What surprises me is how David is crushed in each of the scenes. And I haven't finished the game yet If the trend continues, David's fate is decided.
I wonder if he will act like a good boy until the end or rebel.

 

[hzjujk]

I agree with everything you said. What surprises me is how David is crushed in each of the scenes. And I haven't finished the game yet If the trend continues, David's fate is decided.
I wonder if he will act like a good boy until the end or rebel.

Rebel against whom or what? He is not in that position and, as far as MR Palmer has developed the story and "drawn" the character so far, he never will be.
What should such a rebellion look like? By disowning Anna and getting a divorce?
At the end, when Anna has fucked her way across half the city, she will still be able to claim in family court that she is just as much a victim of the scheme as David. And she's right and every judge will see it that way. This means that Anna not only retains custody but, when David is already the sole owner of his father's company, she also receives a considerable sum from the "joint" family property. And since they have a daughter, David won't fight back. (This is how his character is written.)
Now some will say - then play the faithful route!
I can only reply that the game is an NTR game, this is the main fetish - Why should I play the faithful route?
And even on the faithful route, the player knows that Anna isn't being honest with David. Because as MR Palmer himself wrote, there is the sexual essence in Anna that is only hidden by the thin layer of propriety.
Rebellion - fucked!

 

[stiltoboglovian412]

I see David as a Beta in this story. Beta's are usually meek and passive. Especially in front of a Alpha.

Very immature and shallow perspective, but fair enough.

 

[Couto25]

Ok...we are now in part 3 ...and I think we can stop discussing about David character...the whole point of the story is about cheating wife..so we finally made to that point after 2 years lol so kick david aside lol...I just wanna know when ana will get fucked because eventually she will. And most important question is by whom ..if she is going to be fucked by all other characters of the story then focus on how with other characters with hardcore tease scenes and environment including sex and with more playble options to corrupt ana . I think there should be no point to why ana did that..or why david did that...it's a story of cheating wife not a romantic story.

I will comment on "poor David" side once ana will be fucked by everyone else. I did requested developer previously to have some options for david too so that both can cheat on each other but i think he added more options for Ana including BBC gym guy later on.